書面表達 開放類精選大題1.【2019屆黑龍江省牡丹江市第一高級中學高三上學期開學摸底考試】假如你是李華，你的父母最近計劃生第二胎。給你校的外籍老師Lucy寫信談?wù)勀愕目捶āＲ螅鹤謹?shù)120左右；參考詞匯：sibling 兄弟姐妹。Dear Lucy,I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Lucy,I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made. They plan to give birth to a second child. How exciting it is!Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health. However, things will change from now on. I am going to have a sibling to play with and share everything with. I will help my parents look after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.However, I am afraid that I know little about how to take good care of a baby and how to set a good example to my future sibling. Could you give me some advice? I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一封書信：你的父母最近計劃生第二胎。給你校的外籍老師Lucy寫信談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：sibling（兄弟姐妹）；give birth to a second child（生二胎）；psychological health（心理健康）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點睛】本文是一封書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。文中使用高級句子如：“I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made.”使用定語從句；“How exciting it is!”運用感嘆句；“Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health.”現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做原因狀語，同時使用“which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；“I will help my parents look after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.”現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語。2.【重慶市第一中學2018屆高三下學期第一次月考】假定你是李華，你們學校下周將舉辦一場以“關(guān)愛動物”為主題的宣傳活動，學生自己設(shè)計海報并展覽。你的朋友Lisa對此很感興趣，請你用英語給她寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1. 時間與地點；2. 活動內(nèi)容。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右;2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【答案】Dear Lisa, Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you. It is probably clear that animals are our friends, sharing the same blue planet with us. The activity aimed at protecting animals is scheduled to be held in April in our school. At that time, it must be a time for you to enjoy yourself to the fullest. At that time, a wide range of splendid activities will be held, thus catching your eyes. Wed like our students to design their own posters and exhibit them, thus arousing students awareness of animals protection. I would appreciate it if you could come to the scene in person. You are highly welcome to our school. A prompt reply is much favored. Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文的話題“關(guān)愛動物”，只有部分的文字提示，所以給考生自由發(fā)揮的空間較大，對于考生的綜合能力要求較高。因此要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。要弄清題意，確定文章的主題，并圍繞中心思想組織材料。接著要認真構(gòu)思，列出簡單的提綱，安排好層次段落，鋪設(shè)好過渡，處理好開頭和結(jié)尾，最后擴展成文。擴展成文時要選擇自己熟悉的短語，句式要靈活多變，同時也要選擇恰當?shù)倪B接詞，把各個部分連成一個完整的整體。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)完成，以簡單句為主，輔以省略句，非謂語，同時還運用了常用句式“I would appreciate it if”，句式較為靈活。句中既有主動語態(tài)，又有大量的被動語態(tài)，相互襯托，豐富了表達形式，從而增加文章的可讀性。高檔詞匯和詞組，如“ be aimed at; be scheduled to; a wide range of splendid activities; to the fullest; catch your eyes; arouse students awareness of” 等增加了文章亮點。本文第一段用一個非謂語作狀語的省略句式：“Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you.”既簡潔又具體地點明了文章的話題“Animals Protection”。第二段中運用了名詞性從句“It is probably clear that animals are our friends, sharing the same blue planet with us.”?！皌hus catching your eyes.”和“thus arousing students awareness of animals protection.”運用了兩個動詞 -ing形式的非謂語作狀語，充分展示了較強的語言表達能力。同時還運用了一個常用句式“I would appreciate it if. “(I would appreciate it if you could come to the scene in person. ）。模擬精做1. 【成都外國語學校2018-2019學年上學期開學考試】假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Michael對中國文化很感興趣。他聽說中國人很重視家風傳承，在給你的電子郵件中提出想了解你家的家風以及家風對你的影響。請你給他回復(fù)一封信。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：家風 family spiritDear Michael,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Michael, How is everything going? Im glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture and that you want to know something about my family spirits. Actually, many good family spirits have been passed down from generation to generation in my family. My grandparents and parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence and most importantly, they have set good examples to me. My family spirits have a profound influence on me, and thus I always follow what they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer a helping hand when others are in need. Besides, I am all the time positive and never stop chasing my goal whenever I run into difficulties. Thanks to those good family spirits, both my life and study run smooth. I hope you will be satisfied with my introduction. By the way, I sincerely invite you to come to China and stay in my home for some time to experience more Chinese culture by yourself. You are warmly welcome. Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇書信類作文。你的美國朋友Peter對中國文化很感興趣。他聽說中國人很重視家風傳承，在給你的電子郵件中提出想了解你家的家風以及家風對你的影響，要求你給他回復(fù)一封信。結(jié)合自己的實際情況寫出你家的家風以及家風對你的影響。文章要寫得簡明扼要，目標明確，具有合理性。并對自己的看法進行總結(jié)。【點睛】本文第一段開門見山地說出“Im glad to know that you are interested in.”。第二段闡明了自己的家風，以被動語態(tài)句式很好地作了開頭：“have been passed down”；第三段講到了家風對自己的影響運用了賓語從句：“thus I always follow what they have taught me”，同時也恰當?shù)剡\用了狀語從句：“I am all the time positive and never stop chasing my goal whenever I run into difficulties.”。  本文中還運用了許多連詞如“Beside; By the way”使文章條理清晰。同時還使用了一些固定短語如“passed down from generation to generation”，“l(fā)ay emphasis on”，“most importantly, set good examples to”，“have a profound influence on me”等，給文章增添了魅力及可讀性?？傊疚慕Y(jié)構(gòu)完整，布局合理，簡明扼要。文中使用了多種句式，如賓語從句的使用，并用恰當?shù)剡\用了固定句式，增加了文章亮點。2.【2019屆湖北省仙桃中學高三8月考試】假如你是李華，你校外教Mr. Brown春節(jié)期間看到鄰居房門上的福字是倒著貼的，感到很好奇，寫信向你詢問此事。請你給他回一封信，介紹福字倒貼的原因和這一傳統(tǒng)的寓意，同時邀請他高考后來你家過端午節(jié)。參考詞匯：端午節(jié)the Dragon Boat Festival；福字the character Fu注意：1.詞數(shù)：100個左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter._Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside down” sounds the same as the character for “to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isnt it?By the way, Id like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. Its a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we usually eat zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本題文體是說明文。話題是向你的外教Mr.Brown介紹福字倒貼的原因和這一傳統(tǒng)的寓意，同時邀請他在高考后來你家過端午節(jié)。寫作要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出，難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語進行準確表述。文中使用了由“as”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句“As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival.”和運用了“that”引導(dǎo)的賓語從句“this means that happiness is arriving.”以及反意疑問句“Quite interesting, isnt it?”還運用了用“it”作形式主語的句子“Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.”。另外，較高級詞匯有如“the same as”，“by the way”，“in memory of”，“l(fā)ook forward to”也為文章增色不少。7