1112014屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習全方位配套訓練人教版必修一Unit 5 Nelson Mandela-a modern hero短文改錯2假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1 （2013·遼寧高考）Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案：Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time withon his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work havehas made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthyhealth.We are worried about him.” That is whichwhat other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid a visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside herhis room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I stepstepped into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picturepictures we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as manymuch as we missed him.Passage 2 （2013·浙江高考）Dear Diary，Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know Ill never fall sleep.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours，Rosemary答案：Dear Diary，Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we movemoved last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find otheranother one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmateclassmates,my school orand just everything else I love in the world.To make matters badworse,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is the/my first day of school.I am awfully tiringtired,but I know Ill never fall sleepasleep.Good night and remember，you,dear diary,isare my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours，Rosemary111