高考書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練如何審題、如何遣詞造句,最近，你校師生幫助輟學(xué)的李明同學(xué)返校。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀介紹這一情況。,注意：1、信的開頭已為你寫好。2、詞數(shù)：100左右。3、參考詞匯：捐款offermoney;募捐collectmoney,如何審題？,如何審題？,1、審定體裁、題材；2、審定人稱；3、審定時(shí)態(tài)；4、審定要點(diǎn)；5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)。,1、審定體裁、題材：2、審定人稱：3、審定時(shí)態(tài)：4、審定要點(diǎn)：5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)：,審題提示:,書信、李明遭遇第三和第一人稱現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過去時(shí)見題干可分為兩段,學(xué)生習(xí)作1：,LiMingwasonetopstudentsofourschool.Hewasgoodathisstudiesandalwaysreadytohelpothers.However,hehastoleaveschool.Hisfatherdiedandhismotherisseriouslyillinbed.,Correctmistakesifany!,學(xué)生習(xí)作2：,學(xué)生習(xí)作2：,Thewholeschoolwasshockedatthenewsandanxiousaboutit.Quicklytheydecidedtohelphimout.Everyteacherandstudentofferedmoneytohimandsomestudentswenttolookafterhismotherinturn.Atweekendstheywentouttocollectmoney.,Correctmistakesifany!,學(xué)生習(xí)作3：,Withtheirhelp,LiMingwillreturntoschoolsoon.Thatsall.Thankyou.Yours,WeiFang,Correctmistakesifany!,Deareditor，Imwritingtotellyouwhattheteachersandstudentshavedonetohelpastudentwhodiscontinuedhisstudiesinourschool.LiMingisastudentofourschool.Heisnotonlygoodathisstudiesbutalsoalwaysreadytohelpothers.Buthehadtoleaveschoolbecausehisfatherdiedandhismotherisseriouslyill.Asaresult,hehadtomakemoneytohelphisfamily.Hearingthenews,alltheteachersandstudentswereshocked.InordertohelpLiMing,wedecidedtooffermoneytohimandsomestudentswentouttocollectmoneyforhiminthestreets.Withourhelp,LiMinghasalreadyreturnedtoschool.Withbestwishes!(100)Yours,WeiFang,學(xué)生佳作欣賞！,高考范文家鄉(xiāng)變化,DearBob,ItsmyhometownJiangcheng.ThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiangRiver.Itisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.Itseconomyhasbeendevelopingrapidlyinthepasttenyears.Newfactories,houseshavebeenbuilt.Moreschoolsandhospitalsareavailableforitspeople.However,therearesomeproblems,suchaswaterandairpollutionandheavytrafficinrushhours.Inmyopinion,Jiangchengshoulddevelopitseconomyscientifically.Iwouldalsothinkthatthegrowthpopulationshouldbebroughtundercontrolsothatwellhaveabetterhometowninfuture.,請(qǐng)賞析高考書面表達(dá)如何遣詞造句！,如何遣詞造句？,掌握5種簡(jiǎn)單句句型1、主語(yǔ)連系動(dòng)詞表語(yǔ)；2、主語(yǔ)vi.3、主語(yǔ)vt.賓語(yǔ)；4、主語(yǔ)vt.雙賓語(yǔ)；5、主語(yǔ)vt.復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)；,最常見的連系動(dòng)詞？,1、be；2、look,feel,smell,sound,taste；3、seem,appear；4、become,get,turn,come,go,grow；5、continue,keep,remain,；6、come,fall,prove,turnout；,1、會(huì)后，她看起來有點(diǎn)疲倦。2、他好像在寫什么東西。3、夏季，雞蛋容易變壞(go)。4、她知道她必須保持鎮(zhèn)靜(keep)。5、她終于夢(mèng)想成真(come)。,請(qǐng)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B系動(dòng)詞造句：,英語(yǔ)中最常見的四十個(gè)及物動(dòng)詞,agreeaskbelieveconsidercontinuedecideexpectenjoyfeelfindfinishforgetgethavehearhelphopeimagineknowlearnlikemindneednoticeofferorderpreferpretendpromiseregretremembersayseesuggesttellthinkwantwarnwatchwish,請(qǐng)按要求將下列句子翻譯成英文,1、我們班有50個(gè)學(xué)生（來自農(nóng)村）(therebe)。2、昨天是小王打掃了教室(itthat)。3、我認(rèn)為學(xué)好英語(yǔ)很重要(it)。4、為了在高考中取得好成績(jī)，我們正努力學(xué)習(xí)(inorderto,inorderthat)。5、他起得遲，結(jié)果又遲到了(sothat)。,高考書面表達(dá)五大常用句型,1、Therebe句型；2、Itis(was)+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that(who)；3、it作形式主語(yǔ)或形式賓語(yǔ)的句型；4、to/inorderto/soasto/sothat/inorderthat表示“目的”5、sothat/suchthat/soasto/enoughto/tooto表示“結(jié)果”,書面表達(dá)解題步驟：,1、審，即：審定體裁、題材、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、結(jié)構(gòu)等；2、編，即：編寫要點(diǎn)，按順序列出；3、寫，即：連詞成句，連句成文；4、查，即：查內(nèi)容，查格式，查語(yǔ)法，查書寫等。,求職信,1、LiHua，22，theEnglishDepartmentofYangzhouUniversity；2、begoodatEnglishlistening，speakalittleGerman,operateacomputer；3、workasatypist,aguide；4、getmoreinformationfrom,goforatalk；,審定要點(diǎn)：,Dearsir,IhavejustreadinthenewspaperthatasecretaryoftheEnglishlanguageiswantedinyourcompany.Iamthereforewritingtoyoutointroducemyself.Idliketogetthejob.MynameisLiHua,acollegestudentof22.NowIamstudyingintheEnglishDepartmentofYangzhouUniversity.NotonlycanIlistento,speak,readandwriteEnglishwell,butalsoIcanreadandspeakalittleGerman.Besides,Icanoperatethecomputer.OnceIworkedasatypistduringmysparetime,andasaguideduringsummerholidays.ThebossesIworkedforwereallsatisfiedwithmywork.Youcangetmoreinformationaboutmefrommyuniversity.Iamwillingtovisityourfirmatanytimeforatalk.Withbestwishes.(103)Yoursfaithfully,LiPing,學(xué)生佳作欣賞!,Correctanymistakesinyourpartnerscompositionifthereareany.,Homework,Thanksforyourattention!,Goodbye!,