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1、In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, and then we are still a good fellow. Chairman Maos words,高考短文改錯(cuò)解題方略,Contents,高考短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)試策略及答題原則,高考短文改錯(cuò)命題特征及命題趨勢(shì),短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,高考短文改錯(cuò)真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練,本題滿分10分，給出一篇約100個(gè)單詞的短文，文中有10處錯(cuò)誤，要求考生對(duì)每個(gè)句子進(jìn)行判斷，如有錯(cuò)誤即將其改正。錯(cuò)誤類型包括詞法、句法、行文邏輯等方面的錯(cuò)誤。,注意答題說(shuō)明及答題規(guī)

2、范,Introduction,文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加 （1-2個(gè)） 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。 刪除 （1-2個(gè)） 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。不計(jì)分。 修改 （6-8個(gè)） 在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。 注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。 2、只允許修改10處，多者（叢第11處起）不計(jì)分。,注意答題說(shuō)明及答題規(guī)范,縱觀近年高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)題，學(xué)生和老師都認(rèn)為難度不大，然而，每年高考中還是有不少考生對(duì)此題深感頭痛，主要原因是： 考生的英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)不扎實(shí). 考生缺乏對(duì)短文改錯(cuò)命題

3、特點(diǎn)的了解和做題規(guī)律方法的總結(jié).,Problems,動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù) 還要注意形和副 非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)辨別 介詞短語(yǔ)要牢記,代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟 句子成分多分析 冠詞連詞常光顧 邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注,A Limerick,錯(cuò)誤主要集中在動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)，主謂一致等方面。,【2014遼寧卷】 This morning she starts barking even before 5 o clock. 【2014 浙江卷】 Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets.,started,came,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,動(dòng)詞形,【2012全國(guó)

4、課標(biāo)卷】 When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy again, my father said, “Thats it. No more toys for you.” 【2013四川卷】 Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir form my past life and my only friend.,tore,are,解決方案 (1) 通讀全文，搞清文中動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的主旋律 . (2) 結(jié)合語(yǔ)境，靈活運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)形式 . (3) 認(rèn)真推敲，準(zhǔn)確把握主動(dòng)與被動(dòng) .,【2014全國(guó)課標(biāo)

5、卷】 Since thenfor all these yearwe have been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. 【2014遼寧卷】 We have called several time about Cleos early barking.,times,years,名詞愛考數(shù)與格，也要分清可不可,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,名詞數(shù),【2013新課標(biāo)1卷】 He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black to gray over t

6、he years. 【 2013新課標(biāo)2卷】 When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. 【2013遼寧卷】 I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together.,pictures,shoulders,cups,1. 修飾名詞用形容詞； 2. 修飾動(dòng)詞，形容詞，副詞及整個(gè)句子時(shí)用副詞； 3. 比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的使用。,【2014

7、全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷】 The fruit are small in size, but juicy and taste. 【2014全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷】 We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.,wonderful,tasty,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,還要注意形和副,【2012陜西卷】 We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. 【2012全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷】 I learned in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressi

8、ve.,comfortable,less,【2014遼寧卷】 We are hoping to settle something that bothers to us. 【2014浙江卷】 Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quite and calm.,主要錯(cuò)誤為三種：非謂語(yǔ)的混淆；不定式to的遺漏或多用；非謂語(yǔ)與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的混淆。,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)辨別,try,【2013陜西卷】 Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the f

9、ish. 【2013四川卷】 Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers.,Feeling,asked,解決方案 (1) 縱觀全文或全句，明確句中動(dòng)詞所作的句子成分. (2)系統(tǒng)掌握非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的句法功能. (3) 前后聯(lián)系，整體把握 .,in the need such many people in hurry in a short in Sunday afternoon,a,on,so,介詞多半考搭配,多、漏、誤用想周到,介詞、短語(yǔ)要牢記,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,【2014全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷】 A

10、s result, the plants are growing everywhere. 【2014遼寧卷】 But we do hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter. 【2014四川卷】 Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.,a,out,about,【2013新課標(biāo)1卷】 He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from bl

