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1、書面表達,話題寫作（七） 情感表達篇,【話題點睛】話題來源于學生日常生活中對某件事情的經(jīng)歷及感受,常見的情感類表達有愛、快樂、微笑、幸福、痛苦和煩惱等。,典例分析,2018衢州模擬 假如你是張凱,以下是你的加拿大筆友Tony發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件,請你根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Tony回復并提出你自己的觀點。,要求 (1)請回復郵件中所提及的問題,可適當發(fā)揮; (2)文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等相關信息; (3)詞數(shù):90110。 _______________________________________________________________________________________

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3、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,【思路點撥】 1.要點提煉:通過Tony向

4、朋友抱怨父母對自己的不理解以及要求自己做一些自己不愿意做的事情,從而提出主題“怎樣和父母相處?”。要注意圍繞主題以及真情實感的表達。本文可從以下方面展開: (1)提出觀點:肯定父母的做法并非惡意,甚至應感到是幸運的; (2)具體論述:父母要求你所做的一切源于什么目的和原因; (3)提出建議:要理解父母,并注意怎樣和父母相處; (4)本文涉及提建議,注意should, can, try to do等詞的使用。 2.確定時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時 3.確定人稱:第二人稱,【寫作架構】,【基礎寫作】 .寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補全下列各句。) 1.擁有這樣的父母你很幸運。(lucky) Its for you

5、such good parents. 2.你應該理解并且尊重你的父母。(understand) You and respect them. 3.如果你有任何問題,要和你的父母交談并且和他們分享你的想法。(talk; share) you have any problems, just your parents and your ideas with them. 4.他們讓你吃雞蛋是為了你能有一個強壯的體魄。(make; so that) They you eat eggs you can have a body. 5.我希望你能和你的父母相處得好。(get on well with) I

6、you can your parents.,lucky,to have,should understand,If,talk with,share,make,so that,strong,hope,get on well with,.句子升格(按括號中的要求完成句子。) 1.They want you to work harder. They hope you can get a good job in the future. (用because改為復合句) 2.You dont want to do like this. You should have a talk with them.(改為

7、用if 引導的復合句) 3.They dont allow me to go out alone at night. (改為被動語態(tài)) 4.Your parents are not terrible. I think. (改為賓語從句),They want you to work harder because they hope you can get a good job in the future.,If you dont want to do like this, you should have a talk with them.,I am not allowed to go out a

8、lone at night.,I dont think your parents are terrible.,【連句成文】,拓展積累,【相關短語】 thanks for 因感謝; make new friends 結交新朋友; look after/take care of 照顧; keep in touch 保持聯(lián)系; be friendly to 對友好; bring back 帶回 【參考諺語】 1.A smile makes you ten years younger. 笑一笑,十年少。 2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors. 悲喜常相伴。

9、3.Laughter is the best medicine.笑是最好的藥。 4.Worry kills more men than work. 憂慮比勞累更傷人。,【亮點句型】 學校的感受 1.Id like to thank you for giving me unselfish love and help. 2.You always encouraged me to study harder. 3.Although you were very strict with me, I understood what you said in the end. 4.Im so thankful

10、to you for your kind help that Ill work harder and try to do better in the future. 家庭的感受 1.Id like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. 2.We should have good habits and try our best to take exercise every day. 3.Ill spend more time staying and communicating with you. 4.When

11、I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me.,實戰(zhàn)演練,A 在你的生活或?qū)W習中,你認為快樂是什么?也許是擁有一位慈母、一位良師、一位摯友、一本好書、一只寵物、一個夢想珍惜眼前的快樂,快樂就在身邊。請以“Happiness Around Me”為題,選取一個角度,用英語寫一篇短文,以表達你的真情實感。 主要內(nèi)容 (1)What is happiness in your opinion? (2)As a student, how can you get happiness? Give an example

12、 or tell a story. 要求 (1)詞數(shù): 100左右; (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的學校名稱和姓名; (3)語言力求準確,書寫美觀,卷面整潔。 Happiness Around Me ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

13、______,One possible version: Happiness Around Me Happiness is different to different people.But it is important in our daily life.It is always around you if you put your heart into it.Most students think happiness is to get a good score; to get the love of their parents or teachers;to get well alo

14、ng with others and so on.As for me,happiness is helping people in need. Last Sunday, on my way home, I saw an old woman sat at the roadside.She looked very tired.I came to her and asked if she was OK.She said she had a headache and she couldnt move.I called 120 and sent her to the hospital.When I

15、was waiting outside,her families arrived and thanked me again and again.I felt so happy that I could help someone.,B 自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。 假如你是李華,請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談談自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧?提示詞語 powerful, happy, believe in, keep doing 提示問題 (1)Why is it important to be

16、confident? (2)What experience made you more confident? (3)How can we become more confident?,要求 (1)詞數(shù):80100(文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)); (2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息; (3)文章必須包含所提供的主要信息,并作適當發(fā)揮。 Its very important to be confident._______________________________________________________ ______________________________________

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18、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,One possible version: Its very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So its valuable to us. When I was

19、in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practised it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot the words at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You cant imagine how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it suc

20、cessfully. My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.,