The vacation寫一篇關(guān)于自己旅行的作文。Have a trip! I travelled to Hainan island this summer holiday.來源:%中國教*育出#版網(wǎng) It was so beautiful there. The blue sea was around us. Its very wide and very nice. The coconut milk was delicious. I liked it so much. I also liked to swim there. I was happy and I looked like a fish.I will also come here for another trip the next summer holiday, because it is a nice place with a beautiful scenery and deliciouss food.詞匯：swim， summer holiday（暑假）， delicious（美味的）來源:zzst#ep&.com習(xí)作點(diǎn)評：來源:中國#教%育出版網(wǎng)文章描繪了海南島的風(fēng)景美食，以及自己愉快的心情，不愧是一篇美文。佳作賞析：中國教育出版&網(wǎng)*#A visit to Beijing This summer vacation, I went to Beijing. It was a very great city! We went to the Great Wall first. Like its name, it was very great. We could see many mountains around and many foreigners. Then we went to visit Tian'anmen Square. It was also fantastic. There were so many people on the square, some were flying kites, some were taking photos. We lived in a small house in Beijing. It was a traditional Beijing building called “Four-Section Compound”. I enjoyed myself a lot during the summer vacation in Beijing. It was a great memory!作文點(diǎn)評：本篇作文詳細(xì)敘述了自己去北京游玩的全過程。先是北京的the Great Wall，再去了Tian'anmen Square，最后又描述了Four-Section Compound，把讀者帶進(jìn)了一場快樂的北京旅途，充滿趣味