走向高考 · 英語,路漫漫其修遠兮 吾將上下而求索,人教版(課標(biāo)卷地區(qū)) · 高考總復(fù)習(xí),寫作素能培養(yǎng),第三部分,第六講 運用高級詞匯與句式， 打造作文亮點,第三部分,寫作時，“高級詞匯與高級句式”如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一兩處，也會為你的作文增添色彩，贏得閱卷老師的青睞。 一、使用高級詞匯 1標(biāo)新立異 寫作時要恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用一些蘊含感情色彩，別人有可能想不到的詞匯，恰當(dāng)?shù)厍笮虑螽悺?As far as I'm concerned，parents' much protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. As far as I'm concerned，parents' limitless protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didn't reply to you without delay. I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for me，so I didn't reply to you without delay.,2短語優(yōu)先 多使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 To achieve one's dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. To achieve one's dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. What's more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects. What's more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.,3避免重復(fù) 盡量避免過多地使用某一個單詞，必要時選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.,用較高級詞匯代替加黑的詞或短語。 1We all have the same chance._ 2We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. _ 3I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us._ _ 4He didn't listen to what I said in the class. _,5We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us._ 6The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses._ 答案：1.possess 2.endless 3.put up with 4.turned a deaf ear to 5.promote 6.challenging,二、使用高級句式，讓句子靚起來 1恰當(dāng)使用被動語態(tài) We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015. About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.,I'm delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas. I'm delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.,2使用強調(diào)句 As a saying goes，the little thing matters most. As a saying goes，it is the little thing that matters most. Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward. It's our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.,3使用倒裝句 The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way. Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy. I didn't realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then. Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.,4使用省略句 If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time. If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time. Although they were faced with many problems，they didn't lose heart. Although faced with many problems，they didn't lose heart.,5使用感嘆句 It is a very splendid moment. How splendid a moment it is! I am very worried about his condition. How worried I am about his condition.,6使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，and we can see sweat on his face. His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，with sweat on his face. As the society develops rapidly，it's necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. With the society developing rapidly，it's necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.,7使用虛擬語氣 It is high time for both children and parents to take action to make small changes. It is high time that both children and parents took action to make small changes. I missed being hit by the car with your help. Without your help，I would have been hit by the car.,用較高級句式轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子 1Above all，we must do something to stop pollution.(被動語態(tài)) _ 2I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(強調(diào)句) _ 3We don't know its value until we lose health.(倒裝句) _,4If it isn't well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(省略句) _ 5We had a very good time with the peasants that day.(感嘆句) _ 6Because there was too much noise，I couldn't go on studying.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)) _,答案：1.Above all，something must be done to stop pollution. 2It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English. 3Not until we lose health do we know its value. 4If not well organized，the meeting will be a failure. 5What a good time we had with the peasants that day! 6With the noise going on，I couldn't go on studying.,三、如何寫好there be句型 1There be句型的基本意義：某地有某物 There is an increase of about 10 percent，compared with last year. 與去年相比較，大約增加了百分之十。 名師點撥 由于受漢語影響，有些同學(xué)在使用這個句型時常常把be誤用成have的某種形式。 下午將有一場演講。 