三、增加細(xì)節(jié)的5大策略在英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)中，增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作中，考生一定不能簡(jiǎn)單地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫(xiě)圖片內(nèi)容，否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充實(shí)、字?jǐn)?shù)要求不達(dá)標(biāo)或者結(jié)構(gòu)不連貫。適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能夠使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿(mǎn)，達(dá)到應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果。微技能(一)列舉具體的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明1我們青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags，refuse to use single-use products，plant more trees and save water and energy.2我要花一些時(shí)間和父母呆在一起。Ill spend some time staying with my parents.Ill spend some time staying with my parents，chatting with them and doing some housework.3我想找一個(gè)像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible，we can travel together or share traveling experiences.4我是一個(gè)充滿(mǎn)活力的健康男孩，我非常喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。Im a healthy boy full of energy，so I like sports very much.I am a healthy boy full of energy，so I like sports very much，especially outdoor activities.Whenever I have time，Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.題組過(guò)關(guān)1根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子1The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.We can not only read news from home and abroad(我們不僅能閱讀國(guó)內(nèi)外的新聞)，but also get information，send emails and attend online schools.2Laura is a standard American style.She speaks perfect American English(她說(shuō)一口完美的美式英語(yǔ))，and thats why I am crazy about her.3However，it seems people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication.For example，many people begin to pay less attention to face-to-face communication(比如，很多人開(kāi)始越來(lái)越不重視面對(duì)面的交流)4However，every coin has two sides，so does the Internet.For example，being lost in the Internet may affect our study and work(比如，沉溺于因特網(wǎng)也許會(huì)影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作)微技能(二)增添與所寫(xiě)信息相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動(dòng)作、心理描寫(xiě)以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容1我有時(shí)去村西的小河游泳。I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染)Weather permitting，I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.(相關(guān)背景)2我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不良行為。I found some bad behavior.I found some bad behavior.Some people scribbled on the wall；some people played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere.(相關(guān)行為描述)3晚飯后，這位男士走向了臥室。After supper，the man went to his bedroom.After a rich meal，the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.(神態(tài)、動(dòng)作)題組過(guò)關(guān)2根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子5Considering the activity is of great value/is meaningful(考慮到這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)很有意義)，we intend to design a uniform suited to our own class.6Ill try my best to make your uncle happy here.I am eagerly looking forward to his visit to our city(我熱切地期盼著他來(lái)我們城市參觀(guān))7Many teenagers dont pay any attention to their health，especially during the holiday.They spend too much time watching TV(他們花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間看電視)，playing games and chatting on the Internet all night.8Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt very happy and satisfied(我感到非常高興和滿(mǎn)意)9In the summer vacation，I am longing to get/have a part-time job(我渴望得到一份兼職工作)微技能(三)增加相關(guān)信息的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容1我要和父母一起去超市購(gòu)物。Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and wont be back until about 500 in the afternoon.(增加時(shí)間)2我已經(jīng)帶來(lái)了你讓我歸還的這兩本書(shū)。I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地點(diǎn))題組過(guò)關(guān)3根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子10Yao Ming，who was born in Shanghai on September 12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，started playing for the Shanghai Sharks as a teenager.11The Chinese Silk Road，which starts from todays Xian and finally finishes at the east coast of(起源于今天的西安，并最后達(dá)到的東海岸) the Mediterranean，is well-known to the world.12Today I paid a visit to one of the greatest cities in Asia，Beijing in China(在亞洲，中國(guó)的北京)13I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment/immediately/as soon as/directly(一就) I arrived here at 6 oclock in the morning by plane.微技能(四)適當(dāng)增加與所給信息相關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容1假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry最近來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你高考后的暑假安排。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封回信，說(shuō)明你的計(jì)劃，并簡(jiǎn)述理由。1.休息；2.讀書(shū)；3.參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。(1)I need a good rest.Ill do some reading.I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.Of course，Ill do some reading for fun，and for knowledge as well.(因果關(guān)系)(2)Ill take part in some social activities.If I have free time，Ill take part in some social activities.(條件狀語(yǔ))If possible，Ill take part in some social activities.(條件狀語(yǔ))If possible，Ill take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about the society.(結(jié)果狀語(yǔ))2Tracy來(lái)電話(huà)：咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見(jiàn)面取消。Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee as she had something important to do.(原因狀語(yǔ))3幫助鄰居的孩子們補(bǔ)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.(增添結(jié)果)題組過(guò)關(guān)4根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子14Tomb Sweeping Day，one of the traditional Chinese festivals(傳統(tǒng)的中國(guó)節(jié)日之一)，usually falls around April 5 every year to honor the dead and satisfy their ancestors.15With the global climate becoming warmer and warmer(伴隨著全球氣候變得越來(lái)越暖和)，our earth is faced with great threat.16Situated/Located in northeast(坐落在東北部)，Beijing is well-known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history.17During this period，people will go to clean the graves and pay respect to their ancestors，carrying food and fruit(帶上食物和水果)18Being a senior school student(作為一名高中生)，its everyones duty to do something to save our earth.19As is known to all/As everyone knows(眾所周知)，Earth Hour is an activity which aims at saving energy.微技能(五)結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、希望愿景、倡議等1Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did.(個(gè)人感受)2I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(評(píng)價(jià))3In a word，if she would like to learn Chinese，I hope she will do it well.(愿景)4As students，its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡議)題組過(guò)關(guān)5根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子20As a professional basketball player(作為一名專(zhuān)業(yè)的籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員)，he is one of Chinas best-known athletes.21I think Beijing is well worth a second visit(非常值得再次參觀(guān))22In my view，no matter how/however attractive the Internet is(不管因特網(wǎng)多么吸引人)，it shouldnt separate us from our loved ones.23We drew a conclusion through the experiment(通過(guò)這個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)我們得出一個(gè)結(jié)論)：the temperature doesnt change when ice is melting into water.24Lets develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to our environment(盡力為我們的環(huán)境做出更多貢獻(xiàn))25Therefore，we should spend time with our families，enjoying the time when we are together(享受我們?cè)谝黄鸬臅r(shí)光).按要求對(duì)下列句子進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充1每天要努力學(xué)習(xí)，為每一次考試做出仔細(xì)的計(jì)劃。(增加條件狀語(yǔ))Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam.If we are prepared，we will not feel worried.2復(fù)旦大學(xué)位于上海。(增加which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)Fudan University is located in Shanghai，which is an international city where I can get a lot of knowledge and experience.3不管我將面對(duì)什么樣的困難，我都不會(huì)屈服。(增加目的狀語(yǔ))To realize my dream，whatever challenge I will face，I will never give in.4我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)如何與他人相處。(增加具體信息說(shuō)明)We should learn how to get along well with others.For example，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.5一些學(xué)生非常擔(dān)心考試以至于晚上無(wú)法入睡。(增加結(jié)果狀語(yǔ))Some students are so worried about exams that they cant fall asleep at night.As a result，they feel sleepy in the day time and cant concentrate in class.請(qǐng)為下面的短文適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)Dear Sam，The College Entrance Examination lasts for two days.The examinees are tested on Chinese，math，science and arts.We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex.參考范文Dear Sam，Thank you for your concern.Now Ill tell you something about the once-a-year College Entrance Examination.There is no doubt that the examination is very important.It lasts for two days from June 7th to 8th.The examinees are tested on Chinese and math on the first day.Science and arts are tested on the second day.We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex.But we are full of confidence because we are well prepared.We all believe that the fruits of our efforts will be sweet.6