專練二十九 短文寫作(3) 【訓(xùn)練題一】 現(xiàn)在很多中學(xué)生都開啟了自己的微博。一方面，他們把博客作為一個(gè)窗口來展示自己，也可以通過微博來緩解學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力，因此越來越多的中學(xué)生接受這一形式。另一方面，有些家長(zhǎng)和老師卻認(rèn)為整理自己的微博要浪費(fèi)很多時(shí)間和精力，這樣就會(huì)耽誤學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?要求：1. 詞數(shù)120左右； 2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。 參考詞匯 ：微博 microblog 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1. 審題。本文要求根據(jù)漢語提示寫一篇文章，介紹中學(xué)生開啟微博的情況。因?yàn)檎f明的是一現(xiàn)狀，主要使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及對(duì)詞匯和句型等表達(dá)方面的建議。 開頭說明情況：Nowadays， it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own microblogs on the internet. 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，分別說明開微博的好處和弊端：On one hand . but on the other hand . 陳述自己對(duì)這一現(xiàn)狀的看法：As far as I am concerned. 3. 對(duì)語句間銜接成分的建議。 開篇點(diǎn)題，直截了當(dāng)； 使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞，使整個(gè)語篇銜接緊密； 進(jìn)行合理添加，使得文章更完整。 【參考范文】 Nowadays， it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own microblogs on the internet. On one hand， microblogs can be a window to show ourselves and at the same time they can help to relieve the stress of study， which makes microblogs popular with the young. But on the other hand， a lot of parents and teachers worry that the management of microblogs may take too much time and energy， which may affect our studies. As far as I am concerned， opening a microblog is a wonderful idea for teenagers. Through microblogs， we can present ourselves， share ideas； microblogs can broaden our horizons as well. But of course， study should be put on the first place. So， why not open a microblog of you own？ 【訓(xùn)練題二】 假如你是李華的老師張梅，在高考來臨之即，收到李華的一份求助信。在信中李華說，面對(duì)平時(shí)的考試測(cè)驗(yàn)，他感到很緊張。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封120詞左右的回信，建議他如何來克服考前緊張情緒。信的開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 要點(diǎn)：1. 考前做好充分的準(zhǔn)備工作； 2. 正確對(duì)待考試，不要過分強(qiáng)調(diào)分?jǐn)?shù)； 3. 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，作息時(shí)間有規(guī)律； 4. 你的個(gè)人看法。 Dear Li Hua， Im sorry to learn that you are always nervous about tests Yours Miss Zhang 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1. 審題。根據(jù)所給漢語要求寫一封回信給李華，告訴他如何緩解考試的焦慮情緒。作為老師對(duì)他的建議，應(yīng)用第二人稱。時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及對(duì)詞匯和句型等表達(dá)方面的建議。 考前要做好準(zhǔn)備工作：You should study hard and make full preparations. 對(duì)待考試要有正確的態(tài)度，不要過于看重分?jǐn)?shù)： but its more important to have a right attitude towards them . there is no need to worry too much about the results . 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，勞逸結(jié)合：taking proper exercises will benefit you . 個(gè)人補(bǔ)充意見。 對(duì)語句間銜接成分的建議。 首先提出信的主題，直接明了。 使用過渡詞使整個(gè)語篇銜接緊密：As a matter of fact；Besides；Meanwhile等。 倒裝句式、it句型的使用為文章增色： There is no doubt that . Only in this way can you . make it possible for you to . 【參考范文】 Dear Li Hua， Im sorry to learn that you are always nervous about tests. As you know， most middle school students feel somehow nervous whenever theyre taking important exams， just like you. There is no doubt that exams are really important to you， but its more important to have a right attitude towards them. As a matter of fact， exams are no more than a means of checking， and therefore there is no need to worry too much about the results. You should study hard and make full preparations. Only in this way can you avoid suffering from the great pressure of exams. Besides， taking proper exercises will benefit you. For example， going out for a walk or doing some outdoor activities is of help to release your stress. Meanwhile， enough sleep can also make you full of energy and make it possible for you to perform well in the exams. Dont worry about it， and just try to relax whatever happens. Yours Miss Zhang第 5 頁 共 5 頁