寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)十五 新聞報(bào)道,1 寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo) 新聞報(bào)道是典型的應(yīng)用文體裁。掌握新聞的六要素,即人物(who)、 事件(what)、時(shí)間(when)、地點(diǎn)(where)、原因(why)、方式(how)。它的 結(jié)構(gòu)一般分為四個(gè)部分:標(biāo)題、導(dǎo)語(yǔ)、主體、結(jié)語(yǔ)。標(biāo)題是新聞報(bào)道的 題目,是對(duì)最有新聞價(jià)值的內(nèi)容的濃縮、概括、提煉和再創(chuàng)作。導(dǎo)語(yǔ)是 新聞報(bào)道開(kāi)頭的第一段或第一句話,它扼要地揭示出新聞報(bào)道的核心內(nèi) 容。主體是新聞報(bào)道的主要部分,它用充分的事實(shí)表現(xiàn)主題。新聞報(bào)道 的結(jié)語(yǔ)一般是最后一句話或者一段話,通常對(duì)全文內(nèi)容作概括性的總結(jié), 或?qū)π侣勈录陌l(fā)展趨勢(shì)作出預(yù)測(cè)。有時(shí),作者根據(jù)報(bào)道的事實(shí)在結(jié)語(yǔ)中提出令人深思的問(wèn)題。,2 常用句式 (1)Now there is a growing awareness that. (2)There are some articles in todays paper about Hope Project. (3)There was nothing interesting in the paper today. (4)The first two chapters of the story are in the issue of the magazine. (5)The heavy fog leaves us into deep thought. (6)The three-day conference has come to a close. (7)It is said that many people are against the new traffic rules. (8)Only in this way can we bridge the generation gap between parents and children.,3 寫(xiě)作典例 (2013江西) 星光中學(xué)(Xingguang High School)近期舉行了一次登山活動(dòng)。假定你是 學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者,請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文,報(bào)道此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括: 1.時(shí)間與地點(diǎn):4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain); 2.活動(dòng)的過(guò)程; 3.你對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論。 注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。,【范文】 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school orga- nized a mountain-climbing on April 10.Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day.At 8:00,we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.All the way we were chatting,singing and laughing,enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.When some fell behind,others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later,we all reached the top.Bathed in the sunshine,we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork,it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful time!,【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)評(píng)】 (1)文章開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,用in order to引出本活動(dòng)的目的。 (2)第二段對(duì)活動(dòng)過(guò)程的報(bào)道運(yùn)用了不同的句式和動(dòng)詞形式。運(yùn)用了過(guò) 去分詞作狀語(yǔ),彰顯了作者的寫(xiě)作功底。 (3)最后一段中用了兩個(gè)高級(jí)句式:not only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句式和what引導(dǎo)的 感嘆句。,4 跟蹤訓(xùn)練 假如你是李華,對(duì)今年一月出現(xiàn)的嚴(yán)重霧霾記憶猶新,認(rèn)為綠色生活 方式對(duì)于改善空氣質(zhì)量十分有益。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文,向校刊 “英語(yǔ)角”欄目投稿。,注意:1.詞數(shù):120左右; 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 Greener Life,Cleaner Air It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred in January.,【范文】 Greener Life,Cleaner Air It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred in January.It lasted for about three weeks and affected many areas in China,causing much inconve- nience and even did harm to our life and health. The incident warns us to take action to fight for clean air before its too late! And I believe a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air qual- ity! Firstly,its good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible.Whats more,be aware to save water, electricity and paper.Moreover,recycle whatever we can.Last but not least, dont forget to influence those around you to follow!,