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1、書面表達(dá) 開(kāi)放類精選大題1.【2019屆黑龍江省牡丹江市第一高級(jí)中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期開(kāi)學(xué)摸底考試】假如你是李華，你的父母最近計(jì)劃生第二胎。給你校的外籍老師Lucy寫信談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要求：字?jǐn)?shù)120左右；參考詞匯：sibling 兄弟姐妹。Dear Lucy,I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Lucy,I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made. They plan to give bi

2、rth to a second child. How exciting it is!Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health. However, things will change from now on. I am going to have a sibling to play with and share everything with. I will help my parents lo

3、ok after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.However, I am afraid that I know little about how to take good care of a baby and how to set a good example to my future sibling. Could you give me some advice? I am looking forward to y

4、our early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一封書信：你的父母最近計(jì)劃生第二胎。給你校的外籍老師Lucy寫信談?wù)勀愕目捶ā５?步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：sibling（兄弟姐妹）；give birth to a second child（生二胎）；psychological health（心理健康）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本文是一

5、封書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。文中使用高級(jí)句子如：“I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made.”使用定語(yǔ)從句；“How exciting it is!”運(yùn)用感嘆句；“Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health.”現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做

6、原因狀語(yǔ)，同時(shí)使用“which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；“I will help my parents look after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.”現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)。2.【重慶市第一中學(xué)2018屆高三下學(xué)期第一次月考】假定你是李華，你們學(xué)校下周將舉辦一場(chǎng)以“關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物”為主題的宣傳活動(dòng)，學(xué)生自己設(shè)計(jì)海報(bào)并展覽。你的朋友Lisa對(duì)此很感興趣，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1. 時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)；2. 活動(dòng)

7、內(nèi)容。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【答案】Dear Lisa, Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you. It is probably clear that animals are our friends, sharing the same blue planet with us. The activity

8、aimed at protecting animals is scheduled to be held in April in our school. At that time, it must be a time for you to enjoy yourself to the fullest. At that time, a wide range of splendid activities will be held, thus catching your eyes. Wed like our students to design their own posters and exhibit

9、 them, thus arousing students awareness of animals protection. I would appreciate it if you could come to the scene in person. You are highly welcome to our school. A prompt reply is much favored. Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文的話題“關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物”，只有部分的文字提示，所以給考生自由發(fā)揮的空間較大，對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高。因此要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。要弄清題意，確定文章

10、的主題，并圍繞中心思想組織材料。接著要認(rèn)真構(gòu)思，列出簡(jiǎn)單的提綱，安排好層次段落，鋪設(shè)好過(guò)渡，處理好開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，最后擴(kuò)展成文。擴(kuò)展成文時(shí)要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)，句式要靈活多變，同時(shí)也要選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，把各個(gè)部分連成一個(gè)完整的整體。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)完成，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，輔以省略句，非謂語(yǔ)，同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了常用句式“I would appreciate it if”，句式較為靈活。句中既有主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，又有大量的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，相互襯托，豐富了表達(dá)形式，從而增加文章的可讀性。高檔詞匯和詞組，如“ be aimed at; be scheduled to; a wide range of splendid activ

11、ities; to the fullest; catch your eyes; arouse students awareness of” 等增加了文章亮點(diǎn)。本文第一段用一個(gè)非謂語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)的省略句式：“Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you.”既簡(jiǎn)潔又具體地點(diǎn)明了文章的話題“Animals Protection”。第二段中運(yùn)用了名詞性從句“It is

12、probably clear that animals are our friends, sharing the same blue planet with us.”?！皌hus catching your eyes.”和“thus arousing students awareness of animals protection.”運(yùn)用了兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞 -ing形式的非謂語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，充分展示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了一個(gè)常用句式“I would appreciate it if. “(I would appreciate it if you could come to the scene i

