專題一解題策略寫好高考“書面表達(dá)”絕非一日之功，關(guān)鍵在于平時扎扎實實的訓(xùn)練。但是，在夯實語言基本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的應(yīng)試技巧，也非常重要。根據(jù)“書面表達(dá)”常見錯誤及評卷要求，建議使用“一式，兩頭，三寫，四關(guān)”的應(yīng)試搶分技巧。具體為：一式 寫對格式要求記住英語常用文體的格式和應(yīng)用文體的寫作方式和特點。二頭 寫好兩頭要求靈活運用熟悉的句式和表達(dá)手法，使文章開頭和結(jié)尾結(jié)構(gòu)正確，言簡意賅。三寫 規(guī)范三寫在高考英語書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，正確拼寫和使用標(biāo)點符號及書寫的美觀程度也是影響得分的一個重要指標(biāo)，因此考生要高度重視。許多考生只重視書面表達(dá)內(nèi)容的訓(xùn)練和提高，卻忽視了卷面規(guī)范書寫的訓(xùn)練，導(dǎo)致本不該的失分。四關(guān) 突破四關(guān)所謂“四關(guān)”是指突破內(nèi)容要點關(guān)、行文邏輯關(guān)、語法規(guī)則關(guān)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)關(guān)。要求內(nèi)容要點準(zhǔn)確全面，行文邏輯通順嚴(yán)密，語言運用正確得當(dāng)，表達(dá)方式符合英語習(xí)慣。當(dāng)然，在備考過程中，有針對性地背誦一些高分句式，套用合適的寫作模塊，可以幫助大家在短時間內(nèi)在書面表達(dá)上搶得高分！真題導(dǎo)練(2019·全國卷)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：1時間；2活動安排；3歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緦忣}謀篇】體裁邀請信人稱第一、二人稱為主時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主要點1.音樂節(jié)舉辦的時間；2.活動內(nèi)容安排；3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目 【提綱要點】1.第一段點明主題發(fā)出邀請，并介紹音樂節(jié)的具體內(nèi)容點明主題A Chinese classical music concert will_be_held in the music hall of our school.發(fā)出邀請I'd like to invite_you_to_join me.活動安排Many music masterpieces will_be_played by a famous band.歡迎他表演節(jié)目You_are_welcome_to_give a performance.2第二、三段表達(dá)期盼，期待回復(fù)表達(dá)期盼我將在音樂廳入口等你I'll meet you at_the_entrance_of the music hall.期待回復(fù)Looking forward to your reply！【潤色升級】1.將句增加時間細(xì)節(jié)，并用賓語從句進(jìn)行表達(dá)I'm glad to_tell_you_that_a_Chinese_classical_music_concert_ will_be_held_in_the_music_hall_of_our_school_on_November_8th.2將句用非謂語動詞作狀語表達(dá)，并與句合并Knowing_that you are fond of classical music, I'd_like_to_invite_you_to_join_me_and_you_are_welcome_to_give_a_performance.3將句用if條件句表達(dá)，并增加細(xì)節(jié)If_it_is_convenient_for_you,_I'll meet you at_the_entrance_of_the_music_hall_at_7：00_that_evening.【規(guī)范謄寫】真題導(dǎo)練 (2018·全國卷)你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing Together，內(nèi)容包括：1短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；2放映時間、地點；3歡迎對短片提出意見。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 【審題謀篇】體裁通知人稱第三人稱為主時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時為主要點1.短片內(nèi)容；2.放映時間、地點；3.歡迎對短片提出意見【提綱要點】1.第一段點題：你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片Rccently, an outstanding short film will_be_shown in our school. Welcome to join_us_and_enjoy_it!2第二段主體段落展開：短片內(nèi)容；放映時間、地點；歡迎對短片提出意見。短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展The movie is a documentary about the_development_of_our_school.放映時間、地點It will_be_shown in the library on June 9th.歡迎參加會后討論并對短片提出意見Every one of you is be_welcome_to take part in the discussion held afterwards and give your comments.我們期待你的評論和反饋。We are expecting_and_encouraging your comments and feedback.3第三段表達(dá)期望I have the confidence that you will have_a_great_time then.【潤色升級】1.句通過增加定語從句來拓展要點The name of the movie is Growing Together, which_is_a_documentary_about_the_development_of_our_beloved_school.2句通過增加具體時間和地點拓展要點It_will_be_shown_on_the_fourth_floor_of_the_school_library_from_2：00_to_4：00_in_the_afternoon_on_June_9th.3句和句用非謂語動詞作狀語合并為一句，實現(xiàn)句式升級Every_one_of_you_is_welcome_to_take_part_in_the_discussion_held_afterwards,_expected_and_encouraged_to_give_your_comments_and_feedback.【規(guī)范謄寫】真題導(dǎo)練 (2017·北京高考)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：視頻video 【審題謀篇】體裁圖畫類周記人稱第一人稱為主時態(tài)一般過去時為主要點1.激烈討論后決定制作視頻；2.準(zhǔn)備素材，采訪拍攝；3.后期制作；4.畢業(yè)典禮放映【提綱要點】1.第一段點明主題畢業(yè)在即，激烈討論后決定制作視頻Graduation finally came. After a_heated_discussion,_we agreed on making_a_video.2第二段主體內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)備素材采訪老師，拍攝學(xué)校生活We interviewed_our_teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.后期制作爭論保留什么We debated over what_to_put_into_the_video.典禮放映The video was played on_the_graduation_ceremony.發(fā)表感悟很有成就感That surely gave us a_great_sense_of_achievement.【潤色升級】1.將句增加“花費時間”細(xì)節(jié)，并升級為定語從句Material_collecting took us a whole week, during_which_we_interviewed_our_teachers_and_took_pictures_of_every_aspect_of_school_life.2將句增加細(xì)節(jié)，渲染討論及效果We_debated_over_what_to_put_into_the_video._Some_compromises_were_unavoidable,_but_the_video_turned_out_perfect.3將句升級用when狀語從句表達(dá)并增加“效果”細(xì)節(jié)Several days later, when_the_video_was_played_on_the_graduation_ceremony,_it_was_well_received.【規(guī)范謄寫】第1講考場作文常見的錯誤及防范措施一 考場作文常見的三類錯誤考場作文常見的錯誤主要分為三類：詞匯類錯誤、語法類錯誤和漢語式英語。 (一)詞匯類錯誤考試時，考生很容易出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤和詞形變化錯誤；而詞性不清和詞匯用法方面的錯誤主要還是受漢語思維的影響。其應(yīng)對措施是在備考時要多注意容易拼錯或容易出現(xiàn)詞形變化錯誤的單詞，真正用心去體會英語詞匯的詞性和運用，對一些固定習(xí)語更不能想當(dāng)然地改動。1單詞拼寫錯誤誤：By the way, he's a senior High School student named Lihua from Tian Jin, china.正：By the way, he's a senior high school student named Li Hua from Tianjin, China.2.詞形變化錯誤誤：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.3詞性不清錯誤誤：Everyone in my family is like the dog.