11、ack toward gray over the years. 【2013全國(guó)新課標(biāo)2卷】 Interestingly, it had a connection by the British Porcelain industry.,with/to,into/to,【2013遼寧卷】 Every day, he spends too much time with his work. 【2013浙江卷】 To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. 【2013遼寧卷】 Yesterda

12、y afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.,on,worse,a,解決方案 (1)平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累語(yǔ)言知識(shí)，特別是一些固定搭配的記憶 . (2)強(qiáng)化語(yǔ)法訓(xùn)練，分清連詞，副詞和介詞之間的區(qū)別和句法功能 . (3) 語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的記憶和語(yǔ)感的培養(yǎng)結(jié)合起來(lái) .,人稱代詞的性別，單復(fù)數(shù)及代詞格的誤用； 物主代詞，反身代詞以及不定代詞的誤用； “it” 一詞的不當(dāng)使用(包括用于從句中或作形式主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ))； Whose 和whos，its和its的混淆,代詞方面的錯(cuò)誤主要體現(xiàn)在：,代詞格，須領(lǐng)悟,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,I,me,we,us,you,you,y

13、ou,you,he,him,she,her,it,it,they,them,【2012陜西卷】 It is such a great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. 【2012浙江卷】 I knew they would be worried about myself because I was so far away. 【2013新課標(biāo)1卷】 He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our s

14、mall town.,me,mine,him,解決方案 (1) 順藤摸瓜，理清短文中代詞的指代關(guān)系，注意聯(lián)系上下文。 (2) 系統(tǒng)掌握it的各種用法 . (3) 準(zhǔn)確把握不定代詞在文中的正確使用。,句法涉及到一致, 從句多考引導(dǎo)詞（誤用，多用或遺漏 ）,【2014遼寧卷】 The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.,has,句子成分多分析,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,【2014年四川卷】 If you notice that when someone

15、 is missing or hurt, tell your teacher immediately. 【2012全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷】 But before long they began to see which was happening.,what,【2012 陜西卷】 What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. 【2013新課標(biāo) 2卷】 Having tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,

16、 that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.,was,which,解決方案 （1）不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類； （2）不同的語(yǔ)境要選擇不同的詞語(yǔ)。 （3）只有對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分作細(xì)致的分析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。,冠詞在前 “錯(cuò)” “多” “少”。 ?？嫉腻e(cuò)誤形式有：冠詞the, a, an 的誤用，多用或少用。,【2014遼寧卷】 Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. 【2013四川卷】 The teacher got angry because we ha

17、d same answers.,an,冠詞、連詞常光顧,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,the,連詞?？?but，and，or, so 等的邏輯錯(cuò)誤，以及搭配錯(cuò)誤。,【2014全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷】 Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.,yet/或去掉,短文改錯(cuò)典型錯(cuò)詞類型分析歸納,【2012 浙江卷】 He worked hard, but it wasnt surpris

18、ing that he pass the exam. 【2013新課標(biāo)1卷】 He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful.,and/so,and,【2013遼寧卷】 With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. 【2013浙江卷】 His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmat

19、es, my school or just everything else I love in the world.,and,【2014遼寧卷】 We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we do hope that you can figure out a good way of settling the matter. 【2014四川卷】 If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us to the classroom.,you,your,邏輯錯(cuò)誤須

20、關(guān)注,詞法句法均未錯(cuò), 邏輯推理來(lái)尋找。主要是句子之間邏輯關(guān)系的矛盾，代詞在人稱上的不一致等。,【2013新課標(biāo)1卷】 However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 【2013四川卷】 After thinking for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office.,ever,both,三步,高考短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)試策略及答題原則,通讀全文，把握大意 細(xì)讀全文，仔細(xì)斟酌 再讀全文,

21、 復(fù)核審查,六原則,以在有錯(cuò)行改動(dòng)一詞為原則. 以改變實(shí)詞形式為原則. 以單詞形式變化最小為原則. 以添加或刪除虛詞為原則. 以多“改正”少“添刪”為原則 以保持原意不變?yōu)樵瓌t,高考短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)試策略及答題原則,四不改,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改。 大小寫不改。 詞序錯(cuò)誤不改。 單詞拼寫不改。,高考短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)試策略及答題原則,My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to

