寫(xiě)作提分特訓(xùn)(二)第一組第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作(滿分15分)假如你是Sandy Smith,你的筆友Li Hua給你寫(xiě)了一封信,內(nèi)容如下:Dear Sandy, Im writing this letter to ask for help. I will visit England soon,but I know little about the culture of England. Please give me a hand.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua請(qǐng)給Li Hua回一封信,要點(diǎn)如下:1.交通和氣候的注意事項(xiàng)(適應(yīng)靠左行走或駕駛的交通規(guī)則,出門(mén)帶傘等);2.公共場(chǎng)合的注意事項(xiàng) (保持安靜等);3.和英國(guó)人交往的注意事項(xiàng) (尊重隱私等)。注意:1.詞數(shù):80左右,信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.參考詞匯:appointment n.預(yù)約;3.無(wú)需逐條翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。Dear Li Hua,It is a great chance to visit England. Have a good time.Yours sincerely,Sandy SmithOne possible version:Dear Li Hua,It is a great chance to visit England. And Im sure that it will be of some use if you can take the following points into account.First,you should adapt yourself to the basic rules of British traffic,such as driving and walking on the left. Besides,youd better bring an umbrella when going out as the weather there is changeable. Second,please keep quiet even in public places like supermarkets because noise is offensive there. Last but not least,it is impolite to ask questions about ones privacy,which will easily cause misunderstanding.Have a good time.Yours sincerely,Sandy Smith第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě),使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Once upon a time,two brothers who lived on neighbouring farms fell into conflict.It was the first serious disagreement in forty years of farming side by side,sharing machinery,and trading labour and goods as needed without a hitch.Then the long cooperation fell apart.It began with a small misunderstanding and then grew into a major difference,and finally it exploded into an exchange of bitter words followed by weeks of silence.One morning,there was a knock on Johns door.He opened it to find a man with a carpenters toolbox.“Im looking for a few days work,” he said.“Perhaps you have a few jobs here and there.Could I help you?” “Yes,” said John.“I do have a job for you.Look across the small creek at that farm.Thats my neighbor.In fact,its my younger brother.Last week there was a meadow between us and he took his bulldozer(推土機(jī))there and now there is a creek between us.Well,he may have done this to annoy me but Ill do better.See that pile of wood by the barn(谷倉(cāng))?I want you to build a fencean 8-foot-high fenceso I wont need to see his place anymore.”The carpenter said,“I think I understand the situation.Show me the nails and hole-digger and Ill be able to do a job that pleases you.” The older brother had to go to the town for supplies,so he helped the carpenter get everything ready and then he left.The carpenter worked hard all that day measuring,sawing and nailing.At sunset when John returned,the carpenter had just finished his job.Johns eyes opened wide,his jaw dropped.注意:1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好;4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1:There was no fence at all.It was a bridge! Paragraph 2:They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder. One possible version:There was no fence at all.It was a bridge!A bridge stretched from one side of the creek to the other!John was about to complain about everything,when he found the neighbor,his younger brother,was coming across the bridge,his hands outstretched.“You are quite a fellow to build this bridge after all I have said and done,” said Johns brother.The two brothers met in the middle,taking each others hand and hugging each other.They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder.“No,wait!Stay a few more days.We have more jobs for you,” said the older brother.“Id love to stay on,” the carpenter said.“but I have many more bridges to build.” Observing the carpenter leaving,the two brothers waved grateful goodbye to him.What a thought-provoking story! Every day we have the choice of building a fence or a bridge.One leads to separation and anger while the other leads to openness and friendship.第二組第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作(滿分15分)假定你是李華。你下周四因故不能出席外教Smith的英語(yǔ)文學(xué)課,打算向他請(qǐng)假。請(qǐng)給Smith寫(xiě)一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.寫(xiě)信目的;2.原因及歉意;3.彌補(bǔ)措施;4.希望批準(zhǔn)。注意:1.詞數(shù) 80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。One possible version:Dear Ms.Smith,Id like to ask for a leave of absence from your lecture on English literature next Thursday for a personal reason.A British friend is scheduled to arrive then,so Im obliged to meet him at the airport.Words cant convey my apology and pity that Ill miss your enlightening class.To make up the missed class,I wonder if it could be recorded for me.Id appreciate it if you could approve my request.Yours,Li Hua第二節(jié)概要寫(xiě)作(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。With global warming and melting ice,it isnt easy being a polar bear anymore. Some studies have predicted that polar bears could die out by the end of the century. The good news is not all researchers think the bears are absolutely disappearing. Scientists at the American Museum of Natural History(AMNH) have published a new paper indicating that things might not be as bad for polar bears as some scientists expect. To understand the reason for the researchers cautious optimism,we must first understand the factors that are threatening the polar bears existence. Polar bears consume a diet of mainly young seals. In order to hunt these seals,polar bears need to rest at the top of sea icethe same ice that is increasingly melting for most of the year thanks to climate change. In another 50 years,experts expect that the Arctic will be too warm for sea ice to form for half of the year,leaving polar bears without a reliable food source and in serious danger of starvation. As it turns out,alternative food sources for the polar bears arent completely out of the question. For as long as biologists have tailed after the animals,theyve seen polar bears eating animals found on land like caribou(馴鹿) and snow geeseas well as the snow geeses eggs. Can polar bears actually survive off these alternative food sources for long periods of time? To figure this out,researchers calculated the nutrients that a caribou and snow geese diet would provide. They found that even adult male polar bears would be able to obtain more calories than they would burn in hunting these meals. Moreover,the food would provide the food necessary to avoid starvation during the summer months. Unfortunately,not all polar bears have tended to seek food on land. That said,the researchers expect that necessity would push more polar bears to hunt on land to avoid starvation. They also expect that the bears could learn from their fellow bears how to hunt on land until the practice becomes second nature. One possible version:With global warming and melting ice,some scientists think that polar bears could die out by the end of the century.(要點(diǎn)1)However,other scientists dont think so. They have found polar bears have found alternative food sources and they can survive by hunting animals on land instead of seals.(要點(diǎn)2)The researchers expect all polar bears learn how to hunt on land to avoid starvation.(要點(diǎn)3)