2015屆高三英語 名校試題解析分項匯編（第01期）專題16 短文改錯（含解析）1.【四川省宜賓市2015屆高三第一次診】短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤；2. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。 Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love will be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam. 【答案】【解析】【小題1】通篇都在講我的夢想，因此代詞Your- My?！拘☆}2】will 加動詞原形，“被錄取” be admitted into ,will 后面加be.考點：短文改錯2.【黑龍江省雙鴨山市第一中學(xué)2015屆高三上學(xué)期期末】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that Id have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasnt any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.【答案】【小題1】complete改為completely【小題2】in改為on【小題3】after改為before【小題4】can改為could【小題5】the改為a【小題6】shone改為shining【小題7】knocked后加at/ on【小題8】was前加and【小題9】it改為there【小題10】who刪掉【解析】考點：考查句子理解、語法、時態(tài)等重點知識。3.【山東省青島市2015屆高三上學(xué)期期末考試】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞： 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。 3改錯格式錯誤不得分。My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao，Shandong province on February 1995I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summerThe main subjects I study at schoo1 included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computerI like English and computer best and I am very good at it .Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stampMy favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter【答案】【小題1】on-in【小題2】去掉the【小題3】happy- happily【小題4】graduate- graduated【小題5】study- studied【小題6】it-them【小題7】winned-won【小題8】listening- listening to【小題9】stamp- stamps【小題10】is-are【解析】試題分析：本題考查短文改錯。考點：考查時態(tài)、詞形變換、介詞搭配等4.【遼寧省錦州市2015屆高三上學(xué)期期末考試英語】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldnt work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.【答案】【小題1】devoted改為devotes【小題2】class改為classes【小題3】deeply改為deep【小題4】too改為so【小題5】去掉the【小題6】while改為when【小題7】加上with【小題8】We改為They【小題9】relaxing改為relaxed【小題10】but改為and【解析】【小題7】加上with；根據(jù)第六句Soon they came up a good idea.，come up with 固定短語意為想出.故加上with【小題8】We改為They；根據(jù)第七句We decided to go cycling in the countryside.前文說他們想出一個主意，此處應(yīng)是他們決定去騎車，故We改為They【小題9】relaxing改為relaxed；根據(jù)第七句and felt relaxing in the open air，relaxed才是relax的形容詞放松的，故relaxing改為relaxed【小題10】but改為and；根據(jù)最后一句On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.精力充沛的與積極的兩者應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，故but改為and考點：考查短文改錯5.【2015屆河北保定市高三調(diào)研試題】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.【答案】【小題1】can 改為could【小題2】extreme改為extremely【小題3】spirit改為spirits【小題4】was改為were【小題5】mixing改為mixed【小題6】去掉top【小題7】theres改為where【小題8】加上a【小題9】more改為much【小題10】and改為but【解析】考點：考查短文改錯6.【河北省正定中學(xué)2015屆高三1月月考】假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉。修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計分Even today, a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady, help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date. When a man takes a woman out for a dinner, it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down. On a crowding train or bus, it is proper for a man offer a woman his seat, particular if she is old or carries a baby. Even when it comes to shake hands, ladies come first. It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting. Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first, the man shouldnt offer theirs.【答案】【小題4】impolitepolite 考查形容詞。根據(jù)常識男士幫助她搬椅子被認(rèn)為是禮貌的。impolite polite考點：考查代詞、形容詞、冠詞、連詞以及固定短語等7.【河北省邯鄲市2015屆高三上學(xué)期1月份教學(xué)質(zhì)量檢測】 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Dear Mike,How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydneylast summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and takeus to do a lot of sightseeing. Its really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery anddelicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot aboutSydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. Ill act like a guideto show you around the places of interests in my hometown. Yours, Li Hua【答案】【小題1】was去掉【小題2】kindly-kind【小題3】us-me【小題4】which-whose【小題5】better-good【小題6】have-had【小題7】here-there【小題8】to visit【小題9】like-as【小題10】interests-interest【解析】考點：名詞；形容詞；副詞；介詞；人稱代詞；時態(tài)；定語從句8.