正：Everyone in my family likes the dog.4詞匯用法錯誤誤：He opened the light after he entered the room.正：He turned on the light after he entered the room.5擅自改動習(xí)語誤：Nowadays most parents attach much importance with education.正：Nowadays most parents attach much importance to education.即時練1改正下列句子中的錯誤Doing a part­time job always effects study._There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with writen English._In my surprise, he has got the first prize._We must pay attention our pronunciation when we speak English._We are all entire responsible for our actions and for our reactions._答案：effectsaffectswritenwrittenInToattention后加toentireentirely (二)語法類錯誤一個正確的句子除了用詞得當(dāng)外，語法也應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確無誤。如果語法不正確，再好的構(gòu)思也難以正確地表達(dá)，語法類錯誤的多少會直接影響作文的檔次。英語書面表達(dá)中語法類錯誤主要表現(xiàn)在：1時態(tài)錯誤誤：When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to hed.正：When he came back, he found that his wife had gone to bed.2語態(tài)錯誤誤：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.3主謂一致錯誤誤：Some students like books that is written by Lu Xun.正：Some students like books that are written by Lu Xun. 4.比較級使用錯誤誤：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more smaller.正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller.5非謂語動詞使用錯誤誤：The teacher came into the lab, following by some students.正：The teacher came into the lab, followed by some students.即時練2改正下列句子中的錯誤If it won't rain tomorrow, we'll go camping._Not only Tom but also I are tired of one examination after another._They think students should have their own time to study and it is more quieter at home._There are a lot of students stand in a queue to welcome the old soldier._She said she would pay a visit to Suzhou in the next month._答案：won'tdoesn'tareammoremuch或去掉morestandstanding去掉in (三)漢語式英語一般來說，英漢兩種語言既有許多相似之處，又有許多不同之處。在寫作時如果想當(dāng)然地去寫，會出現(xiàn)許多漢語式英語，其中主要包括：1純漢語式思維和漢語式語序誤：At this school studying, I really very happy.正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy.2句子成分殘缺誤：There are many students don't support the project.正：There are many students who don't support the project.誤：He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.正：He told me that all my classmates were sitting in the classroom.3句子粘連誤：The old man has two sons, both of them work in the same company.正：The old man has two sons, and both of them work in the same company.正：The old man has two sons, both of whom work in the same company.4主謂搭配不當(dāng)誤：He happened an accident yesterday.正：An accident happened to him yesterday.5動賓搭配不當(dāng)誤：They are trying their best to improve their production.正：They are trying their best to increase their production.6形容詞和名詞搭配不當(dāng)誤：We walked a far way before planting trees.正：We walked a long way before planting trees.7動詞和副詞搭配不當(dāng)誤：My grandfather very likes black tea and has it every day.正：My grandfather likes black tea very much and has it every day.8.介詞和賓語搭配不當(dāng)誤：They will build a monument on memory of the national hero.正：They will build a monument in memory of the national hero.即時練3改正下列句子中的錯誤We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time._It's known that the cost in big cities is very expensive._He came here to attend the meeting in car._I haven't heard from your letter for a long time and I miss you very much._I have many collections of stamps, some of them are my favorite._答案：We are impossibleIt is impossible for usexpensivehighinbyyour letteryousome前加and或themwhich二 防范出現(xiàn)錯誤的兩個措施句子正確是作文得高分的關(guān)鍵和保證，考場上要避免上述低級錯誤，可采取以下兩個措施。 (一)確定主語英語句子無論多長都有自己的主語(祈使句省略了主語you)。寫句子前首先要確定主語，其次要特別注意漢語與英語的區(qū)別。例如：1北京八月多雨。誤：Beijing rains much in August.正：It rains much in Beijing in August.2寫得很匆忙，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)書中滿是錯誤。誤：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes (by us) (二)確定謂語動詞英語中沒有動詞就構(gòu)不成句子，但動詞千變?nèi)f化，稍不注意就會寫錯句子。在寫句子時應(yīng)特別注意以下幾個方面。1注意及物與不及物動詞的正確運用誤：The living standard of the people has raised in the past twenty years.正：The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the past twenty years.2注意延續(xù)性與非延續(xù)性動詞的正確運用誤：His grandmother has died for fifteen years.正：His grandmother has been dead for fifteen years.3注意一些不可用于被動語態(tài)的動詞或動詞短語誤：That dictionary is belonged to the library.正：That dictionary belongs to the library.過關(guān)檢測(限時：20分鐘).以下句子含有考生常犯的錯誤，請改正1It is high time that we do something to reduce traffic accidents._答案：dodid或在do前加should2While having our dinner, the doorbell rang._答案：having前加we were或the doorbell rangwe heard the doorbell ringing3Recently our village has taken place great changes._答案：Recently great changes have taken place in our village.4Dr Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight._答案：areis5Eating at school is very convenient for students._答案：It is very convenient for students to eat at school.6Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is his first time visit to the US?