江蘇省2019高考英語(yǔ) 第三部分 寫(xiě)作層級(jí)訓(xùn)練 第一步 循序漸進(jìn)提升寫(xiě)作技能 第八講 巧奪天工的連篇技巧課件.ppt
第八講巧奪天工的連篇技巧,有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分巧妙地銜接過(guò)渡,利用好“開(kāi)篇、承接、轉(zhuǎn)折、總結(jié)”四個(gè)方法使文章流暢自然,是考生在書(shū)面表達(dá)題目上爭(zhēng)創(chuàng)高分的非常重要的條件。一、開(kāi)篇?jiǎng)?chuàng)造良好開(kāi)端1.常用表達(dá)“開(kāi)篇”的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)(常用在段落或文章的開(kāi)頭),first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,atpresent,lately,currently等。,2.常用表達(dá)“開(kāi)篇”的句型,(1)Itisoftensaidthat.(2)Astheproverbsays.(3)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.(4)Itisclear/obviousthat.(5)Manypeopleoftenask.FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.(陜西卷)ItsoftensaidthatallworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.Astheproverbsays,nopains,nogains.(北京卷),二、承接順勢(shì)承上又啟下1.常用表達(dá)“承接”的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ),secondly,inaddition,besides,moreover,whatismore,whatisworse,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,atthesametime,nodoubtmeanwhile,asaconsequence等。,2.常用表達(dá)“承接”的句型:,(1)Itistruethat.(2)Everybodyknowsthat.(3)Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat.(4)Noonecandenythat.(5)Thereasonwhy.isthat.(6)Thereisnodoubtthat.(7)Totake.forexample(instance).,(8)Whatismoreseriousisthat.Inaddition,IwillgoonatriptoSichuan,wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Meanwhile,Iwillregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.Asaconsequence,childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.,三、轉(zhuǎn)折利用轉(zhuǎn)折巧過(guò)渡1.常用表達(dá)“轉(zhuǎn)折”的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ),but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,inanycase,or,orelse,while,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof,instead等。,2.常用表達(dá)“轉(zhuǎn)折”的句型,(1)Everycoinhastwosides.(2)Butfor.Iwouldnever.(3)Anotherexampleisthat.(4)Takingeverythingintoconsideration.(5)ThatswhyIfeelthat.Therewillbemanychallengesahead,butIhaveconfidencethatIlltakeontheburden.However,itisnotsoeasyforpeopletorealizetheirdreamseverytime.,四、總結(jié)完美結(jié)束全文常用表達(dá)“總結(jié)”的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ):inaword,ingeneral,inshort,aboveall,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary,asaresult,onthewhole,inonesopinion等。1.Somethingmustbedoneto.2.Itcanbesafelyconcludedfrom.that.3.Inmyopinion,wecandrawtheconclusionthat.4.Itmaybesummedupasfollows.,常用表達(dá)“總結(jié)”的句型:Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows:itshightimethatourgovernmenttooksomemeasurestoimproveourenvironment.Inmyopinion,peopleneedtolearntoaccepttherealityandkeepontrying.,跟蹤訓(xùn)練,.完成句子1._theInternet,putersplayanimportantroleinpeopleslife.2._,themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.3._,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.,隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展,計(jì)算機(jī)在人們的生活中起著重要作用??偟膩?lái)說(shuō),你練習(xí)越多,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作就越熟練。就拿北京來(lái)說(shuō)吧,它是世界上最古老的都市之一。,Withthedevelopmentof,Generallyspeaking/Onthewhole/Ingeneral,TakeBeijingforexample,4._,ifyouwanttosucceed,youhavetobelieveinyourself.5._,Ilovewealth,butIvaluehealthmore.6._,peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.7._,agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.,也就是說(shuō),如果你想成功,必須相信自己。就我而言,我喜歡財(cái)富,但我更看重健康。按照我的觀點(diǎn),人們不應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙。總之,一個(gè)好市民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。,Thatistosay,AsfarasIamconcerned,Inmyopinion,Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup,8._,ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.9._,ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones,wewilllosethemunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.,另外,我們班還組織了各種各樣的活動(dòng)來(lái)豐富我們的業(yè)余時(shí)間。更糟的是,如果我們?cè)陔娫捝匣ㄙM(fèi)過(guò)多的時(shí)間,我們會(huì)失去將來(lái)需要的交際技能。,Besides/Whatsmore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore,Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse,.完成短文1._,Icollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.2._Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.3._,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.首先,我把所有的書(shū)籍、報(bào)紙和其他的散落在屋子里的東西收集起來(lái)放好,然后我掃去所有家具上的灰塵,之后我掃地、拖地。,Firstly,Then,Afterthat,.翻譯句子1.努力學(xué)習(xí),你就會(huì)升入重點(diǎn)大學(xué)。2.游泳不但對(duì)身體有好處,而且能培養(yǎng)我們的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志。3.然而,使你最驚訝的是下述新的功能。4.相反,智能手機(jī)不僅占用我們寶貴的時(shí)間,而且對(duì)我們的健康造成極大的危害。,_,Workhard,andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.,Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth,butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.,However,whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction.,Onthecontrary,smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime,butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.,5.多虧醫(yī)生的及時(shí)治療,他獲救了。6.因此,我建議應(yīng)該給我們更多的時(shí)間用于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)和睡眠。7.只要你不灰心,就一定會(huì)成功。8.如果我們忽視我們的未來(lái),就像圖畫(huà)中的這個(gè)人一樣,我們就會(huì)以失敗告終。,_,Thankstothedoctorstimelytreatment,hewassaved.,Therefore,Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.,Aslongasyoudontloseheart,youresuretosucceed.,Ifweneglectourfuture,wellendupinfailureaswhathappenstothemaninthepicture.,.用方框內(nèi)的過(guò)渡詞完成下面的短文second,so,asaresult,despite,on(the)onehand,whatsworse,insteadof,inaword,ontheotherhand,asiswell-known1._,onlineshoppingisbeingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.2._,onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.3._searchingacrowdedstore,wejustneedtowatchtheputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.4._,itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedonthavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third,wecanseealotofgoodsshownontheputerscreenatthesametime.,Asiswell-known,Ontheonehand,Insteadof,Second,5._,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownontheputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.6._,wecanbecheatedeasily.7._,wecannotseethethingsindetail.8._,9._thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.10._weshoulddevelopit.,Ontheotherhand,Asaresult,Whatsworse,Inaword,despite,So,