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1、題目要求題目要求(2012衡水模擬衡水模擬) 你校組織了以你校組織了以“讀書、進步讀書、進步”為主題的為主題的“英英語讀書月語讀書月”活動，請你根據(jù)下面信息寫一篇短文，介紹你們活動，請你根據(jù)下面信息寫一篇短文，介紹你們班的班的“讀書明星讀書明星”李華同學(xué)。要點如下：李華同學(xué)。要點如下：姓名：李華性別：女年齡：姓名：李華性別：女年齡：18所在班級：高三所在班級：高三6班班 特點：特點：1積極參加讀書月活動，喜歡閱讀英文報刊雜志和原著；積極參加讀書月活動，喜歡閱讀英文報刊雜志和原著；2有良好的讀書習(xí)慣和方法，已寫了三本讀書筆記；有良好的讀書習(xí)慣和方法，已寫了三本讀書筆記；3很好合作，樂于助人。很好

2、合作，樂于助人。獲獎情況：獲獎情況：1學(xué)校學(xué)?！澳M聯(lián)合國模擬聯(lián)合國(Model UN)”辯論賽一等獎；辯論賽一等獎；2省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽第一名。省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽第一名。感言：閱讀使人進步，英語讓我快樂！感言：閱讀使人進步，英語讓我快樂！參考詞匯：模擬聯(lián)合國辯論賽參考詞匯：模擬聯(lián)合國辯論賽 the debate of Model UN 原創(chuàng)的原創(chuàng)的 original 要求：要求：100字左右字左右 _技法指導(dǎo)技法指導(dǎo) 以寫人為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該注意肖像描寫、行動描寫、以寫人為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該注意肖像描寫、行動描寫、語言描寫、心理描寫以及對細節(jié)的描寫?？忌鷳?yīng)根據(jù)寫作語言描寫、心理描寫以及對細

3、節(jié)的描寫?？忌鷳?yīng)根據(jù)寫作的要求，靈活掌握、突出重點。寫作過程中要注意以下幾的要求，靈活掌握、突出重點。寫作過程中要注意以下幾個方面的問題：個方面的問題： 1人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長、事跡、性格等多個方面，學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長、事跡、性格等多個方面，但考試時需要嚴格按照寫作要求來寫，包括所給的全部信但考試時需要嚴格按照寫作要求來寫，包括所給的全部信息點，既不能遺漏，也不能隨意添加。息點，既不能遺漏，也不能隨意添加。 2對題目所給的信息要進行適當重組，安排好寫作對題目所給的信息要進行適當重組，安排好

4、寫作順序，突出重點信息。重點信息通常是寫作的目的所在，順序，突出重點信息。重點信息通常是寫作的目的所在，比如求職要重點突出學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷；新聞報道要重點突出事比如求職要重點突出學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷；新聞報道要重點突出事跡；介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點等。跡；介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點等。 3注意運用正確的時態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、注意運用正確的時態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時；而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時；而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過去時。經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過去時。 第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文謀篇布局謀篇布局黃

5、金模板黃金模板 Li Hua, an _ (年齡年齡) girl from _ (地地點點), loves _ (愛好愛好) and has made 3 copies of notes, which shows her proper reading methods and good habits. She is always ready to _ (特點特點). Li Hua is expert at _ (特點特點) and she is also a _ (特點特點). In this “Reading and Progress” activity, she _ (獲什么獎獲什么獎) i

6、n _ (在什么活動中在什么活動中). “Reading can make me progress and English can make me happy！” that is what she has learnt from reading. 第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章1李華，女，李華，女，18歲，高三歲，高三6班學(xué)生，喜歡閱讀英文報刊雜志班學(xué)生，喜歡閱讀英文報刊雜志和原著，并且已經(jīng)寫了三本讀書筆記。和原著，并且已經(jīng)寫了三本讀書筆記。 Li Hua, who is an 18yearold girl from Class 6, Senior 3, enjoys rea

7、ding English magazines, newspapers and even original English novels. She has made 3 copies of notes so far. Li Hua, an 18yearold girl from Class 6, Senior 3, loves reading books, such as English magazines, newspapers and even original English novels and has made 3 copies of notes. 2李華很好合作，在各種閱讀活動中都很

8、積極踴躍。李華很好合作，在各種閱讀活動中都很積極踴躍。 Its very easy to cooperate with Li Hua. She takes an active part in various reading activities. Li Hua is expert at communicating and she is also a cooperative girl who is very active in all kinds of reading activities. 第三步串句成文，保證流暢第三步串句成文，保證流暢 Li Hua, an 18yearold girl f

9、rom Class 6, Senior 3, loves reading books, such as English magazines, newspapers and even original English novels and has made 3 copies of notes, which shows her proper reading methods and good habits. She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading. Li Hua is expert at comm

10、unicating and she is also a cooperative girl who is very active in all kinds of reading activities. In this “Reading and Progress” activity, she won the first prize in the debate of Model UN and the first place in the Provincial Middle School Students English Speech Contest. “Reading can make me pro

11、gress and English can make me happy！” that is what she has learnt from reading. 請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇介紹法國著名請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇介紹法國著名的作家和詩人莫泊桑的短文。詞數(shù)的作家和詩人莫泊桑的短文。詞數(shù)120左右。左右。姓名和國籍姓名和國籍莫泊桑莫泊桑(Guy de Maupassant), 法國法國經(jīng)歷經(jīng)歷學(xué)生時代開始寫小說，學(xué)生時代開始寫小說，30多歲成名，多歲成名，43歲因病去世歲因病去世成就成就一生共寫了六部長篇小說，一生共寫了六部長篇小說，300多篇中篇多篇中篇小說和短篇小說小說和短篇小

12、說代代 表表 作作短篇小說短篇小說項鏈項鏈，主要描寫中小資產(chǎn)，主要描寫中小資產(chǎn)階級的生活階級的生活參考詞匯：中篇小說參考詞匯：中篇小說novelette中小資產(chǎn)階級中小資產(chǎn)階級middle and petty bourgeoisies參考范文：參考范文： Guy de Maupassant is a famous French writer and poet, who is considered as the greatest short story writer in the French history. When he was a student, he began to write n

13、ovels and became known to the French people in his thirties. In all his life, Guy de Maupassant wrote six long novels and more than three hundred novelettes and short stories. His novels mainly reflect the social life of middle and petty bourgeoisies. He was good at writing typical details from common things and his bestknown short story The Necklace is considered to be the best in this area. He died at the age of 43 because of illness.