,課 型：寫作課 年 級：九年級 授課教師：陳茹芯,Wechat 微信,- 寫作課,惠州市鐵路學(xué)校 陳茹芯,Topic: Wechat,Wechat is a lifestyle.,Group work: Find out what can you do on Wechat according to pictures and what you know. 小組合作：根據(jù)圖片找出在微信我們可以做什么，填詞。,Words 詞匯: 頭腦風(fēng)暴,send /get,send/play,talk to,look for/search/find,do,send,read,share,tell,play,測試：Bingo Game,游戲規(guī)則： 1.選擇9個短語分別填入到方格里面。 2.老師每次讀3個短語，如果剛好可以連成線，就是Bingo。,發(fā)送相片 2.發(fā)送錄像 3.與朋友聊天 4. 收微信紅包 5. 購物 6.尋找周圍的人 7. 讀新聞 8. 與朋友分享我做的事情 9. 告訴人們我在哪里 10. 玩游戲,用if/when或because填寫句子。,You Huijing: _ I am bored, I can read news on wechat. Deng Yunlong: _ I have something new, I always share it with my friends on wechat. Huang Jinbin: It is interesting to use wechat, _ I can play games.,If/When,If/When,because,小組討論，互相學(xué)習(xí),1. When do you use wechat? When I _, I will _ on wechat. 2. What do you think of wechat? I think it is _ to use wechat, because I can _.,phrases: send pictures, send videos, talk with friends, get wechat Hongbao, look for people around you, do some shopping, read news, play games, tell people where you are, share what I do with my friends,Sentences：句子仿寫,If , I can/will When, I It is to use wechat, because,phrases: send pictures, send videos, talk with friends, get wechat Hongbao, look for people around you, do some shopping, read news, play games, tell people where you are, share what I do with my friends,小組活動：Passages-Jigsaw（排序）,3. I dont think wechat is good for students.,5. Firstly, if we always talk with friends on wechat, we dont need to get together. It is not good to our friendship.,1. Secondly, it is easy for us to be nearsighted because we always use WeChat on the phone.,2. Finally, when we usually type words(打字), we may forget how to write them.,4. All in all, I think students should not use wechat.,I dont think wechat is good for students.,Firstly, if we always talk with friends on wechat, we dont need to get together. It is not good to our friendship.,Secondly, it is easy for us to be nearsighted because we always use wechat on the phone.,Finally, when we usually type words(打字), we may forget how to write them.,All in all, I think students should not use wechat.,I dont think wechat is good for students.,Firstly, if we always talk with friends on wechat, we dont need to get together. It is not good to our friendship.,Secondly, it is easy for us to be nearsighted because we always use wechat on the phone.,Finally, when we usually type words(打字), we may forget how to write them.,All in all, I think students should not use wechat.,Structure (議論文結(jié)構(gòu)),I dont think wechat is good for students.,Firstly, if we always talk with friends on wechat, we dont need to get together. It is not good to our friendship. Secondly, it is easy for us to be nearsighted because we always use wechat on the phone. Finally, when we usually type words(打字), we may forget how to write them.,All in all, I think students should not use wechat.,Paragraph One Paragraph Two Paragraph Three,Introducing the idea提出觀點,Concluding the idea總結(jié)觀點,supporting the idea with facts用事實支持觀點,Structure (議論文結(jié)構(gòu)),議論文常用詞語：,第一段：Introduction提出論點 I think, In my opinion, we should. 第二段：Body 論據(jù)論證 first/first of all, second, third firstly, secondly, Finally first of all ,Whats more 第三段： Conclusion 得出結(jié)論 All in all, In a word,Writing Task,Angel認為微信是一個很棒的生活方式，她想要寫一封信去說服Ms. Wan，請幫助她把這封信完成。,Ms. Wan, From your passage, I know you dont like wechat. But I think _. Firstly, _. Secondly, _. Finally, _. All in all, _. Angel,How to check 如何批改議論文,總分15分 第一段：提出觀點 I think （+2分） 第二段：3個論據(jù)，每個論據(jù)2分，共6分。（+6分） 第三段：總結(jié)觀點（+2分） 書寫，書寫不工整扣1-2分。 （+2分） 語法，每個語法錯誤-0.5分，總共3分，扣完為止。（+3分）,任務(wù)：1.改同桌的作文，給分 2. 找出至少一句同桌的好句子，劃線,Sharing time,Lets share the good sentence Lets share the writing,Technology has changed our life! 科技改變生活。 Have your own judgment, 擁有判斷力 Make good use of the technology to enjoy your life and your study! 充分利用科技享受生活享受學(xué)習(xí)！,Summary,1. Words and phrases: send pictures, send videos, talk with friends, look for people around you, do some shopping, read news, play games, tell people where you are, share what I do with my friends, get wechat Hongbao 2. Sentence patterns: _ I am bored, I can read news on wechat. It is interesting to use wechat, _ I can play games.,If/When,because,Summary,3. Structure of argumentative writing 第一段：Introduction提出論點 I think, In my opinion, we should. 第二段：Body 論據(jù)論證 first/first of all, second, third firstly, secondly, Finally first of all ,Whats more 第三段： Conclusion 得出結(jié)論 All in all, In a word,Thank you!,