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1、高考書面表達訓(xùn)練如何審題、如何遣詞造句,最近，你校師生幫助輟學(xué)的李明同學(xué)返校。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀介紹這一情況。,,注意：1、信的開頭已為你寫好。2、詞數(shù)：100左右。3、參考詞匯：捐款offermoney;募捐collectmoney,如何審題？,,,如何審題？,,,1、審定體裁、題材；2、審定人稱；3、審定時態(tài)；4、審定要點；5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)。,1、審定體裁、題材：2、審定人稱：3、審定時態(tài)：4、審定要點：5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)：,審題提示:,,,①書信、李明遭遇②第三和第一人稱③現(xiàn)在時、過去時④見題干⑤可分為兩段,學(xué)生習作1：,,LiMingwasonetopstudentsof

2、ourschool.Hewasgoodathisstudiesandalwaysreadytohelpothers.However,hehastoleaveschool.Hisfatherdiedandhismotherisseriouslyillinbed.,Correctmistakesifany!,學(xué)生習作2：,,學(xué)生習作2：,Thewholeschoolwasshockedatthenewsandanxiousaboutit.Quicklytheydecidedtohelphimout.Everyteacherandstudentofferedmoneytohimandsomestud

3、entswenttolookafterhismotherinturn.Atweekendstheywentouttocollectmoney.,Correctmistakesifany!,學(xué)生習作3：,Withtheirhelp,LiMingwillreturntoschoolsoon.That’sall.Thankyou.Yours,WeiFang,Correctmistakesifany!,Deareditor，I’mwritingtotellyouwhattheteachersandstudentshavedonetohelpastudentwhodiscontinuedhisstudi

4、esinourschool.LiMingisastudentofourschool.Heisnotonlygoodathisstudiesbutalsoalwaysreadytohelpothers.Buthehadtoleaveschoolbecausehisfatherdiedandhismotherisseriouslyill.Asaresult,hehadtomakemoneytohelphisfamily.Hearingthenews,alltheteachersandstudentswereshocked.InordertohelpLiMing,wedecidedtooffermo

5、neytohimandsomestudentswentouttocollectmoneyforhiminthestreets.Withourhelp,LiMinghasalreadyreturnedtoschool.Withbestwishes!(100)Yours,WeiFang,,,學(xué)生佳作欣賞！,,,,高考范文家鄉(xiāng)變化,,DearBob,It’s…myhometownJiangcheng.①ThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiangRiver.②Itisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.③Itseconomyhasbeend

6、evelopingrapidlyinthepasttenyears.④Newfactories,houseshavebeenbuilt.⑤Moreschoolsandhospitalsareavailableforitspeople.⑥However,therearesomeproblems,suchaswaterandairpollutionandheavytrafficinrushhours.⑦Inmyopinion,Jiangchengshoulddevelopitseconomyscientifically.⑧Iwouldalsothinkthatthegrowthpopulation

7、shouldbebroughtundercontrolsothatwe’llhaveabetterhometowninfuture.,請賞析高考書面表達如何遣詞造句！,如何遣詞造句？,掌握5種簡單句句型1、主語＋連系動詞＋表語；2、主語＋vi.3、主語＋vt.＋賓語；4、主語＋vt.＋雙賓語；5、主語＋vt.＋復(fù)合賓語；,最常見的連系動詞？,1、be；2、look,feel,smell,sound,taste；3、seem,appear；4、become,get,turn,come,go,grow；5、continue,keep,remain,；6、come,fall,prove,turnou

8、t；,1、會后，她看起來有點疲倦。2、他好像在寫什么東西。3、夏季，雞蛋容易變壞(go)。4、她知道她必須保持鎮(zhèn)靜(keep)。5、她終于夢想成真(come)。,請用適當?shù)倪B系動詞造句：,英語中最常見的四十個及物動詞,agreeaskbelieveconsidercontinuedecideexpectenjoyfeelfindfinishforgetgethavehearhelphopeimagineknowlearnlikemindneednoticeofferorderpreferpretendpromiseregretremembersayseesuggesttellthinkwant

9、warnwatchwish,,請按要求將下列句子翻譯成英文,1、我們班有50個學(xué)生（來自農(nóng)村）(therebe)。2、昨天是小王打掃了教室(it…that)。3、我認為學(xué)好英語很重要(it)。4、為了在高考中取得好成績，我們正努力學(xué)習(inorderto,inorderthat)。5、他起得遲，結(jié)果又遲到了(sothat)。,高考書面表達五大常用句型,1、Therebe句型；2、Itis(was)+被強調(diào)部分+that(who)…；3、it作形式主語或形式賓語的句型；4、to…/inorderto…/soasto…/sothat…/inorderthat…表示“目的”5、so…that…/su

10、ch…that…/so…asto…/…enoughto…/too…to…表示“結(jié)果”,,書面表達解題步驟：,,1、審，即：審定體裁、題材、人稱、時態(tài)、結(jié)構(gòu)等；2、編，即：編寫要點，按順序列出；3、寫，即：連詞成句，連句成文；4、查，即：查內(nèi)容，查格式，查語法，查書寫等。,,,,求職信,,,1、LiHua，22，theEnglishDepartmentofYangzhouUniversity；2、begoodatEnglishlistening，speakalittleGerman,operateacomputer；3、workasatypist,aguide；4、getmoreinformat

11、ionfrom,go…foratalk；,審定要點：,,Dearsir,IhavejustreadinthenewspaperthatasecretaryoftheEnglishlanguageiswantedinyourcompany.Iamthereforewritingtoyoutointroducemyself.Idliketogetthejob.MynameisLiHua,acollegestudentof22.NowIamstudyingintheEnglishDepartmentofYangzhouUniversity.NotonlycanIlistento,speak,read

12、andwriteEnglishwell,butalsoIcanreadandspeakalittleGerman.Besides,Icanoperatethecomputer.OnceIworkedasatypistduringmysparetime,andasaguideduringsummerholidays.ThebossesIworkedforwereallsatisfiedwithmywork.Youcangetmoreinformationaboutmefrommyuniversity.Iamwillingtovisityourfirmatanytimeforatalk.Withbestwishes.(103)Yoursfaithfully,LiPing,學(xué)生佳作欣賞!,Correctanymistakesinyourpartner’scompositionifthereareany.,Homework,Thanksforyourattention!,Goodbye!,