【江西省吉安市第一中學(xué)2015屆高三上學(xué)期第二次階段考】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤, 每句中最多有兩處, 每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞匯。2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處記)不計分。短文改錯When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldn't understand “real music”· After I graduated from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day. 【答案】【小題1】 learn-learning 【小題5】 這里指“我的朋友和我”是兩個人，不是指所有人，因此all-both?！拘☆}6】 先行詞是 day，在定語從句中作賓語，介詞后用which，that-which. 【小題7】在吉他店那里，不是這里，因此Here- There 。 【小題8】.“如此多. . .以至于” so . . . that，因此too-so 。【小題9】 可以從中選擇，缺少介詞from，因此 choose后加 from 【小題10】 系動詞后用形容詞，importantly-important。考點：短文改錯9.【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015屆高三聯(lián)考】文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。This morning , I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough. The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil. For that very moment, a girl was walking by. She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor. After a while ,there were blood pour down her face. I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay. The doctor examined her wound carefully. To my relief, it was not serious. The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound. 【答案】【小題1】go-went【小題2】while-when【小題3】shocking-shocked,【小題4】For-At,【小題5】broke-broken, 【小題6】were-was,【小題7】pour-pouring,【小題8】the delay去the,【小題9】before-after，【小題10】wound前加 the/her考點：考查短文改錯10.【山東省實驗中學(xué)第三次診斷考試】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Dear schoolmates，In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contestA contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 stRemember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school studentThe answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadlinePlease pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on timeStudents Union【答案】【小題1】attaching 改為attach 【小題2】第二行and去掉 【小題3】interestingly改為interesting【小題4】第三行A改為The【小題5】end后面加s【小題6】第四行that改為which 【小題7】student后面加s【小題8】must后面加be 【小題9】after改為before【小題10】最后一句話中them改為it【解析】考點：考查名詞，副詞，非謂語，固定句式，固定短語等一些語法知識。 11.【遼寧省丹東五校協(xié)作體2015屆高三期末考試】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有2處.涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加:此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/），在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉 。 修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。 注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。 2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分 。Dear Andy, Im glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So Im going to tell you about diet. Im a very health person. Thats why we live near the sea and we often have fish. I dont know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you come to visit me in China on one day, you wont eat many sweets. So I hope you dont have sweet tooth.Im going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and Ill email them to you. I think youll like our teams clothes.【答案】試題分析：【小題1】文中第二句。根據(jù)此句中的in your last email.可知是在上一封郵件中問起我的健康。故把a(bǔ)sk改成asked。句意為：在你的上一封信中，你問起了我的健康。12.【山東省濰坊市重點中學(xué)2015屆高三12月階段性教學(xué)質(zhì)量檢測】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. Thirty minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.【答案】【小題1】添加for【小題2】past改為pasted 【小題3】feet改為foot【小題4】when改為than【小題5】a改為the【小題6】other改為another【小題7】do改為did【小題8】possible改為possibly【小題9】去掉it【小題10】lose改為losing【解析】【小題6】other改為another 考查another用法。第七句“If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for 考點：考查句子改錯。13.【浙江省重點中學(xué)協(xié)作體2015屆高三第二次適應(yīng)性測試】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.【答案】【小題1】made改為makes；【小題2】at改為to；【小題3】movie改為movies【小題4】去掉the；【小題5】How改為What；【小題6】different 改為differently【小題7】加to；【小題8】fallen改為fall；【小題9】Beside改為Besides；【小題10】keeping改為kept；【解析】【小題8】fallen改為fall；文中第八句 Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.主語是 Ill，連詞or連接兩個并列短語，后面的是動詞原形，故fallen改為fall。【小題9】Beside改為Besides；文中第九句Beside, they are afraid.句子開頭且用逗號隔開，所以前面是一個連詞，另外，除之外（還有）是besides，故Beside改為Besides。【小題10】keeping改為kept；文中第十句I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. 句意：我討厭像籠子里的鳥一樣對待。后面的是一個后置定語，主語是the bird，物作主語，后面要用過去分詞，故keeping改為kept?？键c：考查篇章理解及語法知識。