There is going to have a lecture this afternoon.(×) There is going to be a lecture this afternoon.(),2Where there be.there be.“哪里有哪里就有” As the detailed analyses above have shown us，where there is life，there is hope. 正如上面詳盡的論述所示，活著就有希望。 3There be名詞分詞短語 There are three factors contributing to this attitude as follows. 有三個因素促成了下面的觀點。,名師點撥 在這一句型中，有些同學(xué)常常把分詞誤用成動詞原形。 有些學(xué)生支持這個主意。 There are some students support the idea.(×) There are some students supporting the idea.() Some students support the idea.(),4There beno doubt/no denying/no need/no sense/no use.that.“毫無疑問/不可否認/沒有必要/沒有意義/沒有用” There is no sense in waiting here without knowing when he will come back. 在這里傻等卻不知道他什么時候回來，一點意義都沒有。 5There be的非謂語形式 there being.(動詞ing形式)；there to be.(不定式形式) There being no bus，we had to walk home. 由于沒有公交車，我們不得不步行回家。,翻譯句子 1不可否認，我們的環(huán)境質(zhì)量已經(jīng)每況愈下。 _ 2我們盼望著有個晚會來慶祝即將到來的新年。 _ 答案：1.There is no denying that the quality of our environment has gone from bad to worse. 2We expect there to be a party to celebrate the coming New Year.,四、如何使用其他的一些高級表達形式讓文章更精彩 1用such總結(jié)全文 Such is our lively city，which you are welcome to visit whenever at your convenience. 這就是我們這座充滿活力的城市，只要您方便，隨時歡迎來參觀。 2使用cannot.too much表示強調(diào) We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我們再怎么強調(diào)保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。,3使用比喻等修辭方法 As is known to us all，vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building. 大家都知道，詞匯是語言學(xué)習(xí)的重要組成部分，就像一座大樓的基石。 4使用not.but.句型 Some people don't like their jobs not because they're lazy but because their jobs are small. 一些人不喜歡他們的工作不是因為他們懶，而是因為他們的工作太渺小了。,5使用否定句 The law is the law.Nobody has any excuse to break it. 法律就是法律。任何人沒有任何借口違反法律。 6使用雙重否定 Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle，it is not without its problem. 盡管自行車有許多明顯的優(yōu)點，它仍然存在一些問題。,.翻譯句子 1任何語言都無法表達我對你們及時幫助的真心感謝。 _ 2學(xué)好英語并不是一件苦差事而是一件快樂的事情。 _ 3我們再怎么強調(diào)保護環(huán)境的重要性也不為過。 _,答案：1.No word can express my whole­hearted thanks for your timely help. 2It is not a hardship but a pleasure to learn English well. 3We can't emphasize the importance of protecting the environment too much.,.句型轉(zhuǎn)換 1We can successfully build an economized society only in this way.(倒裝) _ _ 2He had hardly reached the station when the train left.(倒裝) _ _,3I can not only keep in touch with my friends and family through my cell，but also almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.(倒裝) _ _ 4I didn't take his advice，so I failed in the exam.(虛擬語氣) _ _,5Because I was ill that day，I didn't take part in the sports meeting.(虛擬語氣) _ 6They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被動語態(tài)) _ _ 7They didn't realize the importance of environment protecting until all the fish in the river died out.(倒裝句，強調(diào)句) _ _,答案：1.Only in this way can we successfully build an economized society. 2Hardly had he reached the station when the train left. 3Not only can I keep in touch with my friends and family through my cell，but also almost all information can be gathered on the Internet. 4If I had taken his advice，I wouldn't have failed in the exam.,5I was ill that day，otherwise I would have taken part in the sports meeting. 6A survey was carried out among 260 students. 7Not until all the fish in the river died out did they realize the importance of environment protecting. It was not until all the fish in the river died out that they realized the importance of environment protecting.,.佳句習(xí)作 請按以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇短文，盡可能多地使用高級句式。 1眾所周知，世界人口在一天天增長，因此需要大量的新鮮用水。 2隨著工業(yè)的快速發(fā)展，產(chǎn)生了很多有毒的氣體和廢水，結(jié)果導(dǎo)致了水污染，盡管水是新的，但卻不能再運用。 3這時候人們才意識到水源的重要性，確實到了人們行動起來保護水源的時候了。不要再污染用水，否則，我們就不能再在這個地球上生存，那會是怎樣的一種可怕的景象??！ 4只有充足的水源，世界才能蓬勃發(fā)展。,參考范文 As is known to all，the world population is growing day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a large population.What's more，with industry developing rapidly，poisonous gases and waters are produced，consequently resulting in the pollution of water.Though fresh，a good amount of water can no longer be used.Only then did we realize the importance of fresh water.So it's high time that we human beings took action to protect water resource.Stop polluting water，otherwise we wouldn't be living in the world.What a terrible scene we would be faced with! Only with fresh water can the world be prosperous.,