走向高考 · 英語(yǔ),路漫漫其修遠(yuǎn)兮 吾將上下而求索,人教版(課標(biāo)卷地區(qū)) · 高考總復(fù)習(xí),寫作素能培養(yǎng),第三部分,第五講 寫好非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞， 提升寫作檔次,第三部分,眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)讓人覺得單調(diào)乏味，句子與句子之間的關(guān)系顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復(fù)合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費(fèi)勁。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)換，不僅句型多樣，句子活潑，而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，言簡(jiǎn)意明。,一、運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句 1我為那事感到非常遺憾，開始考慮做些什么來幫一下。 I feel quite sorry for that.I begin to think about what to do to help. Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)),2另一方面，我將幫著建立英語(yǔ)角，提供給我們學(xué)生一個(gè)練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的平臺(tái)。 On the other hand，I will help set up the English corner.I will provide us students a platform to practice our oral English. On the other hand，I will help set up the English corner，providing us students a platform to practice our oral English.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)),3這兒的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。 All the people here like the novel.It is written by Tom. All the people here like the novel written by Tom.(過去分詞作定語(yǔ)) 4我們應(yīng)該多講英語(yǔ)。我們認(rèn)為這是很重要的。 We should speak more English.We think it is very important. We think it very important to speak more English.(it作形式賓語(yǔ)，不定式作真正賓語(yǔ)),5我們應(yīng)該如何提高我們的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平？這是個(gè)問題。 How should we improve our spoken English？It is a question. How to improve our spoken English is a question.(不定式短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)) The question is how to improve our spoken English.(不定式短語(yǔ)作表語(yǔ)),運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句 1We were touched by the teacher's words.We decided to work hard. _ 2I didn't receive her letter.I had to write again. _ 3The boy came to school late again.This made the teacher very angry. _,4The boys were making the most of time.They wanted to finish the work earlier. _ 5I saw an old granny.She lay on the ground.I went over to help her. _,答案：1.Touched by the teacher's words，we decided to work hard. 2Not having received her letter，I had to write again. 3The boy's coming to school late again made the teacher very angry. 4The boys were making the most of time (so as) to finish the work earlier. 5Seeing an old granny lying on the ground，I went over to help her.,二、運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句 1驚詫于他們的熟練程度，我決心要像他們一樣好。 Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good. Amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.(過去分詞作狀語(yǔ)) 2看到一輛車朝她而來，我伸出手把她拉了回來。 When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back. Seeing a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)),3練習(xí)了接近兩個(gè)月籃球后，我們強(qiáng)烈渴望獲得一場(chǎng)勝利。 After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner. Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)),4這里曾有一家化肥廠，位于城市的南邊。它每天釋放出大量有毒氣體，污染環(huán)境。 There was a large factory，which produced fertilizer.Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，which polluted the environment. There was a large factory，which produced fertilizer.Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，polluting the environment. 名師點(diǎn)撥 “原句”中分別由which引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，重復(fù)且單調(diào)，將第二個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句轉(zhuǎn)換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)后，不僅表達(dá)多樣，而且言簡(jiǎn)意明。,5由于老師的幫助，我的英語(yǔ)進(jìn)步很大。因?yàn)槲业挠⒄Z(yǔ)進(jìn)步很大，我確信我能考上更好的大學(xué)。 Because my teacher helps me，my English has greatly improved.Because my English has greatly improved，I'm sure I will go to a better university. With my teacher helping me，my English has greatly improved.Because my English has greatly improved，I'm sure I will go to a better university. 名師點(diǎn)撥 “原句”兩處重復(fù)出現(xiàn)由because引導(dǎo)的從句，讀起來很別扭。換用“with現(xiàn)在分詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)”后，讀起來給人的感覺大不一樣。,.運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句 1As soon as they saw a few people still in the burning house，they rushed into it to save them without hesitation. _，they rushed into it to save them without hesitation. 2We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think that it is possible that they can master one. We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think _.,3I took part in the meeting，which was held in Beijing last Friday.It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager who came to our company yesterday. I took part in the meeting _ last Friday.It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager _. 4Mother went to work in a hurry，and she didn't have breakfast.She was as busy as a bee these days and came back home very late. Mother went to work in a hurry _.She was as busy as a bee these days，_.,答案：1.On seeing a few people still in the burning house 2it possible for them to master one 3held in Beijing；coming to our company yesterday 4without having breakfast；coming back home very late,.運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換短文(根據(jù)一般表達(dá)寫出該短文的高級(jí)表達(dá)) 1北京市有大量的出租車司機(jī)，他們每天全心全意地為乘客服務(wù)，為北京市的交通發(fā)揮著重要作用。他們起早貪黑，賺錢養(yǎng)家糊口。有一次，我下車時(shí)不小心把手機(jī)忘在了車上，但當(dāng)我和司機(jī)同志聯(lián)系上之后，他立即開車把手機(jī)送到了我家門口，讓我感動(dòng)不已。,一般表達(dá)： There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing.They serve passengers heart and soul.They play an important part in the traffic of Beijing.They make some money.They work from dawn till night.One day，I left my cellphone in the taxi I took.I got in touch with the driver.He drove to my home and gave it back to me.I was very excited.,高級(jí)表達(dá)： _ _ _ _ _ _,答案：There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing，serving passengers heart and soul and playing an important part in the traffic of Beijing.In order to make some money to support their families，they work from dawn till night.One day，I got out of the taxi in a hurry with my cellphone left in the taxi I took.On hearing what had happened，the taxi driver drove to my home as fast as possible and gave the cellphone back to me.Seeing my cellphone again，I was too excited to say a word.,2大城市里高樓大廈林立，房?jī)r(jià)越來越高。一方面，很多人無房居住，另一方面，大量房子卻賣不出去。不少人即使買了一套住房，恐怕也要一輩子辛辛苦苦工作來還銀行貸款。我們希望政府采取措施，關(guān)心這些收入不高的人群。,一般表達(dá)： There are more and more tall buildings in big cities.Their prices are going up day by day.On one hand，there are still lots of people.They have no houses to live in.On the other hand，many apartments are hard to sell out.Even if you buy an apartment，I'm afraid you have to pay off the money you borrow from the bank.You will work hard day and night all your life.I do hope our government take strong measures to solve the housing problem and take care of the people.Their incomes are low.,高級(jí)表達(dá)： _ _ _ _ _ _,答案：There are more and more tall buildings in big cities，with their prices going up day by day.On one hand，there are still lots of people having no houses to live in.On the other hand，many apartments are hard to sell out.Even if you have bought an apartment，I'm afraid you have to try to pay off the money borrowed from the bank，working hard day and night all your life.I do hope our government can take strong measures to solve the housing problem，showing great concern for the people whose incomes are not high enough.,