高三英語小卷子 短文改錯2 命題人：顧淑萍 審查人：顧淑萍 (一)　I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen Magazine have a happy ending．While these are pleasantly to read，one has to ask how it is possible that there is so much optimism．I’m all for positive thinking，and readers should also be exposed by the darker side of life．Why publish a story about someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，that’s life． 　　Not every story have a happy ending．I think this would benefit from Teen Magazine’s readers to see both kinds：happy and real 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　(二) 　When I was a senior in a high school，I had a teacher calling Mrs Smith．She taught English and she has an important effect on me．She was fill of love for us．She had our class to make posters and hang it around the school．She taught us that one kindly act can go long way．Well，Mrs Smith passed away just a couple of year ago after a long battle with the breast cancer．I’ll never forget how a wonderful and sweet lady she was．I am truly blessed to have been known her．I am going to be a teacher like her and I’ll always remember her kindness． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (三) China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating hack more than 4000 year．Basic elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money，or compasses originated in China．Today，China is again at the forefront of world，with Chinese goods reach all parts of the world．The Chinese culture have also fascinated many people．In the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing，China has its unique arts and architectures that what draw thousands of visitors every year．The Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is loved by much non-Chinese．But in China，the food can found in great varieties and is different in region to region．So join us and experience all these． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (四)At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match．Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a game in that players kicked a ball to each other．Therefore，my father loves football During the World Cup in 2006，my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport．Seeing him strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball，I decided to sit down to watch the game，I found game exciting，and my dad explained for the rules．We shared our joy．Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　(五) When Jack bowed to someone，he always did it much too quickly．They needn’t to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head．So he was bland for no manner．Then a warm-hearted man teaches him，“When you bow to somebody next time，you can count the January，F(xiàn)ebruary，March，until December．Then you can lift your body．Thus，the ceremony will almost perfect”．The next day，he met his uncle，but be did as the man told him to．The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look．When Jack looked down，he found his uncle gone．So he asked a passer-by，“In which month did she go away?” 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　 　(六)In order to be successful，you should first of all never give up whatever happen．If you fail，you should never lose heart．In the contrary，you must build up your confidence or work even harder．You should always remember that working hard was the key to success，Besides，you should pay a great attention to your working methods．That is necessary for you to take every chance improve them．Finally，you should try to get along well with your co-workers，cared for each other and helping each other．If you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in the future． 2013高考英語專題總復(fù)習短文改錯精練 答案與解析部分 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(一) 　　I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen 　　　　　　　　　　 　 many　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　published Magazine have a happy ending．While these are pleasantly to read，one has to ask 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　pleasant how it is possible that there is so much optimism．I’m all for positive thinking，and 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 but readers should also be exposed by the darker side of life．