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1、留學(xué)申請書范文：抒寫親情留學(xué)申請書范文：抒寫親情 引引起招生官共鳴起招生官共鳴【精彩范文】Washington Seattle UniversityDiscuss how your familys experience or cultural history enriched you or presented you with opportunities or challenges in pursuing your educational goals.When I stood on the stage of the Christmas Concert and heard the music b

2、ecome stronger and stronger,I began to think about my grandfather.Pieces of his life flashed before my eyes;his words echoed in my ears.Almost unconsciously,the lyrics came out of my mouth.You raise me up,so I can stand on mountains;You raise me up,to walk on stormy seas;I am strong,when I am on you

3、r shoulders;You raise me up to more than I can be.My grandfather is a great man.He grew up in a peasant family but somehow he managed to attend the top university at that time.He managed to live a comfortable life in Hong Kong but he gave it up for the mainland China because it was then in need of t

4、alented professionals like my grandfather.Without hesitation,he moved to China and devoted himself to scientific research and teaching.I often asked him whether he regretted that decision to leave Hong Kong,but my grandfather always smiles and says that it always feels good when you can sacrifice fo

5、r those you love and those you care for.When grandfather was at the age of 55，he suffered from hemiplegia and he could not move his right side of the body.Doctors told him to stop working and focus on his rehabilitation treatment.However,my grandfatherdetermined and focused as he was,refused to leav

6、e his research unfinished.It is hard to imagine what it might have felt like to bear such great pain and difficulty in daily life,but also continuing to do research in such pain is really inspiring.My grandfather s passion for his work made him overcome all the difficulties;he could not write with h

7、is right hand thus he learned to write with the left one.In order to give lectures to his students,he would stand up even after countless falls,and begin to walk again even if it hurt.This is what my grandfather is like,a person with a weak body but a strong heart.When I am down and,my soul,so weary

8、;When troubles come and my heart burdened be;Then,I am still and wait here in the silence,Until you come and sit awhile with me.When I went to study in the United States,I became foreigner in a strange country.There were times of loneliness,discouragement and frustration,but whenever I felt weak and

9、 upset I would hear my grandfather，s voice and remember his persistence in everything he does,even while he was ill.Then suddenly his unyielding character would encourage me to bravely move on no matter what I might be confronted grandfather raised me up and I feel lucky to have him as my teacher wh

10、o will always be in my heart,to be strong on his shoulders.Because of his love and inspiration,I am determined and ready to go to college in the United States and not fear the feelings of loneliness or discouragement because I know I can overcome all the difficulties in the world,just like grandfath

11、er.【我的祖父】站在圣誕音樂會的舞臺上，聽著伴奏漸強(qiáng)，我便開始想念我的祖父。他生活中的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴浮現(xiàn)在我的眼前，他曾經(jīng)的言語飄入耳畔。幾乎是下意識地，我就開口唱出了這段歌詞：你鼓舞了我，讓我能站在山峰之巔 你激勵了我，讓我能闖過狂風(fēng)暴雨 站在你的肩上，我更加堅強(qiáng)你養(yǎng)育了我，讓我屹立世間祖父在我心中是個偉大的形象。他生于農(nóng)民家庭，但卻努力考上當(dāng)時國內(nèi)一流的大學(xué)。他曾在香港過著富足的生活，但內(nèi)地需要專家學(xué)者時，他卻為祖國 放棄了安逸。他毫不猶豫地回到家中，一心撲在 科研教學(xué)上。我經(jīng)常問他，當(dāng)時離開香港，有沒有遺憾。但祖父總是一笑帶過，告訴我：如果能為自己愛的人、自己關(guān)心的人奉獻(xiàn)終生，也不失為一件幸

12、福的事。祖父55歲那年不幸偏癱，身體右側(cè)不再受支配。醫(yī)生讓他別再工作了，專心養(yǎng)病。然而，專心固執(zhí) 的祖父卻不肯撇下自己未完成的研究。在生活中忍受這樣的疼痛和艱難真的難以想象，而在此情況下還繼續(xù)工作，真的讓人感到敬佩。祖父憑著對工作的熱情，戰(zhàn)勝 了一切困難：因?yàn)椴荒苡糜沂謱懽郑_ 始學(xué)習(xí)使用左手。為了給學(xué)生們上課，他幾次倒下后都再次站起來，即便很痛還是堅持走到課堂。這就是我的祖父，縱然身體虛弱，但內(nèi)心十分強(qiáng)大。當(dāng)我失落時，我的靈魂感到疲倦 麻煩來襲時，我的內(nèi)心愈發(fā)沉重 但我仍舊在此，安靜等待直到你來，和我坐在一起來美國學(xué)習(xí)后，我成了這個陌生國度中的異域人。有時候，我會覺得孤單失落，覺得挫敗。但

13、每次 不開心時，我就會想起祖父的聲音，想到他對自己工作的堅持，在生病的時候仍然不放棄。祖父不屈不撓的品質(zhì)會給我鼓舞，讓我不管遇到任何困難都勇敢前行。祖 父撫養(yǎng)我長大，他亦師亦友，他給了我可 以依賴的肩膀，我真的倍感幸運(yùn)。因?yàn)樗膼酆凸奈?，我更加堅定了去美國念書的決心，更加勇敢，不怕孤獨(dú)挫敗，因?yàn)槲抑?，我像祖父一樣，能夠克服世界?的一切困難。【佳文精評】寫自己的祖先永遠(yuǎn)是個好題材。我們?nèi)巳硕紩淖约旱母改?、祖父母那里繼承各種各樣的特 征。而這個女學(xué)生的精神榜樣是她的祖父，一個歸國學(xué)者。他的堅毅和愛國之心，鼓舞著她在異國他鄉(xiāng)努力奮斗。這篇文章小巧，睿智，讀著很親切。思想簡單流 暢，難得的優(yōu)秀文章。這類文章也 很容易博得招生官的共鳴。