Period 5　Writing 看圖寫故事——友誼 　　技法指導 看圖作文是先仔細觀察圖畫，然后根據(jù)圖畫的內(nèi)容來寫一篇作文。寫作時應遵循以下四點： 第一：認真觀察圖片，確定文章主題。 第二：圍繞主題，提煉出文章所需要點。 第三：通過合理想象，補充出其他合適文章主題的要點。 第四：確定文章的時態(tài)。 　　經(jīng)典句式 1．開頭常用句式： There is a person who plays an important role in my life, which is beyond my description. 有一個人在我生命中起了重要作用，這是我無法用語言形容的。 In the widest sense, all people are friends. 在廣泛意義上說，所有的人都是朋友。 What is friendship? It is not food that we eat when we are hungry, but it can help fill up our empty mind when we feel lonely. 友誼是什么？友誼不是當我們餓的時候所吃的食物，友誼是當我們感到孤單時充滿心間的美好。 Love is a lamp, while friendship is the shadow. When the lamp is off, you will find the shadow everywhere. Friend is who can give you strength at last. 愛就像燈火，而友誼則像影子。當把燈關(guān)上的時候，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)到處都是影子。朋友是在最后可以給你力量的人。 There are several important elements necessary to maintain a good friendship. 要想維持友誼，有一些重要元素是必不可少的。 2．主體段落常用句式： That is to say, in hard times, it is easy for us to test whether the friendship is true or not. 也就是說，在困難的時候我們才容易測試出友情的真假。 The ability to really listen to another is basic to good friendship. 傾聽的能力，是保持良好友誼的基礎(chǔ)。 Whatever your social faults may be, look at them honestly and try your best to correct them. 無論你有什么樣的社交錯誤，誠實面對然后努力改正它們。 You know your own shortcomings, so don't expect perfection from others. 你知道自己的缺點，那就不要期待別人是完美的。 Only in this way can we develop real friendship and keep the lamp of friendship burning all our life. 只有這樣做，我們才可以擁有真正的友誼并且讓這友誼之光照亮我們的生活。 To conclude, friendship is a mutual spiritual assist. 總而言之，友誼是相互間的精神支持。 3．結(jié)尾常用句式： Remember I won't be far away whenever you need any help! 記住：無論你何時需要任何幫助，我隨叫隨到。 No matter what happens, a true friend will never leave you alone and will always be with you. 無論發(fā)生什么事情，一個真正的朋友決不會離你而去，而是會永遠在你身邊。 　　典例演練 仔細觀察下面的漫畫，以“朋友”為題，寫一篇短文。 注意：1.所寫短文的詞數(shù)應在120左右； 2．所寫文章主題要圍繞“朋友”展開； 3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 　 [精彩范文] The best friend All of us will meet different friends in our life, but who will be our best friend? Let me introduce my best friend Lingling. We have become friends for 9 years. What a long time it is! She is a seventeen－year－old girl like me. We had an unforgettable experience. One day, it's time to go home but the weather became terrible suddenly. I felt upset because I forgot taking my raincoat with me. At this moment a girl called Lingling appeared, and she gave me a hand, inviting me to go with her. From then on, we formed a deep and lasting friendship. As the old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 總評　本范文覆蓋所有要點，文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理清晰，語言連貫平實，句式豐富多樣。開頭點明文章主題“朋友”，主體部分聯(lián)系自己的真實生活展開，使讀者更容易產(chǎn)生共鳴。結(jié)尾再次扣題。達到了預期的寫作目的。 [亮點呈現(xiàn)] (1)What a long time it is！感嘆句的運用，豐富了文章的句式。 (2)a girl called ... , inviting等非謂語動詞的使用，使文章表達更精煉，結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊。 (3)文章結(jié)尾諺語的引用恰到好處，既總結(jié)全文，又凸顯了英語的原汁原味。 　　跟蹤演練 仔細觀察圖片，以“朋友”為題，寫作一篇短文。 注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右； 2．可以適當增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 　 　 [精彩范文] The two pictures describe a common phenomenon that some people always say “My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.” I don't think it a reasonable practice for them to behave that way in our society. For one thing, more and more studies have reported that mobile phone addiction causes selfishness, unawareness of the needs of others and disconnection from reality. Secondly, friends are more important than phones in our daily life. As is known to us all, if we are in trouble, it is not our phones but our friends that can really help us out. All in all, good interpersonal skills are a must for our future social life, so put your phone away and make some good friends, which is a really wise move. 課外拓展閱讀——中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練 閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個單詞)或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。 A teahouse is a special house which primarily serves tea and other light refreshments (茶點). Its function varies widely __1__ (depend) on the culture. In China, a teahouse is a place __2__ people gather to enjoy tea, chat and socialize. It __3__ (consider) as a symbol of Chinese tea culture and people's leisure lives. Chinese teahouses enjoy a long－standing history. They __4__ (originate) in the Western Jin Dynasty, took shape in the Tang Dynasty, developed __5__ (gradual) in the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties and became booming in modern times. In the Song Dynasty, teahouses spread all over the cities and villages, at a rate comparable with that of restaurants. The owners preferred to decorate their teahouses __6__ paintings of celebrities or rare and precious plants __7__ (attract) customers. In the Ming and Qing dynasties, the number of teahouses went beyond that of restaurants, gaining much __8__ (wide) popularity and becoming more famous. Later, the acculturation (文化植入) of western culture forced traditional Chinese teahouses to take on __9__ new look. After reform and opening－up, with the rapid development of the economy and __10__ (evidence) improvement of people's living standards, teahouses flowered in China. 1．________　2.________　3.________　4.________ 5．________　6.________　7.________　8.________ 9．________　10.________ 答案：1.depending　2.where　3.is considered　4.originated　5.gradually　6.with　7.to attract　8.wider　9.a 10．evident In Chinese society, the younger generation always show their respect for the older generation by offering a cup of tea. 在中國社會，晚輩經(jīng)常通過敬茶來表示對長輩的尊敬。 - 6 -