第03周 安慰別人范文11 安慰有困擾的同學(xué)為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開(kāi)辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封回信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1表示理解并給予安慰；2提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。注意：1詞數(shù)120左右；2信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒Hi Worried.:Im sorry to know that youre having such a hard time at the moment._Yours,Jamie【思路點(diǎn)撥】題目要求給Worried回一封信，回信的內(nèi)容主要包括：理解并給予安慰；提出建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意信的格式，不要出現(xiàn)拼寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤；多使用定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。文章注意使用First, Second, And third等來(lái)表示列舉，使行文顯得有條理、有層次；嘗試使用了一些短語(yǔ)和固定搭配：talk to；a good way of；let out；go outdoors；get rid of；attitude towards；carry on；as normal等，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使作文顯得錯(cuò)落有致。【必背范文】Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips:First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie范文12安慰身患癌癥的美國(guó)女孩據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國(guó)女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中。美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定,每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.自我簡(jiǎn)介；2.得知的情況；3.表示鼓勵(lì)；4.打算為她做什么；5.祝她早日康復(fù)。注意:1.信的格式已為你寫(xiě)好；2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況；3.詞數(shù)100左右。Dear Amy,_Yours,Li Hua【思路點(diǎn)撥】本文要求用英文給Amy寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，鼓勵(lì)A(yù)my與病魔斗爭(zhēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可遵循以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)確定要點(diǎn)：自我介紹，得知她的情況，表示鼓勵(lì)，打算為她做什么，最后祝她早日康復(fù)；(2)擴(kuò)展要點(diǎn)，豐富要點(diǎn)，將句子補(bǔ)充完整；(3)連句成篇，將句子連成短文，打好草稿；(4)全面檢查，檢查草稿，修改拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，修改人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)邏輯錯(cuò)誤。另外應(yīng)考慮語(yǔ)篇的結(jié)構(gòu)、句式的變化和詞匯的豐富?！颈乇撤段摹緿ear Amy,I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. Hope they will give you more courage to live on.May you recover soon.Yours,Li Hua范文13安慰情緒低落的朋友假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國(guó)朋友Jenny的來(lái)信。她在信中說(shuō)，由于剛進(jìn)入高中，還不能適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境，不知道如何去結(jié)交新朋友，因而情緒低落。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給她回信。1. 向Jenny表示問(wèn)候和慰問(wèn)；2. 針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題提出以下建議： 放學(xué)后邀請(qǐng)同學(xué)一起參加活動(dòng)； 你的同學(xué)遇到麻煩時(shí)，你去幫助他們； 你遇到困難時(shí)向同學(xué)求助。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jenny,I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. _ Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【思路點(diǎn)撥】本文屬于提綱作文，內(nèi)容是給Jenny寫(xiě)一封回信，向Jenny表示問(wèn)候和慰問(wèn)，并針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題提出三點(diǎn)建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)就是主要內(nèi)容。2.提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要根據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。3.根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主?！颈乇撤段摹緿ear Jenny,I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. Id like to talk about it with you.In fact, in your senior high school, your classmates are also new and facing the same problem, so you dont have to worry too much about it. There is also something that you can do to change this situation. First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better than communicating with others. Then, help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty.I believe you will make many new friends and you will have a happy school life there.Best wishesYours,Li Hua范文14 給與發(fā)生過(guò)摩擦的朋友道歉假如你是小明，前天踢足球時(shí)你撞倒了你的好朋友李華，因而你倆發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵。經(jīng)過(guò)兩天的冷靜思考，你覺(jué)得不應(yīng)該因?yàn)檫@件小事而失去一個(gè)好朋友，于是決定寫(xiě)一封道歉信，希望和他冰釋前嫌，內(nèi)容包括:1.說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的；2.承認(rèn)自己的錯(cuò)誤；3.指出李華的不足；4.提出希望，重歸于好。注意：1.請(qǐng)勿提及與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3.詞數(shù)不少于100，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Li Hua,Im sorry_Best wishes. Yours,Xiao Ming【思路點(diǎn)撥】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一篇道歉信，因此具有很大的開(kāi)放性。道歉人主要向收信人表達(dá)歉意，希望對(duì)方原諒自己的過(guò)失，并提出彌補(bǔ)過(guò)失的具體措施和建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)根據(jù)提示要求按照三段式模式謀篇布局。首段重復(fù)自己做的錯(cuò)事，表示歉意。主體段落說(shuō)明道歉的原因，寫(xiě)信時(shí)應(yīng)該注意在陳述理由時(shí)要照顧收信人的感受，切忌強(qiáng)詞奪理。尾段再次表明承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤的態(tài)度，請(qǐng)收信人諒解.【必背范文】Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to have quarreled with you about knocking you down the day before yesterday. I feel that its not necessary for me to do that, so I make a sincere apology to you and hope that you forgive me. As a friend, I should not quarreled with you about a small thing. Whats worse, its foolish of me to have said bad things to hurt you, though I was sure I didnt mean to. On the other hand, you were not so sensible then. If you had asked me why I knocked you down, the quarrel would have been avoided. Therefore, we should keep calm no matter what happens in the future. Only in this way can we deal with things correctly and maintain our friendship. At last, I hope we will have a lifelong friendship! Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua范文15 因不能赴約給朋友道歉假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件：1. 表示歉意；2. 解釋原因；3. 另約時(shí)間。Dear Tom,I am indeed very sorry that_ Yours, Li Hua【思路點(diǎn)撥】根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)一篇道歉信。文章分為三部分：首先說(shuō)明自己的錯(cuò)事，并表達(dá)自己的歉意；第二部分解釋原因；第三部分再次表達(dá)歉意，并另約時(shí)間。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。人稱以第一人稱為主?！颈乇撤段摹緿ear Tom， I am indeed very sorry that I cant go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year， informed me that he will return this Saturday morning. And ask me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we havent seen each other for nearly a year. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing. Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 9