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1、 新 聞 報 道 是 關(guān) 于 最 近 發(fā) 生 的 重 要 而 新 鮮的 事 情 的 報 道 或 評 述 ,寫 好 一 篇 高 質(zhì) 量的 新 聞 報 道 應(yīng) 注 意 以 下 兩 個 方 面 : 即新聞的題目。它是文章的眼睛,既要體現(xiàn)鮮明的個性,又要生動、形象、有美感,才能引人入勝。 是新聞報道內(nèi)容的概括和濃縮,包括五大要素:時間,地點(diǎn),人物,起因和結(jié)果。導(dǎo)語是新聞報道的精華,也是信息傳遞的集中體現(xiàn)。 是導(dǎo)語之后的新聞?wù)归_,補(bǔ)充更加充實(shí)。 新 聞 報 道 由 于 是 反 映 最 近 所 發(fā) 生 的 重 要而 新 鮮 的 事 , 所 以 時 態(tài) 以 現(xiàn) 在 時 , 過 去時 為 主 ; 篇 幅 一
2、般 不 長 , 內(nèi) 容 短 小 精 悍 ,多 用 動 詞 , 長 短 句 交 錯 使 用 。 5月 1日 , 高 二 (3)班 的 學(xué) 生 志 愿 者 去陽 光 敬 老 院 開 展 志 愿 者 活 動 (送 水 果 、打 掃 、 聊 天 等 )。 假 如 你 是 校 報 的 英 語記 者 , 請 按 下 列 要 點(diǎn) 用 英 語 寫 一 則100-120個 詞 的 新 聞 報 道 。 要求:1. 時 間 , 地 點(diǎn) , 人 物 , 活 動 。2. 老 人 們 的 反 應(yīng) 。3. 簡 短 評 論 。 第 一 步 認(rèn) 真 審 題 (analyze the requirements) 第 二 步 謀
3、篇 布 局 (draw up an outline) 第 三 步 聯(lián) 句 成 篇 (organize the sentences) 第 四 步 錦 上 添 花 (get the article polished up) 第 五 步 查 漏 補(bǔ) 缺 (check the mistakes) 審 主 題 審 體 裁 _ 審 人 稱 _ 審 時 態(tài) _ 審 要 求 students, _ time, place, persons, activitiesreaction of the elderlybrief evaluationdid voluntary worka letterthe thirdt
4、he past tense 標(biāo) 題 (headline) Student Volunteers Brought SunshineWhat would be the headline of this composition? 導(dǎo) 語 (lead) Li Yue and Zhang H ua, students from Class Three, G rade Two, _ Sunshine Nursing H ome and _.went todid some voluntary work 正 文 (body) They _ the elderly _ flowers and fruits. T
5、hen they started working at once, _ and _. Everything done, they sat in the yard _.presented withcleaning the windowssweeping the floorchatting with the elderly people 評 語 (evaluation)What they did has brought _ to others and _ their own lives. joy enriched 邏 輯 角 度 合 適 的 過 渡 性 詞 匯時 間 順 序 空 間 順 序 fir
6、st, second, then, finally /at last , soon, immediately, suddenlyhere, there, on one side on the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to 邏 輯 角 度 合 適 的 過 渡 性 詞 匯對 稱 順 序轉(zhuǎn) 折 順 序 for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other handbut, however, while, though, otherwise 邏 輯 角 度 合 適 的
7、 過 渡 性 詞 匯因 果 順 序條 件 順 序 because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless 邏 輯 角 度 合 適 的 過 渡 性 詞 匯讓 步 順 序遞 進(jìn) 順 序 though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where) everwhats more, besides, to make the matter worse, whats worse 邏 輯 角 度 合 適
8、的 過 渡 性 詞 匯表 示 總 結(jié) in a word, altogether, all in all, in general They gave flowers and fruits to the elderly. They _ the elderly _ flowers and fruits. 高 級 句 式 離 不 了presented with They said the students had done so much for them and they would never forget them.They said it was _ a beautiful day _ th
9、ey would remember it forever. suchthat 高 級 句 式 離 不 了 When they arrived _ their arrival短 語 遠(yuǎn) 比 從 句 俏Upon 1. They started working at once, _ the windows and _ the floor. 2. _, they sat in the yard _ with the elderly people. 巧用分詞cleaning sweepingEverything done chatting 名 詞 性 從 句 要 用 得 妙 What they did
10、has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. They presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. _ they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. _, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. 合 理 過 渡 離 不 了Then Everything done On May Day, Li Yue and
11、Zhang H ua, students from Class Three, G rade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing H ome and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang H ua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then they started working at once, cleaning the windows
12、 and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. When It was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. LiYue and ZhangH ua are very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.