專題六 書面表達 第1講 書信郵件類,【典例】(2014浙江高考) 學(xué)校圖書館需要購置一批新書, 現(xiàn)向?qū)W生征求意見。假如你是李越, 你認為學(xué)校圖書館最需要購置科普類圖書(popular science books)和文學(xué)類圖書(literary books)。請你用英語給圖書館王老師寫一封100-120個詞的信, 推薦這兩類書, 并分別說明推薦理由。 注意: 信的抬頭與落款已給出(不計入詞數(shù))。,Dear Mr Wang, _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Yue,【解題思路】 第一步: 依體裁謀篇章 結(jié)構(gòu)對第一關(guān) 這是一篇書信類文章, 短文的四部分應(yīng)為: 第一段說明寫信的目的; 第 二段闡明推薦科普類圖書的原因; 第三段闡明推薦文學(xué)類圖書的原因; 第四段表達期待。 第二步: 列要點選句式 要點全及格線 要點一: 我想提一些建議。_ 要點二: 我們最需要的是科普類圖書。_ _,Id like to give some suggestions.,What we need most are popular,science books.,要點三: 除了通過閱讀獲取知識外, 我們應(yīng)該讀一些文學(xué)書去獲得樂 趣和靈感。 _ _ 要點四: 如果你能考慮我的推薦, 我不勝感激。 _,In addition to reading for knowledge, we should read literary books,for fun and inspiration.,I would appreciate it if you can consider my recommendation.,第三步: 扣主題拓展句 句式美優(yōu)秀分 要點一拓展: 了解到我們學(xué)校將購買圖書, 我想提一些建議。(用know 現(xiàn)在分詞形式作原因狀語) _ _ 要點二拓展: 添加推薦原因 _ _ _ _,Knowing that our school library is going to buy books, Id like to give,some suggestions.,What we need most are popular science,books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature,in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science,subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.,要點三拓展: 添加推薦原因 _ _ _ _ _,In addition to reading for knowledge, we,should read literary books for fun and inspiration. Classic works,written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories,and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also,encourage us to think critically.,【現(xiàn)場閱卷作文升格】 學(xué) 生 答 卷,我 來 閱 卷 該生習(xí)作為四檔作文, 得分為18分。能覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點; 大部分句子基本正確, 可以適當(dāng)增加復(fù)合句的使用; 銜接成分太少, 可以適當(dāng)添加一些過渡詞。 1. 第二句call應(yīng)改為called, 非謂語動詞錯誤, 此處student和call之間存在被動關(guān)系, 故用called。 2. 第四句advices應(yīng)改為advice, 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤, advice為不可數(shù)名詞, 故不能用復(fù)數(shù)形式。,3. 第七句和第八句可以合并成一個含有定語從句的復(fù)合句: Literary books can also be bought, which have many beautiful sentences and can improve our reading skills. 4. 第十句中的very like our library應(yīng)改為like our library very much, very不能直接修飾動詞。 5. 文章句子基本上都是羅列, 可以適當(dāng)加入表遞進的過渡詞: what is more, in addition, besides, furthermore, moreover, as well as, additionally等。,五 檔 作 文 Dear Mr Wang, Knowing that our school library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.,In addition to reading for knowledge, we should read literary books for fun and inspiration. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I would appreciate it if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely, Li Yue,一、提綱類作文的三步訓(xùn)練法 書信郵件類作文一般是以提綱類作文的形式出現(xiàn), 其寫作技巧有: 1. 收集信息, 確定文體。收集文章所提供的文字信息、圖表或圖片信息, 然后確定文章的主題、內(nèi)容以及文體。 2. 列出提綱, 明確主題。列出提綱, 認清題目和提綱之間的關(guān)系, 提綱只是對文章的提示和概括, 不是主題句。需要根據(jù)提綱的性質(zhì), 寫出完整的、體現(xiàn)提綱主旨的句子, 使之成為主題句。,3. 圍繞主題, 進行擴展。材料可以是事實、例證、親身經(jīng)歷、名人名言、諺語警句等。應(yīng)當(dāng)注意的是, 所選材料要與文章的主題相符, 即要“扣題”。同時要具有典型性, 能充分說明問題。在有多個例證的段落中, 還要注意各個例證之間的連貫性。,二、書信郵件類作文常用詞匯及句型 (一)常用詞匯 1. announcement n. 通知 2. popularity n. 受歡迎, 流行 3. activity n. 活動 4. volunteer n. 志愿者 5. course n. 課程 6. accommodation n. 住宿 7. vacation n. 假期 8. dormitory n. 