走向高考 英語(yǔ),第一部分,微專題強(qiáng)化練,七 書面表達(dá),第一部分,3 (半)開放式作文,考 向 分 析,考 題 引 路,強(qiáng) 化 訓(xùn) 練,2,3,1,Writing 1 (2014福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(yǔ)(quotation)，按要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” Sir Winston，Churchill,內(nèi)容要求： 1你對(duì)該引語(yǔ)的理解； 2你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷； 3恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。 注意： 1短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息； 3詞數(shù)：120左右。,This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_ _ 立意與點(diǎn)撥：,答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.,At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldnt be able to ride a bike. Actually，we cant succeed in everything we try.Whats important is that we should stick at it.,Writing 2 (2015浙江) 在班級(jí)活動(dòng)中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時(shí)，你是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見？請(qǐng)你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100120個(gè)詞的短文。要求如下： 1從以上兩種做法中選擇一種； 2以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。,When I Have a Different Opinion _ _ _ _ _ _ _,立意與點(diǎn)撥：,答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.,Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.,An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.,The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.,審題急促，主次不分 根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120詞左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心靈的窗口。 (2)學(xué)會(huì)如何保護(hù)眼睛。 _ 易錯(cuò)分析：學(xué)生由于急于答題，所以往往審題不認(rèn)真，極易把寫作重點(diǎn)放在眼睛的重要性上。,答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it.,You should also keep in mind: “Dont read in a dim light or in the sun; dont read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight. If you fail to keep these rules, you will become shortsighted sooner or later.,解析：從題目的要求看，本篇作文要求寫成說明文。重點(diǎn)要放在如何保護(hù)眼睛上。例如：不要看書時(shí)間太長(zhǎng)，眼睛與書的距離要適當(dāng)，走路坐車時(shí)不要看書，要常做眼保健操等。如何保護(hù)眼睛這個(gè)問題比較好寫，因?yàn)榭忌羞@方面的知識(shí)和體驗(yàn)。開放式作文的答題思路與漢語(yǔ)作文非常相像。首先要明確主題，然后根據(jù)主題搭建文章的主體結(jié)構(gòu)，即寫作提綱，接著進(jìn)行文章血肉的填充。在擬寫作提綱時(shí)，要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么，要層次分明。,