13、n person. ）。模擬精做1. 【成都外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校2018-2019學(xué)年上學(xué)期開(kāi)學(xué)考試】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Michael對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣。他聽(tīng)說(shuō)中國(guó)人很重視家風(fēng)傳承，在給你的電子郵件中提出想了解你家的家風(fēng)以及家風(fēng)對(duì)你的影響。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封信。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：家風(fēng) family spiritDear Michael,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Michael, How is everything going? Im glad to know that you are interested in Chinese

14、 culture and that you want to know something about my family spirits. Actually, many good family spirits have been passed down from generation to generation in my family. My grandparents and parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence and most import

15、antly, they have set good examples to me. My family spirits have a profound influence on me, and thus I always follow what they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer a helping hand when others are in need. Besides, I am all the time positive and never stop chasing my goal when

16、ever I run into difficulties. Thanks to those good family spirits, both my life and study run smooth. I hope you will be satisfied with my introduction. By the way, I sincerely invite you to come to China and stay in my home for some time to experience more Chinese culture by yourself. You are warml

17、y welcome. Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇書信類作文。你的美國(guó)朋友Peter對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣。他聽(tīng)說(shuō)中國(guó)人很重視家風(fēng)傳承，在給你的電子郵件中提出想了解你家的家風(fēng)以及家風(fēng)對(duì)你的影響，要求你給他回復(fù)一封信。結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況寫出你家的家風(fēng)以及家風(fēng)對(duì)你的影響。文章要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要，目標(biāo)明確，具有合理性。并對(duì)自己的看法進(jìn)行總結(jié)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文第一段開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山地說(shuō)出“Im glad to know that you are interested in.”。第二段闡明了自己的家風(fēng)，以被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)句式很好地作了開(kāi)頭：“have been passed down”；第三段講到了家風(fēng)對(duì)自己的影響運(yùn)

18、用了賓語(yǔ)從句：“thus I always follow what they have taught me”，同時(shí)也恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句：“I am all the time positive and never stop chasing my goal whenever I run into difficulties.”。 本文中還運(yùn)用了許多連詞如“Beside; By the way”使文章條理清晰。同時(shí)還使用了一些固定短語(yǔ)如“passed down from generation to generation”，“l(fā)ay emphasis on”，“most importantly, se

19、t good examples to”，“have a profound influence on me”等，給文章增添了魅力及可讀性?？傊?，本文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，布局合理，簡(jiǎn)明扼要。文中使用了多種句式，如賓語(yǔ)從句的使用，并用恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了固定句式，增加了文章亮點(diǎn)。2.【2019屆湖北省仙桃中學(xué)高三8月考試】假如你是李華，你校外教Mr. Brown春節(jié)期間看到鄰居房門上的福字是倒著貼的，感到很好奇，寫信向你詢問(wèn)此事。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信，介紹福字倒貼的原因和這一傳統(tǒng)的寓意，同時(shí)邀請(qǐng)他高考后來(lái)你家過(guò)端午節(jié)。參考詞匯：端午節(jié)the Dragon Boat Festival；福字the character Fu注

20、意：1.詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter._Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down durin

21、g the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside down” sounds the same as the character for “to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isnt it?By the way, Id like to invite you to celebrate the Drag

22、on Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. Its a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we usually eatzongziand enjoy dragon boat races. Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本題文體是說(shuō)明文。話題是向

23、你的外教Mr.Brown介紹福字倒貼的原因和這一傳統(tǒng)的寓意，同時(shí)邀請(qǐng)他在高考后來(lái)你家過(guò)端午節(jié)。寫作要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)確表述。文中使用了由“as”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句“As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival.”和運(yùn)用了“that”引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句“this means that happiness is arriving.”以及反意疑問(wèn)句“Quite interesting, isnt it?”還運(yùn)用了用“it”作形式主語(yǔ)的句子“Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.”。另外，較高級(jí)詞匯有如“the same as”，“by the way”，“in memory of”，“l(fā)ook forward to”也為文章增色不少。7