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1、十年（2010~2020）高考英語真題分項詳解34 書面表達·概要寫作 1.（2019年9月，浙江高考） 閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。 Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.

2、” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on to

3、p where their parents’ praise has put them. Still, don’t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishm

4、ents. So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recogni

5、ze our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters.” Your son may not be the best bas

6、ketball player on his team. But if he’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a b

7、ook report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相稱的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

8、__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. (要點一) Yet, both too much and

9、too little praise can be equally damaging. (要點二) When giving praise, parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. (要點三) Similarly, they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they’re involved in. (要點四) 【解析】本次浙江高考書面表達采用了概要寫作題型

10、。概要寫作是閱讀理解和書面表達的溝通橋梁，考查的是學生在實現自由的思維表達之前，對他人的信息在理解的基礎上進行概括表達的能力。選材上，提供一篇350詞以內的短文，題材不限，要求考生寫出一篇60詞左右的內容概要。 【詳解】 完成一篇概要寫作，需要經過三個步驟， 1. 讀懂原文，抓住段落主題句。在閱讀過程中，需要準確把握文章的段落大意，學會剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同體裁的文章的內部邏輯關系以及文章的篇章結構。 2. 組織語言，轉換表達。在找到主題句明確全文中心的基礎上，組織好語言，注重語言表達的獨立性和準確性以及高級性，不全盤照抄原文句子，盡量用自己的語言轉換表達，同時要注意篇幅的比例安排

11、，用較多的文字去表達重要的內容。 3. 通讀全文，邏輯連貫。要牢記各段落要點之間的邏輯關系和自然銜接，用恰當的關聯(lián)詞去連貫全文。 2.（2018年11月，浙江高考） 閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。 It’s a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be li

12、ke to live on a college campus(校園) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to h

13、appen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one. There’s no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applicat

14、ions even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that won’t be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out! If campus visits aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting

15、 your acceptance letters to visit the schools you’d like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don’t like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn’t know unless you actually visit. Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out

16、the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It’s a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顧問), and it won’t cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at . While visiting an online college fair can’t take the place of an actual campus v

17、isit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you’d like to attend. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

18、__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 It’s really worthwhile to pay a visit to t

19、heir desired colleges personally before applying. Undoubtedly, students should visit their local colleges, which may be included in applications. At least, they should visit the school and figure out its real conditions in advance. For students who are short of money and time, registering for the on

20、line college fair is a good alternative to help them better understand schools. 【解析】本文要求閱讀短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要，即用盡可能少的詞匯集中展現原材料的主要思想和觀點。這主要是考查學生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及總結概括能力，熟練掌握從句、非謂語動詞等語法知識和遣詞造句的能力。 【詳解】 1. 要先讀懂、讀透原作。這是準確再現原文、寫好概要的前提。動筆前多讀兩遍原文，直至弄懂讀透。 2. 抓住文中的關鍵句，確定寫作主題。開頭It's a really good idea t

21、o visit colleges before you apply點明了本文主題；But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one. There’s no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area.說明了去大學看看的必要性和可行性；If campus visits

22、aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you’d like to attend.在時間上提供了更多選擇；if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive.為不能親自

23、去大學看的學生提供了另外一種方法。 3.擬好提綱。有了提綱，寫概要時就會有章法，也不會遺漏原作中的要點。 4.快速成文，反復推敲。按照文章要求和擬好的提綱一氣呵成，寫完初稿。 5.對照修改潤色，再讀原文，查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要內容。用詞是否恰當，可有可無的刪掉。注意詞類、時態(tài)、語態(tài)的適當調整。 【點睛】 范文觀點明確，重點突出，語言簡練，詞數適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如定語從句which may be included in applications.和who are short of money and time.動名詞registering online作主

24、語，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。 附：浙江省名校新高考研究聯(lián)盟2020屆第一次聯(lián)考 閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇 60 詞左右的內容概要。 Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today’s stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔隊)camp outs

25、ide their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小報) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature. According to the psychologists, celebrities(名人)worry constantly about their public appearance. E

26、ventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. Over time, they feel separated and alone. The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century B C,

27、painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran ar

28、ticles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do. Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something

29、ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their "story" alive forever. If fame is so troublesome, why aren't all celebrities running away from it? The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted f

30、riends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place. With these effective approaches, some celebrities relieve the stress and remain popular with fans. Consequently,

31、though being famous is driving some stars crazy, some wise ones enjoy what reputation brings them. 【寫作指導】 本文為說明文。文章告訴我們，雖然成名聽起來像是夢想成真，但今天的明星們，感覺自己就像動物園里的動物，面臨著我們很少人能想象的壓力，因為他們是世界關注的焦點。名人經常擔心他們的公開露面，隨著時間的推移，他們感到分離和孤獨。追蹤名人的現象由來已久，然而如今成為公眾人物比過去困難得多。超級明星的一舉一動都離不開現代相機攝影師的關注。如果名聲是如此的麻煩，為什么不是所有的名人都在逃避它呢?

32、答案是，仍然有辦法解決這個問題。因此，雖然成名會讓一些明星發(fā)瘋，但一些明智的人卻享受聲譽帶給他們的東西。 文章中的主題詞（句）依次為： 第一段：face pressures /at the center of much of the world's attention. 第二段：worry constantly about their public appearance /feel separated and alone 第三段：The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages / the same way

33、 that modern tabloids and websites do 第四段：Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. 第五段：there are still ways to deal with it /some wise ones enjoy what reputation brings them 【參考范文】 Living in the public gaze, stars suffer from great pressure.（要點 1）What’s

34、worse, anxiety over their public appearance robs them of the objective self-image, which leads to the feeling of isolation in the long term. （要點 2） Though being tracked has been a headache to celebrities for centuries, modern cameras and the Internet make it harder to be famous nowadays. （要點 3、4） Ho

35、wever, by dealing with the stress wisely, stars still can stay popular and happy. （要點 5）(77 words) 【范文點評】 范文通過詞匯與句法關系的轉換等手段，將各段的主題詞及要點巧妙第整合在一起，突出了文章的主題與目的。范文銜接詞的使用得當，確保了文章意義的連貫。范文有如下亮點： 1.同義詞替換。例如，要點1用“suffer from great pressure”替換了原文中的“face pressure”。 2.各類從句讓句子關系更加流暢。例如，要點2使用了定語從句，要點3、4使用了讓步狀語從句，這些從句讓各個要點表述的中心更加突出。 3.銜接詞確保了概要的意義連貫。范文使用了What’s worse, Though,However等銜接方式，讓概要語篇結構緊湊，表述更加連貫。