22、anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful wi

23、th reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.,【2012陜西卷真題】,高考短文改錯(cuò)真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練,My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but

24、it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.,visited,so/and,comfortable,was,【2012陜西卷解析】,I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my f

25、riends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.,with,taken,dishes,a,mine,【2012陜西卷解析】,Dear Diana, Thank you for the lovely day we have

26、with you. It was so kind tor you to let us bring Annes friend. Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited t

27、here unless the road was clear. In the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.,【2012遼寧卷高考真題】,Dear Diana, Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for

28、you to let us bring Annes friend. Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.,had,of,Unfortunately,as,miles,【2012遼寧卷解析】,In the end, we drove to a service station

29、 and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.,a,until/till,we,there,【2012遼寧卷解析】,Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and

30、 I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not

31、sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.,【2012浙江卷高考真題】,高考短文改錯(cuò)真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練,Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit

32、 another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened.,ago,Unfortunately,weeks,but,【2012浙江卷解析】,I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.

33、Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.,would,me,far,interesting,the,【2012浙江卷解析】,短文改錯(cuò)打油詩(shī),短文改錯(cuò)要做好，常見類型應(yīng)記牢。 名詞愛考“數(shù)”與“格”，冠詞在前“錯(cuò)/多/少”。 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，非謂語(yǔ)搭配莫錯(cuò)了。 連代形副錯(cuò)一樣，多是故意來(lái)混淆。 介詞多半考搭配，多漏誤用想周到。 句法涉及

34、到“一致”，從句多考關(guān)系詞。 詞法句法均未錯(cuò)，邏輯推理去尋找。 “127”慣常比，回讀復(fù)查敲定稿。,改錯(cuò)方式比例： 通常一個(gè)多詞，兩個(gè)缺詞，七個(gè)錯(cuò)詞,高考書面表達(dá)解題方略,Contents,高考書面表達(dá)命題特征及評(píng)分原則,影響作文分?jǐn)?shù)之四大因素,高考作文回顧及寫作模板與句式,備考策略,考生應(yīng)能準(zhǔn)確使用語(yǔ)法和詞匯 語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個(gè)重要方面，因?yàn)樗苯踊蜷g接的影響到信息的準(zhǔn)確傳輸。應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確程度是寫作部分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的一項(xiàng)重要內(nèi)容。 使用一定的句型，詞匯，清楚連貫的表達(dá)自己的意思 任何一篇文章都有一個(gè)主體，作者應(yīng)該圍繞該主題，借助一些句型，詞匯的支持，清楚，連貫的表達(dá)意

35、思。,高考考試大綱的說(shuō)明對(duì)寫作所提的要求是：,Introduction,【評(píng)分原則】,1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定檔次。,第五檔. 2125分 第四檔. 1620分 第三檔. 1115分,第二檔. 610分 第一檔. 15分 0分,語(yǔ)意連貫且結(jié)構(gòu)完整，敘述事情或表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度清晰，語(yǔ)言地道，規(guī)范，書寫工整。,能根據(jù)用文字及圖表提供的信息寫出短文或報(bào)告，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),2、 【考綱要點(diǎn)】 ： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 詞匯和語(yǔ)法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性； 上下文的連貫； 語(yǔ)言的得體性,應(yīng)用了一定的句型和高級(jí)詞匯,段段衘接自然，全文體現(xiàn)總分總，正文層次感強(qiáng)，有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,影響給分的因素之一： 作文

36、的卷面,漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點(diǎn),Which composition feels more attractive, why?,影響給分的因素之二： 文中所采用的語(yǔ)言材料,人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝,A.詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝；,B.句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用靈活多變;,Practice,1. good 2. think 3.clever,perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent,in ones opinion/view hold the view that it is widely shared that ,

37、wise bright smart intelligent cute,使用精彩句式，增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)句表現(xiàn)力,1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. _we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! 2. Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920. It was_. 3.He never speaks about his own family. Never_. 4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water”

38、on the wall. On the wall_. 5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. _.,How glad,not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began,does he speak about his own family,is a notice saying ”Please Save Water”,Child though/as he is, he knows a lot,影響給分的因素之三： 行文的流暢,上下貫通、一氣呵成 正確而巧妙地使用好連接詞,1.表遞進(jìn) .表轉(zhuǎn)折 .表因果 .表目的 .表歸納,