_答案：去掉time7The car hitted the old man and drived away._答案：hittedhit; driveddrove8I have two friends, their names are Tom and Jim._答案：theirwhose或their前加and9There are many students are planting trees on the hill._答案：去掉第二個are或在students后加who10At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic._答案：swimmingswim.下面的考生作文中共有10處語言錯誤，請改正假定你是李華，最近與好朋友Lucy吵架了，現(xiàn)在給外教Melinda寫一封郵件請求幫助。郵件內(nèi)容包含：1吵架的原因；2吵架后的心情；3請求Melinda給出解決辦法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Melinda，The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt frustrated ever since.I really don't want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices? Looking forward to you reply.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua第一句：_第二句：_第三句：_第四句：_第五句：_第七句：_第八句：_答案：第一句：writtingwriting; becausethat第二句：去掉was; 去掉at第三句：Because后加of第四句：causedcausing第五句：sinceresincerely; feltfeeling第七句：advicesadvice第八句：youyour強(qiáng)化特訓(xùn)11書面表達(dá)(一)(限時：45分鐘).按分類提示，改正下列句子中的唯一一處錯誤題組1連詞類錯誤1In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the USA, thus there is no need for you to worry about it._答案：In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the USA, thu there is no need for you to worry about it.2.Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, but my dad made every effort to earn the money._答案：Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, / my dad made every effort to earn the money.3.The reason is often because the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities._答案：The reason is often the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.4.Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use that we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it._答案：Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it.5.Around 540 million people are affected by secondhand smoke, that causes 100,000 deaths per year._答案：Around 540 million people are affected by secondhand smoke, causes 100,000 deaths per year.6.Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hardworking._答案：Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hardworking.或Our class is made up of 52 students, all of are friendly and hardworking.題組2動詞類錯誤7.Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confusing about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details._答案：Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.8.Secondly, if I were you, I will bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country._答案：Secondly, if I were you, I bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country.9.What's more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry._答案：What's more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry.10.If you want to have a DNA detection, you have to pay for 125 pounds._答案：If you want to have a DNA detection, you have to pay 125 pounds.11.Only in this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful._答案：Only in this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.12.Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as help us practice our spoken English._答案：Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as us practice our spoken English.13.Known that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions._答案： that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.14.Weather permits, we will have a picnic tomorrow._答案：Weather ， we will have a picnic tomorrow.15.We offer a wide range of holidays to choose._答案：We offer a wide range of holidays to choose .題組3介詞、冠詞、代詞類錯誤16.By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express me clearly._答案：By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express clearly.17.Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all._答案：Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all.18.When I have different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority._答案：When I have different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.19.Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer for a difficult math problem in class._答案：Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer a difficult math problem in class.20.The blackboard is in front of the classroom._答案：The blackboard is in front of the classroom.21.Nowadays there are still many poor students. They cannot afford to go to the school._答案：Nowadays there are still many poor students. They cannot afford to go to school.22.She met and eventually married with a man considerably younger than herself._答案：She met and eventually married a man considerably younger than herself.23.Several years later, a word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem._答案：Several years later, word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem.24.Bicycles are environmentally friendly because it won't give off waste gas._答案：Bicycles are environmentally friendly because won't