人教人教2019版版必修第一冊必修第一冊 Unit 1 寫作訓(xùn)練寫作訓(xùn)練波峰李樹果9/27/2022Mr Lee19/27/2022Mr Lee2假定你是李華，最近收到了你的美國朋友假定你是李華，最近收到了你的美國朋友Jenny的來信。的來信。她在信中說由于剛進(jìn)入高中還不能適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，她不知她在信中說由于剛進(jìn)入高中還不能適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，她不知道如何去結(jié)交新朋友，因而情緒低落。請你給她回一封道如何去結(jié)交新朋友，因而情緒低落。請你給她回一封信，內(nèi)容包括信，內(nèi)容包括：1.向Jenny表示問候和安慰。2.針對她的問題提出建議：(1)放學(xué)后邀請同學(xué)一起參加活動；(2)遇到困難時，互相幫助。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫第一步第一步 謀篇謀篇9/27/2022Mr Lee3明確體裁話題1.指出問題所在2.提出擺脫困境、適應(yīng)環(huán)境的建議3.給出祝愿首段：引出問題 中段：就事說事，根據(jù)具體情況給出恰當(dāng)建議尾段：表達(dá)自己的愿望一般現(xiàn)在時；第二人稱為主建議信；如何適應(yīng)環(huán)境確定時態(tài)人稱布局文章框架列出核心要點第二步第二步 遣詞遣詞9/27/2022Mr Lee41.感覺不好2.進(jìn)入高中3.面臨同樣的問題4.太擔(dān)心5.V.邀請feel badenter high schoolface the same problemworry too much about.invite9/27/2022Mr Lee56.參加take part in7.n.活動activity8.相互理解understand each other9.與溝通communicate with10.處于困境中in trouble第三步第三步 造句造句9/27/2022Mr Lee61.你進(jìn)入高中后情緒低落。你進(jìn)入高中后情緒低落。（主系表；介詞短語）（主系表；介詞短語）You feel bad after entering high school.2.你的同學(xué)們也面臨著同樣的問題。你的同學(xué)們也面臨著同樣的問題。（主謂賓；現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時（主謂賓；現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時)Your classmates are also facing the same problem.3.你不必太擔(dān)心。（主謂狀）你不必太擔(dān)心。（主謂狀）You dont have to worry too much about it.9/27/2022Mr Lee74.盡力邀請你的同學(xué)們一起參加一些活動。（祈使句盡力邀請你的同學(xué)們一起參加一些活動。（祈使句)Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together.5.這些活動有助于你們相互理解。這些活動有助于你們相互理解。（主謂賓補；一般將來時（主謂賓補；一般將來時)These activities will help you understand each other.6.幫助有困難的同學(xué)。（祈使句；定語從句幫助有困難的同學(xué)。（祈使句；定語從句)Help students who are in trouble.第四步第四步 升級升級9/27/2022Mr Lee81.用因果結(jié)構(gòu)合并句用因果結(jié)構(gòu)合并句2和句和句3。Your classmates are also facing the same problem,so you dont have to worry too much about it.2.用定語從句合并句用定語從句合并句4和句和句5。Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together,which will help you understand each other.第五步第五步 寫摹背誦寫摹背誦9/27/2022Mr Lee9Dear Jenny,I am sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school.As far as I know,your classmates are also facing the same problem,so you dont have to worry too much about it.Here are some suggestions to help you.9/27/2022Mr Lee10 First,try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together,which will help you understand each other better by communicating with them.Besides,help students who are in trouble.I do hope you will find my suggestions useful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua