牛津高中英語,(模塊五 ·高二上學(xué)期),Advance with English,Task,Unit,1,Writing a letter to a friend,Unit 1,課件描述：,本課件主要目的是引導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫作。在上節(jié)課搜集了李東同學(xué)信息的基礎(chǔ)上，本節(jié)課同學(xué)們將以李東的名義給他的朋友之一寫信。本課件從修改李東寫給專欄作家的一封信出發(fā)，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生注意寫信時可能出現(xiàn)的錯誤，讓學(xué)生養(yǎng)成校閱作文的習(xí)慣。最后給學(xué)生提示完成這封信。,Group report!,Conjunctions or phrases to make your report flow(流暢),but, however, on the contrary, instead (of), on the one hand. on the other hand, in spite of, even though,also, in addition, whats more, first of all, first, second, third, on the one handon the other hand,because, so, since, now (that), therefore, as a result, thus, for this reason, so that,Task 1: correct one letter to an agony aunt written by Li Dong,Task 2: help him write a letter to one of his two friends in the name of himself, Li Dong,Task 1: correct a letter to agony aunt,1) 15 Apirl 2) my brother could get him 3) Im not sure if to tell Mum and Dad 4) are almost 18, but Mum and Dad,April,that,whether,5) quite stricte with us 6) He always wears big boot and 7) looks quiet different from before. 8) I saw him smoked in his room,strict,boots,quite,smoking,9) would be extreme angry if 10) Theyd also be angry me 11) secret for them. 12) for keep a secret. 13) for much longer as hes,extremely,with,him,keeping,hes,14) to go to university soon, His grades 15) that his behavior hasnt had some effect 16) should just keep my month shut.,.,any,mouth,The format of a letter,15 April Dear Annie, Today, I found Yours sincerely, Li Dong,Form the habit of proofreading after finishing writing a letter,facts,grammar,handwriting,punctuation,vocabulary,spelling,style,Now its your turn!,小王是李東的好朋友。小張是李東班里新來的同學(xué)，李東跟他也很要好。但小王、小張始終無法做朋友。請你以李東的身份給他的任意一個朋友寫一封信，告訴他你的感受，并陳述你對朋友和友誼的看法。最終說服小王、小張都成為你的朋友。,Sample,20 October Dear Wang, I am writing this letter in order to persuade you to make friends with the new comer, Zhang. We two have been good friends since we entered this school, but I want to become good friends with Zhang too. You two never try to be friends, which makes me feel trapped, you know.,Zhang is a new comer to our class. I am one of the only few who he knows. Everyone of us needs friends. Without a best friend, one will be very lonely and unhappy. So we should try our best to make everyone around us happy, shouldnt we?,Personally, a friend is one who can lend you a ruler when you left yours at home. A friend is one who comforts and encourages you first when you fail a test at school. A friend is one who goes over his lessons with you when you want to give up. In a word, a friend is one who would like to share happiness and sorrows with you.,Zhang is quiet in class. He is open-minded and often helps those students on duty and cleans the classroom. He is polite to teachers and takes care of everyone around him. He works hard and is always the first one to come and the last one to go. He is clever and honest too.,So I sincerely suggest that you two become good friends. I am sure you will accept him once you understand him. Whats more, on seeing the three of us become good friends, I will be very glad. How about meeting him and having a talk next Wednesday in the school café? See you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Dong,Conclusion and homework,Improve your letter after class and I will give all your letters to him and let him choose the best one to send to his friend!,Try your best!,