2022年高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 書面表達(dá)學(xué)生觀摩篇（1）書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練假定你是李華，你所喜愛的實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)創(chuàng)刊十一周年（總100期）之際征集讀者意見。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編Mr. Wang寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括： 1說明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者 2贊賞該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1) 國內(nèi)外教育新聞 2) 學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流及名人成功故事 3) 學(xué)生習(xí)作3提出建議 注意：1詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Mr Wang, Congratulations on the 11th anniversary of Experimental Newspaper! 【參考范文】Dear Mr Wang,Congratulations on the 11th anniversary of Experimental Newspaper! Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following three reasons. First, it covers both national and international news of education so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the month. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Besides, it offers us students a platform to exchange our learning experience and share encouraging stories. As a young student, I suggest that Experimental Newspaper carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will bee even more popular. Yours sincerely, Li Hua書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練假如你是李華，你向美國筆友Jack介紹你校開設(shè)的學(xué)生社團(tuán)活動(dòng)的情況，大致內(nèi)容介紹：1、活動(dòng)對(duì)象：高一和高二學(xué)生；活動(dòng)時(shí)間：每周二 的三點(diǎn)鐘以后。2、 通過參加活動(dòng)，你們的收獲。3、 你的感受。注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于100；2、開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3、 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；Dear Jack,   Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school.【參考范文】Dear Jack, Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school .These clubs are set up by the Students Union and they are intended for students from Grade Two and Grade Three, open after 3 oclock on Tuesday afternoon.The club activities, aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents, benefit us a lot. Taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends, expand our circle, and develop interpersonal skills. At the same time, these activities can help us to develop self-confidence, municating with each other more easily. Besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.  In my opinion, I acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. Meanwhile, I bring myself more relaxation after hard study, which reduces my tiredness.【xx高考英語吉林省長春市調(diào)研試題】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假定你是李華，因陪母親看病，不能參加明天下午關(guān)于美國文化的講座。請(qǐng)寫一封 短信向老師Miss Clinton請(qǐng)假。內(nèi)容主要包括：1. 不能聽講座，跟老師表示歉意；2. 向老師陳述缺席理由；3. 詢問老師是否有講座錄音或影像，以便日后補(bǔ)聽講座。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)増加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Miss Clinton,I am very sorry that _Yours, Li Hua【語篇解讀】 書面表達(dá)體裁為請(qǐng)假條，題材貼近考生生活?！久}立意】 本試卷書面表達(dá)的目的在于考查考生應(yīng)用已有的語言知識(shí)完成一篇應(yīng)用文（請(qǐng)假條）寫作的綜合能力?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Miss Clinton, I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture. My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. I will take care of my mother until she is better, so I have to ask for several days leave. I am very interested in the topic of American culture. It is really a pity that I miss it. I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient. Thank you very much. Yours, Li Hua【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 1. 本題總分為25分, 按5個(gè)檔次給分。2. 評(píng)分時(shí), 先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次, 然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次, 最后給分。3. 詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的, 從總分中減去2分。4. 評(píng)分時(shí), 應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容是: 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性。5. 拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予 以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。6. 如書寫較差，以致影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次?！緝?nèi)容要點(diǎn)】 1. 正確使用表示歉意的語句。 2. 陳述理由：母親生病，陪她去醫(yī)院看病。 3. 詢問是否有錄音，以便過后補(bǔ)聽講座。 4. 語氣符合學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的情況?！靖鳈n次的給分范圍和要求】 第五檔21分25分完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。-覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；-應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；-語法或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高詞匯 所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力；-有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔16分20分完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。-覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；-應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)要求；-語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或較高詞匯所致； -應(yīng)用了簡單的語句間連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔11分15分基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。-雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；-應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)要求；-有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解；-應(yīng)用了簡單的語句間連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫；整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二檔6分10分未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容；-語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限；-有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解；-較少使用語句間連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性；信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。第一檔1分5分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。-明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求；-語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限；-較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解；-缺乏語句間連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫；信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。0分未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評(píng)判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清?！緓x高考英語湖北省漢陽市聯(lián)考試題】短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分）請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示并結(jié)合一個(gè)事例，就“潛能無限”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。As we all know, ones potential is limitless. Especially in times of crisis, you can never imagine how powerful ones potential will be. Therefore, its unwise to set limits to your potential. 注意：1） 不得照抄英語提示語；除詩歌外，文體不限；2） 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；詞數(shù)120以上。 【參考范文】Potential is limitlessIts universally acknowledged that a persons potential is limitless. When exposed to various pressure or challenges, many people will be sceptical of themselves, thinking they are incapable. Perhaps, never have they realized how powerful a persons potential will be.An interesting story will never fade from my memory though I heard of it many years ago. An injured soldier was informed that he would spend his rest life on the wheelchair. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink every day. It never rains but pours.One day, hardly had he got out of a pub when he was robbed by three guys. Unwilling to give in, he struggled against them, however, which set off the robbers anger and therefore they set fire to his wheelchair. Just when the big fire was endangering his life, he suddenly jumped out of his wheelchair and ran through a whole street swiftly. Then he stopped to take breath, only to find that he should walk and even run normally.The story makes me firmly believe that our potential is limitless. Consequently, its of vital importance for us to spread the wings of our mind and grow our potential to the fullest.