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1、走向高考英語,第一部分,微專題強(qiáng)化練,七書面表達(dá),第一部分,3(半)開放式作文,考向分析,考題引路,強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練,2,3,1,Writing1(2014福建)如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文?！癝uccessistheabilitytogofromonefailuretoanotherwithnolossofenthusiasm.”SirWinston，Churchill,內(nèi)容要求：1你對該引語的理解；2你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；3恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；3詞數(shù)：120左右。,Th

2、isquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthat_立意與點(diǎn)撥：,答案：ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthatweshouldntgetdiscouragedrightafterfailures.Rather，weshouldkeeptryingwithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.,Attheageoftwelve，Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.SoexcitedwasI

3、thatIcouldntwaittotrymyhandatridingit.However，itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill，Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhenmyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Withmorepractice，Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback，IfeelhadIlostheartIwouldntbeabletorideabik

4、e.Actually，wecantsucceedineverythingwetry.Whatsimportantisthatweshouldstickatit.,Writing2(2015浙江)在班級活動(dòng)中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時(shí)，你是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見？請你以“WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion”為題，用英語寫一篇100120個(gè)詞的短文。要求如下：1從以上兩種做法中選擇一種；2以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。,WhenIHaveaDifferentO

5、pinion_,立意與點(diǎn)撥：,答案：Onepossiblestudentversion：WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.WhenIhaveabetteridea，Iwouldchoosetosticktoit.Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmyselfclearly.,Oncew

6、ewerediscussingwheretogoforanouting.MostofmyclassmateswantedtogotoaparkwhileIhadanideaofgoingtoanicerplace.Imanagedtopersuademyclassmatesintoacceptingmyidea.Wedidhaveagoodtimethatday.Goodopinionsareworthstickingtobecausetheycanbenefitusall.,Analternativestudentversion：WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWemay

7、havedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.WhenIhaveadifferentopinion,Imaychoosetogiveitupandrespecttheopinionofthemajority.,Themainreasonformychoiceisthatbeingbroughtupinacultureemphasizingcollectivism,Itendtosacrificemyowninterestforthegroupbenefit.Oncewewerelefttodecidewhethertohaveapicnici

8、naparkorgotoamuseum.Iwouldlovetogotoamuseum,butmostofmyclassmateswantedtogoforapicnic.Withouthesitation,Idecidedtofollowthemandwedidhavelotsoffunthatday.Sometimesgivingupalittlecanmeangettingmore.,審題急促，主次不分根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。(1)眼睛是心靈的窗口。(2)學(xué)會如何保護(hù)眼睛。_易錯(cuò)分析：學(xué)生由于急于答題，所以往往審題不認(rèn)真，極易把寫作重點(diǎn)放在眼睛的重要性上。,答案：

9、Peopleoftensay,“Eyesarethewindowsofsoul”.Allofusunderstandtheimportanceoftheeyes.Buthowtoprotecteyesightstillremainsaquestionamongusstudents.Ifyouwanttotakecareofyoureyesight,youmustpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.Firstly,youshouldnotuseyoureyescontinuouslyforlongperiods.Afteryouhavereadforalongtim

10、e,abouttwohoursorso,youtakearestbylookingatsomethingmoredistant.Secondly,youshouldkeepyourbookaboutafootawayfromyoureyeswhenyoureadit.,Youshouldalsokeepinmind:“Dontreadinadimlightorinthesun;dontreadinamovingbusorinbed.”Doingeyeexercisesregularlywillhelpyoukeepgoodeyesight.Ifyoufailtokeeptheserules,youwillbecomeshortsightedsoonerorlater.,解析：從題目的要求看，本篇作文要求寫成說明文。重點(diǎn)要放在如何保護(hù)眼睛上。例如：不要看書時(shí)間太長，眼睛與書的距離要適當(dāng)，走路坐車時(shí)不要看書，要常做眼保健操等。如何保護(hù)眼睛這個(gè)問題比較好寫，因?yàn)榭忌羞@方面的知識和體驗(yàn)。開放式作文的答題思路與漢語作文非常相像。首先要明確主題，然后根據(jù)主題搭建文章的主體結(jié)構(gòu)，即寫作提綱，接著進(jìn)行文章血肉的填充。在擬寫作提綱時(shí)，要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么，要層次分明。,