廣東省2014高考英語短文改錯(cuò)、書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（15）附參考范文 短文改錯(cuò)-（全國II）短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分） 此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾（J）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：此行多一個(gè)詞：在答題卡短文上把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個(gè)詞：在答題卡短文的缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（八），并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在答題卡短文錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。 George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81_another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82._work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83_was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to 84._our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._Yours,Mike76.after-since 77.them-us 78.for-with 79.正確 80.去掉much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip前a 85.better-more*結(jié)束表格提示類4. 你校同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一場有關(guān)高考英語聽力測試的討論。討論的主題是：高考英語測試中的聽力部分該不該取消？請你根據(jù)下表中的提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該取消另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)該取消聽是語言的四項(xiàng)基本技能之一，不能忽視聽是獲取信息的重要途徑之一國際合作日益增多，聽說能力應(yīng)加強(qiáng)考試中各地收聽效果好壞不一、不公平英語教師和語音設(shè)備城鄉(xiāng)差異過大今后并非人人都要與外國人口頭交流注意：1文章的起始句已給出。 2詞數(shù)：100左右（不包括已給的起始句）。3參考詞匯：取消cancel 國際合作international cooperationThe students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled. Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent. But others dont agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.*結(jié)束短文改錯(cuò)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞; 2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。(2012唐山三模）Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I dont like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers cant feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isnt reliable at all. 答案解析*短文改錯(cuò)Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some increasinglypeople liked to buy goods online. And I dont like it, because online shopping is lesslike Butreliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to merchantsfalse information online. Secondly, consumers cant feel the items that is usually arepresented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from deliveredwhich consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our ownwhat theirexpense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isnt reliable at all. a*結(jié)束 表格提示類5. 請以My favorite Newspaper為題用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹21世紀(jì)報(bào)，短文應(yīng)包括下面表格中所提供的內(nèi)容。報(bào)紙名稱及使用語言21st Century, 英文報(bào)紙出版地點(diǎn)及出版周期北京，每周一期版面內(nèi)容每周新聞，今日世界，語言課堂，體育與音樂，學(xué)生報(bào)導(dǎo)特色圖文并茂目的學(xué)習(xí)英語詞匯，提高英語水平，獲取各種信息效果廣為人知，深受喜愛 My Favorite Newspaper21st Century is my favorite newspaper. It is an English language newspaper which is published in Beijing each week. It has sections of different kinds, including News of the week, the World Today, Language Class, Sports and Music and Students Report. There are plenty of beautiful pictures and interesting articles in it. I enjoy reading the paper. I read it to improve my English. I have learnt a lot of new words and useful expressions. Besides, I can get information about different things, from politics to sports and music. 21st Century is very popular wiEnglish learners. I do love it.*結(jié)束【重慶南開中學(xué)高】第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分） 請對標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷，每一行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，按下列情況改下。此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也劃掉。此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。Dear Mrs. Smith,I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of 76 the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.77 After that, you always gave me specially attention and78 inspired me to join in activity. As a result, I gradually79 got to know other campers. Because the help you gave me80 that summer, my .life changed. I gain so much confidence that81 I went back to school as new person. My grades improved. I 82 became active but made new friends. Yesterday, I got a letter83 that was said I was admitted to a college. I am proud of it. I just84 want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.85 Yours Bob 改錯(cuò)76well改為much77myself改為me 78specially改為special79activity改為activities/在activity前面加the80because的后面加of81gain改為gained82new前面加a83but改為and84去掉was85becoming改為become*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：日記2你的一天活動(dòng)安排如下，請你據(jù)此寫一篇日記。時(shí) 間地 點(diǎn)活 動(dòng) 安 排8：00校門口歡迎美國學(xué)生（約50人）到校參加訪問8：30-9：30圖書館閱鑒室聯(lián)歡會(huì)（get-together）,交換禮品9：30-10：30校園內(nèi)參觀教學(xué)樓、實(shí)驗(yàn)樓、校辦工廠、游泳池10：30-11：30操場友誼籃球賽12：00校門口美國學(xué)生離校14：00-17：00幾家書店和幾名同學(xué)選擇、購買了書和磁帶交換：exchange vt.2003年11月25日 星期六 晴Nov. 25 Saturday fineAbout fifty American students came to visit our school today.We gathered at the school at 8 oclock to give them a warm welcome. Then we had a get-together in the reading room in our library. Our headmaster told them something about our school. And then we talked with each other and exchanged gifts. From nine thirty we showed them around our school. They visited our classroom building, the lab building, the factory run by our school, and the swimming pool. A friendly basketball game started on the sports ground at then thirty. At twelve oclock all American students left our school.In the afternoon my classmates and I went to some shops. We chose and bought some books and tapes.I was busy but happy today.*結(jié)束表格提示類6. 據(jù)調(diào)查，中國城市居民的電腦擁有率達(dá)30%。很多農(nóng)村居民對電腦也越來越感興趣，甚至有的家庭也買了電腦。參考下表寫一篇題為“Computers in China”的短文。詞數(shù)為100左右。家庭買電腦的目的中學(xué)生使用電腦的情況類別 比率因別 比率孩子學(xué)習(xí)需要 70%學(xué)習(xí)資料查詢 30%家長工作需要 20%上網(wǎng)、聊天、游戲 60%娛樂 30%聽音樂、看光盤 20%Computers in ChinaAccording to a recent investigation, about 30% of the city families have computer. Besides, many village people are more and more interested in computers and some of them even have bought computers. About 70% of the parents bought computers for their children to study, and some for their work. And even some people bought them for entertainment. The fact how the middle school students use the computers really surprises us. Only about 30% of them use computers to find out useful in formation. About 60% use computers to play games and 20% use computers to watch VCDs or listen to music. In my opinion, we should make better use of our best invention computers.