,Protect wild animals,在我們國家，野生動物的數(shù)量在不斷減少。其中一些甚至瀕臨滅絕。原因如下： 人們?yōu)E伐樹木 以修建房屋，導(dǎo)致一些動物沒有了棲息地；而且，農(nóng)民濫用農(nóng)藥，威脅一些動物的生命。除此之外，為了賺錢，人們?yōu)E殺珍惜野生動物。 依我看，該是時候我們采取措施改變現(xiàn)狀了。我們不能濫砍濫伐，而應(yīng)多種植樹木以保護動物的生活環(huán)境。同時，應(yīng)該建立更多的自然保護區(qū)。 我相信只要我們立即采取行動，我們就可以跟動物和諧并存。生活會更加美好。,Para one: The present situation,In our country, the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller.Some of them are even dying out.,一二段之間的過渡句： ,The reasons are as follows.,Many factors contribute to / lead to / result in the problem.,para. one the number of wild animals,be dying out,In our country, the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller.Some of them are even dying out.,The reasons are as follows:,或者Many factors contribute to / lead to / result in the problem.,過渡句： reasons 或 factors,Para Two：reasons for the phenomenon 砍樹以修房屋： 導(dǎo)致 沒有棲息地 Sentences: ,cut down trees to build houses for building,lead / cause sb / sth to do lead to / result in doing,People have been cutting down trees to build houses / for building.,This causes many animals to lose their habitats.,have no place to live in lose ones habitats,People have been cutting down trees for building, causing many animals to lose their habitats causing many animals to have no place to live in.,濫用農(nóng)藥 害死一 些動物 Sentences：,use too much pesticide v. the abuse of pesticide n.,Farmers use too much pesticide and this causes some animals to die. / and this endangers the lives of some animals., kill some animals cause some animals to die endanger the lives of some animals,Farmers use too much pesticide, which endangers the lives of some animals. causing some animals to die.,The farmers abuse of pesticide causes some animals to die. endangers the lives of some animals.,濫殺珍稀野生動物 為了賺錢 Sentences:,kill rare wild animals,to make money make a fortune make huge profits,Some people have been killing rare wild animals to make huge profits.,羅列觀點常用詞： ,To begin with, then, furthermore, finally,To start with, next, in addition / additionally, finally,Most important of all, moreover, last but not least,For one thing, for another,On the one hand, on the other hand,para.2 reasons,cut down trees to build houses for building,lead / cause sb / sth to do lead to / result in doing,have no place to live in lose ones habitats,use too much pesticide the abuse of pesticide, kill some animals cause some animals to die endanger the lives of some animals,kill rare wild animals,to make huge profits make money,To start with, people have been cutting down trees for building, leading to some animals losing their habitats. Besides, farmers use too much pesticide, which endangers the lives of some animals. In addition, to make money, some people have been killing rare wild animals.,保護環(huán)境，愛護動物，不去傷害它們： 建立更多的自然保護區(qū) Sentences: ,protect animals and the environment they live in,set up more nature / natural reserves,Para.3 measures and conclusion or an appeal 不要亂砍濫伐：,stop cutting down trees without permission,We should stop cutting down trees.,We should protect animals and the environment they live in.,We should set up more nature reserves,組句成文： We shouldnt cut down trees without permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected to be set up.,an appeal ,I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and our life will become better.,In this way we can make our planet a better place for both human beings and animals.,二三段過渡句： ,Therefore, its time we took measures to change the situation.,Thus, immediate measures must be taken to change the situation.,protect animals and the environment they live in,set up more nature / natural reserve,stop cutting down trees without permission,Para.3,measures and conclusion or an appeal,過渡句 in my opinion take measures/steps/action to do sth.,呼吁 as long as in harmony with life,In my opinion, its time we took immediate measures to change the situation. We shouldnt cut down trees without permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected to be set up. I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and life will become better.,Dear editor, In our country, the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller. Some of them are even dying out. The reasons are as follows: To start with, people have been cutting down trees for building, causing some animals to lose their habitats. Besides, farmers use too much pesticide, which endangers the lives of some animals. In addition, to make money, some people have been killing rare wild animals. In my opinion, its time we took immediate measures to change the situation. We shouldnt cut down trees without permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected to be set up. I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and life will become better.,