39、and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.,but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite ，after all,on the contrary,on the other hand.,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently ，as a result/consequence,on account of.,in order that,so that,for the purp

40、ose of.,in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole.,表示平行、對(duì)等或選擇關(guān)系 and，bothand, as well as, together with, neithernor, also, not onlybut also, eitheror, as well. 表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系 shortly afterwards, next, finally, in the end, eventually 表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系 besides, furthermore (此外), whats more,

41、 worse still, in addition, moreover (而且), to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all 表示解釋、說(shuō)明關(guān)系 namely (也就是), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this,影響給分的因素之四： 文章錯(cuò)誤的避免,錯(cuò)誤百出，讓閱卷老師慘不忍 “讀”,Feeling

42、,Last Sunday,went shopping,fish,fruit,got home,fish,and,swept,mopped,surprised,and,felt,but,was,小結(jié)： 1. 作文的卷面； -整潔的卷面 2. 文章的語(yǔ)言； -豐富的詞匯 3. 行文的流暢； -流暢的結(jié)構(gòu) 4. 文章的準(zhǔn)確； -最少的錯(cuò)誤,整體三部分,Heading 點(diǎn)題（開門見山）；一兩個(gè)句子（一定得是好句子）；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明 3. Ending 小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題,寫作技巧與策略,書面表達(dá)如何寫？,五個(gè)步驟,1、審題,題材、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn),2、以詞及點(diǎn)：用一

43、兩個(gè)單詞或短語(yǔ)寫出每句 話的細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)。,3、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的方法將上述要點(diǎn) 的詞語(yǔ)擴(kuò)展成句子。,4 聯(lián)句成文：,注意：,主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ),背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）,邏輯關(guān)系,開頭與結(jié)尾 語(yǔ)篇銜接,5、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫,詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。,運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。,使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。,復(fù)合句（名詞從句、定語(yǔ) 從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等）,感嘆句、倒裝句,句型的使用,高分技巧,高考作文回顧,(2014年全國(guó)卷)假定你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，為期六

44、周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容） 注意：1詞數(shù)100左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3參考詞匯：住宿 accommodation,Dear Sir/ Madam, I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. Fir

45、st when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included? Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looki

46、ng forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,（2013年全國(guó)卷） 假定你是李華。請(qǐng)給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去它所在城市去開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國(guó)畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說(shuō)明： 李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡 航班號(hào)：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30分 說(shuō)明：1.詞數(shù)100左右。 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3.開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。,Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming

47、 is going to your city for a conference and Ive asked him to bring you a Chinese painting youve asked before. Also, Id like you to do me favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance! His light number is

48、 CA985 and it will arrive at 11:30 am August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,（2012年全國(guó)卷） 假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營(yíng)，歡迎各國(guó)學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。 內(nèi)容主要包括: I.自我介紹(包括英語(yǔ)能力); 2.參加意圖(介紹中國(guó)、了解其他國(guó)家); 3.希望獲準(zhǔn)

49、. 注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右: 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。,Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to ta

50、ke part in it. Ive been learning English for10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Li Hua,(201

51、1年全國(guó)卷) 假定你是李華，正在一所英國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書面預(yù)約，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信： 1本人簡(jiǎn)介： 2求助內(nèi)容； 3約定時(shí)間； 4. 你的聯(lián)系方式(Email：lihua1236 com； Phone：12345678)。 注意： 1詞數(shù)l00左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。,Dear Sir / Madam: Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Im wri

52、ting to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings

53、 and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua ; 12345678. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Lihua,(2010年全國(guó)卷) 假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽（speech contest），希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith女士來(lái)做評(píng)委。請(qǐng)參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。

54、英語(yǔ)演講比賽主題：人與自然 時(shí)間：6月15日下午2：005：00 地點(diǎn)：501教室 參賽選手：10名學(xué)生 聯(lián)系人：李華（電話44876655） 歡迎大家光臨 注意：詞數(shù)100左右。,Dear Ms. Smith, Im Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on

55、 June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 448876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes! Li Hua,寫作模板及句式,請(qǐng)參見Word 部分,