宿舍 9. potential n. 潛力 10. behavior n. 行為 11. information n. 信息 12. charity n. 慈善 13. pressure n. 壓力 14. preparation n. 準(zhǔn)備,15. conference n. 會議 16. organize vt. 組織 17. trust vt. 信任 18. attend vt. 參加 19. benefit vt. 使受益 20. confident adj. 有信心的 21. look forward to期待 22. give sb. a hand幫某人忙 23. take regular exercise經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉 24. control the temper控制脾氣 25. remain optimistic/calm保持樂觀/冷靜,26. be helpful to對有幫助 27. be grateful to感激 28. be around the corner即將來臨 29. make a huge success取得巨大成功 30. in addition/whats more/besides另外 31. promote the friendship促進友誼 32. express warm welcome to sb. 對某人表達熱烈歡迎 33. develop sb. s interest培養(yǎng)某人的興趣,34. consist of由組成 35. benefit from從中獲益 36. wish sb. a pleasant time祝某人玩得愉快 37. compared with和相比 38. achieve a goal實現(xiàn)目標(biāo) 39. develop a habit培養(yǎng)習(xí)慣 40. get along well with sb. 和某人很好地相處 41. enjoy a colorful and fruitful life享受多彩和充實的生活,42. prepare for為做準(zhǔn)備 43. spare no effort to do sth. 不遺余力做某事 44. raise the awareness of. . . 提高的意識 45. make a big difference產(chǎn)生很大作用 46. succeed in在成功 47. make full use of充分利用 48. in need of需要,(二)常用句型 1. 精彩開頭 (2015全國卷) Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. 我想邀請您一起去參觀(表達邀請) (2014浙江高考)Knowing that our school library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions. 得知我們學(xué)校圖書館要買圖書, 我想(說明原因),(2014新課標(biāo)全國卷) I have seen your advertisement and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. 我看了你們的廣告, 我想更多地了解(表達詢問) (2014北京高考)I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot is injured, I cannot go with you as planned. 我記得我們原計劃, 但是現(xiàn)在由于我不能夠和您如期前往。(用于陳述理由) (2014安徽高考)Im sorry to know that youre having such a hard time at the moment. 得知此刻我深感遺憾。(表達同情),2. 正文佳句 (2015全國卷) Well also spend some time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. (活動內(nèi)容) 我們將一起花費一些時間, 我希望這會讓他們高興。 (2014新課標(biāo)全國卷) I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. 我想知道是否(表達詢問),(2014新課標(biāo)全國卷) In my free time, Ill continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. 在我業(yè)余時間, 我將繼續(xù)例如(介紹愛好) (2014安徽高考)Go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. 因為是做的一種有效方法。(表達建議),(2014安徽高考)The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. 重要的是學(xué)會以便于(表達建議) (2013山東高考)As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. 別無選擇, 只好(表達決心),3. 余味結(jié)尾 (2015全國卷) If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning. 如果您能來, 請告知我們, 我們會在等您。(邀請信結(jié)尾) (2015北京高考) If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send you more information. 如果你對此有興趣, 請告知我, 我將給你發(fā)送更多信息。(活動介紹結(jié)尾),(2014江西高考)I am sure that with great efforts, we will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here. 我確信, 只要我們付出極大努力, 我們將會(發(fā)言稿結(jié)尾) (2014陜西高考)I hope we students will benefit from your presence. 我希望我們學(xué)生會從中獲益匪淺。(歡迎詞結(jié)尾),(2013山東高考) I am looking forward to your earliest reply. 盼望著您早日回信。(電子郵件/書信結(jié)尾) (2012新課標(biāo)全國卷)I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. 我希望被接受為中的一員。(申請信結(jié)尾) (2012全國卷) I am sure you will have a good time at the party. 我確信你們會在玩得高興。(邀請信結(jié)尾),