*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：日記針對訓(xùn)練2月4日，星期天上午，你們班同學(xué)騎車到學(xué)校附近的公園組織了一次環(huán)?；顒?dòng)。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一篇日記，發(fā)表你對此次活動(dòng)的看法。1組掃除：清理廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物2組宣傳：樹立標(biāo)牌，告訴游客要愛護(hù)花木3組演講：向游客宣傳“白色污染”的害處以及保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性你的看法注意：1日記必須包括表內(nèi)所有的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；2日記格式及首句已給出，不列入總詞數(shù)；3詞數(shù)：100詞左右。4參考詞匯：煙蒂cigarette end February 4, Sunday FineThis morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park._February 4, Sunday FineThis morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups .The first group collected the rubbish, such as the waste paper, cigarette ends ,plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of peoples health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.*結(jié)束表格提示類7. 如今，外出旅游已成為時(shí)尚。下面的部分物品可能是你旅游時(shí)必備的。請你選擇至少最重要的五種物品，并說出理由。字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。DocumentsID card, passportClothessweater, coat, walking, shoes Articlesmedicine, umbrella, vacuum bottle（熱水瓶）Equipmentmobile phone, compassBooksguidebook, map, magazineOther thingscamera, CD player, Mp3While traveling, I always take the following things with me, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. I think the ID card is a basic and necessary document, and it is a must for tourists wherever they go. The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun. The compass is very essential for us to travel in the forests. Without it, we may get lost. And then the CD player, I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the train or the plane. Whats more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place. In a word, among all the above, I think the ID card is the most important.*結(jié)束表格提示類8. 目前，重慶的街頭出現(xiàn)了越來越多的貓與狗，對此“中學(xué)生英語報(bào)”組織了一場討論：城市內(nèi)是否可以飼養(yǎng)寵物。根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，介紹討論情況，并說明自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。支持飼養(yǎng)寵物反對飼養(yǎng)寵物你的觀點(diǎn)1 安慰孤寡老人2 人與動(dòng)物和諧相處，增添生活情趣1 造成環(huán)境污染2 吵鬧聲，甚至傷人注意：1詞數(shù)100左右。2可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3開頭語已為你寫好。One possible version:Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think its a good idea to keep pets because old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary, the other students are against the idea. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it is bad for the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.I like animals, so I dont think it is bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment or causing other troubles.*結(jié)束短文改錯(cuò)-【重慶市外國語學(xué)?！康谝还?jié)：短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，共10分） 以下標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行均有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，請找出，并按下列情況改正： 此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。 此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯(cuò)一詞：在錯(cuò)詞的下面劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at the gate of the 76._subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on 77._the groundBefore long , he was surrounding with people, who 78._were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night, 79_a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please80._come to claim it soon.” Seeing this , people wondered why it could 81._be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought 82_back his lottery(彩票) which won a reward of 500,000. Later someone asked the violinist: 83._ “ Why dont you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said, 84._“While I dont have much money, I live happily. However , I lose 85._honesty, I wont be happy forever.” 短文改錯(cuò)：76.第一個(gè)at改為on 77.with后加a 78.surrouning改為surrounded 79.word改為words80.mistaken改為mistake 81.why改為what 82.brought改為took 83.reward改為prize 84.dont改為didnt 85.if后加I*結(jié)束1.伴隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，人的“個(gè)性”也越來越強(qiáng)。新時(shí)期的青少年都愿意追求個(gè)性，這種行為對他們的人生發(fā)展是利是弊？請結(jié)合下表中所給內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶āＵ接^點(diǎn)反方觀點(diǎn) 你的觀點(diǎn)是發(fā)展個(gè)性是開放時(shí)代的必然趨勢；追求個(gè)性若把握得好，對青少年成人后的工作很有好處。個(gè)性不等于任性或是放縱；個(gè)性的釋放要適時(shí)適度。注意：1.詞數(shù)：130-170 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。1. With the development of society, there are more and more teenagers tending to show their own individuality. There is no denying that its a natural trend for teenagers to develop their individuality in modern society. We should notice that education today pays more and more attention to the individuality development of the students. Also, developing individuality properly is good for teenagers to stand out in their work in the future. However, individuality doesnt mean being completely free. There are still laws and rules regulating our behavior, which warns us not to cross the limit. Therefore, individuality should be controlled to a proper extent. In my opinion, teenage life is an important stage when we develop and improve ourselves. We should spend more time and energy in learning rather than pursuing individuality so that we can meet the challenges in the future. After all, it is not what you look like but what you really master that counts*結(jié)束表格提示類9. 據(jù)報(bào)道，2008年北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)將選拔約十萬志愿者為之服務(wù)。請你以“Dos and Donts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，討論志愿者應(yīng)該做什么，不應(yīng)該做什么。短文應(yīng)包括下表中的內(nèi)容：DosDonts1. 待人禮貌、友好1避免不得體的言行2堅(jiān)守崗位2不忘履行自己的職責(zé)3介紹中國歷史和文化3不損害祖國的形象如果你成為志愿者，你還應(yīng)該做什么，不應(yīng)該做什么。 （內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）注意：1。對所給要點(diǎn)，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。短文中已寫好了的部分，不計(jì)入詞數(shù) 。 3參考詞匯：形象 imageOne Possible VersionIt is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?Firstly, they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world, and avoid improper behaviour. Secondly, they should stick to their posts, offering good services, satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty, and never fail to do their duty. Thirdly, they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland.If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer, besides the above, I will work hard and creatively, but never be lazy. I will follow the law and disciplining, but never break them. I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors, and help make the 2008 Olympic Games a great success.*結(jié)束