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1、就高考英語作文續(xù)寫來說,如何寫,是很多教師一直在探討和研究的話題,也是學生倍感難度的高考題型,以2018年浙江卷高考真題讀后續(xù)寫為例,分享一個議論文讀后續(xù)寫技巧,即:給出問題-結果-解決問題-議論文跨越式的寫法,也可是PRS=Problem-Result-Solved模式,即: 讀后續(xù)寫構架圖是:問題是什么-造成了什么結果-最終是怎樣解決的。,記敘文,也是按照這個寫作思路,能起到化難為易,思考問題是什么,造成什么樣的結果,思考人物的心理及行為變化;動物的行為變化;周圍環(huán)境的變化;人與自我與他人與自然的關系及言語等等, 如何用英語語言(包括使用按照原題要求所給的5個以上的關鍵詞造句)、詞語表達出
2、來,從逐句造句到最終形成續(xù)寫的語篇,而且是連貫的符合邏輯順序的續(xù)寫語篇。 請看今年2018年浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫:,所標注的關鍵詞語是: dad,Uncle Paul, farm house, river , feed, sheep, late, track, get lost, sight 兩段開頭語分別是: Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._ Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark._ ,Parag
3、raph 1 提出問題: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 問題結果: Instinctively, I yelled out loud,puuling on the reins(韁繩) hard in order to stop the horse. But uselessly, the horse sped off the track into another direction. 解決問題: Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to
4、 soothe (安慰; 使平靜)the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down,提出問題:but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road Paragraph 2 提出問題:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark 問題結果:Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. We got stuck in the forest
5、. 解決問題:Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together
6、with Dad and before long the farm house came into sight. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!,記敘有動作;有人與人之間的關系;人與自然的關系;人與動物的關系;人的心理描寫,擺出問題-問題造成的結果-如何解決的問題,按照這樣的思路,形成語篇脈絡等等躍然紙上,一篇續(xù)寫作文就這樣完成了。,Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumpe
7、d out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud,pulling on the reins hard in order to stop the horse. But uselessly, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the
8、 horse calmed down,but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. We got stuck in the forest. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and d
9、rove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long the farm house came into sight. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper.What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!,