中考英語第三部分中招題型研究六 書面表達(dá) 話題4 咨詢建議（含解析）寫作練兵(xx樂山)近幾年，越來越多的中國人出國旅游，他們中的一些不文明行為引起了人們的極大關(guān)注。調(diào)查顯示，中國游客位列世界第二不受歡迎的人。為此，請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語專欄寫一篇短文，并提出你的建議，呼吁人們文明出行。1. 不高聲喧嘩；2. 排隊(duì)候車或就餐；3. 不隨地吐痰或亂扔垃圾；4. 不亂涂亂畫。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80 詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：spit v. 吐痰；behavior n. 行為。With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad, their bad behaviors have bee a hot topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good tourist? Here are some tips for you._【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 本文就“文明出行”這一話題發(fā)表看法，屬于議論文；2. 寫作內(nèi)容要包括：對不文明現(xiàn)象的描寫、提出呼吁、給出行為建議等，應(yīng)涵蓋給出的所有要點(diǎn)；3. 文章是寫社會現(xiàn)象，要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；4. 文章在表述作者觀點(diǎn)時用第一人稱，描寫社會現(xiàn)象時用第三人稱；5. 80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】文明出行要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：點(diǎn)明主題中國人出境旅游中的不文明現(xiàn)象引起社會極大關(guān)注(travel abroad)正文：給出建議1. 不高聲喧嘩(keep voice down)2. 排隊(duì)候車或就餐(wait in line for, take a bus, have dinner )3. 不隨地吐痰或亂扔垃圾(drop litter)4. 不亂涂亂畫(write or draw pictures)結(jié)尾：呼吁 1. 尊重當(dāng)?shù)匚幕?respect local customs)2. 保護(hù)環(huán)境(take care of the environment)【高分范文】 With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad, their bad behaviors have bee a hot topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good tourist? Here are some tips for you. First, we should keep our voice down while talking with friends in public. Please wait in line if we want to take a bus or have dinner. Also, dont spit or drop litter whenever we want. Finally, its really a bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings.As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behavior, saying no to those bad habits. While enjoying ourselves, we should not only respect local customs, but also take care of the environment.話題4咨詢建議(xx威海改編)初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活將要結(jié)束了， 想必你有很多話想對你的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們說。假如你是張揚(yáng)， 請你給學(xué)校英語廣播站寫一封致學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們的公開信。內(nèi)容可以結(jié)合你在學(xué)習(xí)時間、方法， 師生相處， 遵規(guī)守紀(jì)， 學(xué)習(xí)與興趣愛好關(guān)系的處理等方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)， 給他們提出合理的建議， 并祝福他們。要求： 1. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 3. 80詞左右。_【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，提取信息：1. 要求寫一封公開信，因此文章為應(yīng)用文，內(nèi)容可以包括在學(xué)習(xí)時間、方法，師生相處，遵規(guī)守紀(jì)，學(xué)習(xí)與興趣愛好關(guān)系的處理等方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，可以就某一方面或幾方面內(nèi)容描述，不必面面俱到；2. 根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提出合理的建議，并要有祝福語；3. 本文是介紹自己在學(xué)校生活的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，寫作時用第一人稱；4. 本文描述學(xué)習(xí)生活的注意事項(xiàng)，通常用一般現(xiàn)在時；5. 詞數(shù)： 80詞左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名。 【寫作指導(dǎo)】一封致同學(xué)們的公開信要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：禮貌用語并引出話題畢業(yè)在即，想分享學(xué)校生活的經(jīng)驗(yàn)(graduate from, at the moment, would like to share, experience ) 正文：具體介紹經(jīng)驗(yàn)及建議1. 遵規(guī)守紀(jì)：校規(guī)使學(xué)校保持良好秩序(lots of rules, keep . in good order)2. 師生相處：良好的師生關(guān)系能提高學(xué)習(xí)，有必要和別人相處好(good relationship, improve, its necessary, get on well with)3. 不要浪費(fèi)時間(waste time)4. 先學(xué)習(xí)，后做喜歡的事情(study es first，then.)結(jié)尾：送上祝福語1. 希望有所幫助(be helpful to)2. 祝你成功(wish you success)【高分范文】 Dear schoolmates，How time flies! I'm graduating from our school. At the moment, I would like to share my experience of school life with you.Firstly, our school has a lot of rules so that they can keep our school life in good order. Next，a good relationship with teachers and students can help you improve your study. So its necessary for you to get on well with teachers and classmates. Thirdly, every minute counts. Try not to waste time, because we cant call yesterday back. Finally, everyone has hobbies. But I think study must e first, then we can do what we are interested in.I hope it can be helpful to you. Wish you success.Yours truly，Zhang Yang