Why ∧ publish a story about 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 to 　　　　　　　　　　　　　not someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，that’s life． 　　　 who/that 　　Not every story have a happy ending．I think this would benefit Teen 　　　　　　　　　　 has　　　　　　　　　　　　it Magazine’s readers to see both kinds：happy and real. 　　答案解析： 　　第一處：works指“作品”時為可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)該用many而不是much修飾； 　　第二處：publishing in Teen Magazine作為works的定語，跟所修飾的名詞為被動關(guān)系，該用過去分 　　　　　　詞； 　　第三處：做表語應(yīng)該用形容詞而不是副詞，把pleasantly改為pleasant. 　　第四處：and的上下文是轉(zhuǎn)折而不是并列關(guān)系，把and改為but. 　　第五處：be exposed to 為固定搭配，意為“遭受,暴露于……”。 　　第六處：Why not...?是表示提建議的固定句型，所以在why后加上not. 　　第七處：在這個定語從句someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return?中， 　　　　　　需要關(guān)系代詞而不是whose充當從句的主語，把whose改為who/ that. 　　第八處：every story為單數(shù)名詞，謂語應(yīng)該用單數(shù)，把have改為has. 　　第九處：在本句中，it為形式賓語，真正的賓語為后面的不定式，this不能做形式賓語，改為it. 　　第十處：benefit做動詞意為“有益于, 得益”；benefit from意為“從……受益”，去掉from. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(二) 　　When I was a senior in a high school，I had a teacher calling Mrs Smith．She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　called taught English and she has an important effect on me．She was fill of love for us．She 　　　　　　　　　　　 had　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 full had our class make posters and hang it around the school．She taught us that one 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 them kindly act can go ∧ long way．Well，Mrs Smith passed away just a couple of year ago kind 　　　　　　a　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 years after a long battle with the breast cancer．I’ll never forget how a wonderful and sweet 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 what lady she was．I am truly blessed to have known her．I am going to be a teacher like her and I’ll always remember her kindness． 　　答案解析： 　　第一處：calling Mrs Smith做teacher的定語，和被修飾的名詞是被動關(guān)系，用過去分詞； 　　第二處：本文講述的過去的事情，應(yīng)該用過去式 　　第三處：fill為動詞；be full of為固定搭配； 　　第四處：本句的結(jié)構(gòu)為have sb do sth（讓……做……），應(yīng)該省略to. 　　第五處：指代前面posters用復(fù)數(shù)代詞them; 　　第六處：修飾名詞act應(yīng)該用形容詞kind而不是副詞; 　　第七處：a long way一段很長的路程，加上a; 　　第八處：a couple of修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞，years應(yīng)該改為復(fù)數(shù)。 　　第九處：forget所帶賓語從句中的表語部分用what, how的后面應(yīng)該緊跟形容詞或副詞。 　　第十處：此處應(yīng)該是“主動”了解她，故應(yīng)該用to do的主動完成形式to have known. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(三) 　　China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating hack more than 4000 year． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 years Basic elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money， or 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 and compasses originated in China．Today，China is again at the forefront of ∧ world，with 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　the Chinese goods reach all parts of the world．The Chinese culture have also fascinated 　　　　　　 reaching 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　has many people．In the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing，China has its unique arts and architectures that draw thousands of visitors every year．The Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 equally loved by much non-Chinese．But in China，the food can ∧ found in great varieties and is 　　　　 many　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　be different in region to region．So join us and experience all these． 　　　　 from 　　答案解析： 　　第一處：4000年應(yīng)該用year的復(fù)試形式y(tǒng)ears，因為此處不是做主語表一段時間。 　　第二處：“四大發(fā)明”之間是并列關(guān)系而不是選擇關(guān)系，把or改為and. 　　第三處：此處world指前文出現(xiàn)過的the modern world，第二次出現(xiàn)該加the， 　　第四處：在本句中，with為介詞，Chinese goods是介詞的賓語，作為介詞賓語的補語應(yīng)該用非謂語 　　第五處：“The Chinese culture”是單數(shù)概念，謂語形式用單數(shù)has。 　　第六處：關(guān)系代詞that在本句中充當定語從句的主語，不能再用what充當從句的主語， 　　第七處：此處修飾be popular的 應(yīng)為副詞equally, 因為形容詞修飾名詞代詞，副詞修飾動詞、副詞 　　第八處：non-Chinese指“非中國人”，是可數(shù)名詞，表示復(fù)數(shù),用many限定。 　　第九處：本句的主語為the food，是“被發(fā)現(xiàn)”，在句中作謂語，用被動語態(tài)的謂語結(jié)構(gòu)can be done. 　　第十處：from region to region ”是“從一個地區(qū)到另一個地區(qū)”的意思。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　(四) 　　At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　watch match．Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　it game in that players kicked a ball to each other．Therefore，my father loves football 　　　　which　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 However During the World Cup in 2006，my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　stayed sport．Seeing him strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball，I decided to 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　running sit down to watch the game，I found ∧ game exciting，and my dad explained the 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 the rules．We shared our joy．Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 bad 　　答案解析： 　　第一處：and連接并列的不定式結(jié)構(gòu)，應(yīng)用動詞原形。 　　第二處：it在thought后面的賓語從句中作形式主語。 　　第三處：in which構(gòu)成介詞加關(guān)系代詞型的定語從句。 　　第四處：however表示轉(zhuǎn)折，放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗號與句子其他成分隔開。 　　第五處：本文主體時態(tài)是一般過去時。 　　第六處：his修飾后面的名詞interest。 　　第七處：running after a ball是現(xiàn)在分詞短語修飾men。 　　第八處：found后加the，the game特指前面的足球運動。 　　第九處：explain為及物動詞，for應(yīng)刪除。 　　第十處：形容詞修飾名詞。　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　(五) 　　When Jack bowed to someone，he always did it much too quickly．They needn’t wait any longer after he finished nodding his head．So he was bland for no manner． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　manners Then a warm-hearted man teaches him，“When you bow to somebody next time， 　　　　　　　　　　　　taught you can count January，F(xiàn)ebruary，March，until December．Then you can lift your body． Thus，the ceremony will ∧ almost perfect”．The next day，he met his uncle， 　　　　　　　　　　　　be but be did as the man told him to．The bow was too long that it made his uncle and 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　so escape soon with a surprising look．When Jack looked down，he found his uncle 　　　　　　　　　 surprised　　　　　　　　　　　 up gone．So he asked a passer-by，“In which month did she go away?” 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 he 　　答案解析： 　　第一處：此處用了needn’t，表明用作情態(tài)動詞，情態(tài)動詞后接動詞原形，去掉to. 　　第二處：manner意為“態(tài)度、禮貌”是用復(fù)數(shù)形式。 　　第三處：本文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，老師是“過去”教他，用過去的動詞謂語，teach改為taught. 　　第四處：月份的前面不需要定冠詞，去掉the. 　　第五處：引號中的話為直接引語，will為助動詞，perfect為形容詞，需要補充be動詞，。 　　第六處：“...he met his uncle”和“he did as...”兩個動作之間是承接關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系， 　　第七處：本句的句子結(jié)構(gòu)為“so...that...”句型結(jié)構(gòu)，把too改為so. 　　第八處：從上文看，應(yīng)該是帶著一副“感到驚奇”的表情，用surprised. 　　第九處：結(jié)合上文邏輯，Jack是低著頭的，他只有“l(fā)ooked up”，才發(fā)現(xiàn)情況。 　　第十處：根據(jù)上文，離開的是uncle，用he指代。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(六) 　　In order to be successful，you should first of all never give up whatever happen． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 happens If you fail，you should never lose heart．In the contrary，you must build up your 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　On confidence or work even harder．You should always remember that working hard was 　　　　　 and 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　is the key to success，Besides，you should pay great attention to your working methods． That is necessary for you to take every chance ∧ improve them．Finally，you should try It 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　to to get along well with your co-workers， cared for each other and helping each other． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　caring If you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in the future． 　　　　　　　　　 rules　　　　 certainly 　　答案解析： 　　第一處：在give up所帶賓語從句中，whatever是從句主語，謂語應(yīng)該用“三單”形式，happens. 　　第二處：On the contrary為固定搭配。 　　第三處：“build up your confidence”和“work even harder”之間是承接關(guān)系，用and代替or. 　　第四處：本文所述道理為一般道理，用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，把was改為is. 　　第五處：pay attention to為固定短語，不含有不定代詞a. 　　第六處：本句的真正主語為不定式短語，只能用it而不是that來做形式主語，把that改為it. 　　第七處：take every chance的目的是“improve them”，插入to做目的狀語。 　　第八處：本句已有謂語should try，那么care只能做伴隨狀語，對句子的主語而言是“主動”關(guān)愛彼此，用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。 　　第九處：上文列舉幾條規(guī)則，則此處rule應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式rules. 　　第十處：謂語部分為will achieve，修飾謂語的詞應(yīng)為副詞，故用certainly代替certain