2019-2020年高考英語優(yōu)等生百日闖關(guān)系列 專題22 書面表達(dá)方法與技巧題型介紹：書面表達(dá)是考查考生用英語表達(dá)自己思想的能力，即運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語知識及合乎英語習(xí)慣的表達(dá)方式來傳遞信息，進(jìn)行思想交流的能力。這將要求考生根據(jù)所給的情景和要求，在限定時間內(nèi)(一般30分鐘)寫出100個詞左右的書面材料。因此考生要做到：審題正確、要點(diǎn)全面，能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)、詞匯知識，使上下文連貫，同時語言要準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。所以，具有良好的書面表達(dá)能力是非常必要的，它也進(jìn)一步突出了對考生創(chuàng)新能力的考查。命題形式：一、試題突出了交際性、實(shí)用性書面表達(dá)的內(nèi)容主要取材于校園、家庭生活和一般外事活動，符合高中學(xué)生的年齡 特點(diǎn)和生活背景，基本都是考生己經(jīng)熟悉的或?qū)碛锌赡芙?jīng)歷的事情，情景真實(shí)可信。 所提出的要求符合考生的實(shí)際英語水平，具有可寫性，能夠充分展示學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力。二、全國新課標(biāo)考查應(yīng)用文的可能很大，命題形式一般是提綱作文。所以藝體生重點(diǎn)訓(xùn)練提綱式應(yīng)用文。解題技巧：一、 重視語篇銜接，提高思維蝶變一篇好的Writing，不僅要要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)規(guī)范，還需要有把這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)聯(lián)系起來的語篇銜接手段，即我們常說的關(guān)聯(lián)詞、連接性副詞、以及一些介詞和短語。這些往往是好的Writing出彩的部分。因?yàn)檫@樣的銜接才能使句子之間、段落之間有連貫性和整體性。 有不少的同學(xué)認(rèn)為語篇連接手段是個很高層次的東西，實(shí)際上，這些連接手段對于同學(xué)們來說并不陌生，常見的語篇連接手段有： 表時間/次序：First， in the first place， second; 表并列/遞進(jìn)： too， also，as well as， in addition， furthermore； 表舉例：For example， for instance，表總結(jié)：as a result， in summary， in short，等。 每年高考書面表達(dá)的參考范文所使用的連接手段也較為簡單，有些考生的書面表達(dá)事實(shí)上已經(jīng)超過了參考范文的水平。只要我們平時注意養(yǎng)成良好的邏輯思維和表達(dá)習(xí)慣，再掌握一些常用連接詞或短語，考場作文就能得心應(yīng)手。 二、掌握寫作技巧，高分書面表達(dá)“書面表達(dá)”是考查考生綜合運(yùn)用英語能力的一種題型，根據(jù)其一般規(guī)律，它要求考生對所給情景和要求寫一篇書面材料，做到所寫的內(nèi)容符合所給的情景和要求，文理通順。它既象作文，又不完全是作文，因?yàn)榭忌荒茈x開情景和要求自行立意、選材，隨意發(fā)揮。它類似翻譯，但又不同于翻譯，因?yàn)榭忌仨毟鶕?jù)需要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，因而有較大的靈活性。所以在做這種題目時，要掌握一個總的原則是“不漏、不錯、不多寫、不亂寫”。具體地則從以下四個方面去考慮、著手：1、讀題，明確要求，做好必要的準(zhǔn)備工作。高考的書面表達(dá)，題材較多，有給文字背景材料的，有看圖作文的，還有兩者皆而有之的。對于文字背景材料，考生要仔細(xì)閱讀，看懂題目要求，并對材料進(jìn)行必要的刪減。文字材料中有的是有用信息，有的是無用信息。不進(jìn)行必要的刪減，則會使做出來的書面表達(dá)輕者增加了錯誤的可能性，重者文不對題，邏輯不清。2、組織，進(jìn)行必要的語言準(zhǔn)備。讀題工作結(jié)束后，考生要就提供的信息或畫面進(jìn)行語言上的組織。這一環(huán)節(jié)非常重要，對“書面表達(dá)”的流暢和符合邏輯是舉足輕重。讀題的核心工作是作必要的刪減，組織的主要工作是作適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充，給框架補(bǔ)“血”補(bǔ)“肉”，使所要寫出來的文章意思連貫，語言暢通，邏輯嚴(yán)密。3、轉(zhuǎn)換，進(jìn)入實(shí)質(zhì)性的語言加工階段。要做好這一階段的工作，關(guān)鍵是掌握這么幾條原則，多用簡單句，少用復(fù)合句；多用短句，少用長句；講究簡明扼要，摒棄煩瑣復(fù)雜，意思混濁不清。這一階段是得分最終高低的關(guān)鍵所在。因此，除了掌握以上重要的原則外，還應(yīng)在具體操作中注意選擇正確的主語人稱和動詞的時態(tài)，多用貼切的固定短語，盡量使用自己“拿手”的句子，經(jīng)常留意句子的語法是否符合要求。從更高要求來說，用英語思維并一氣呵成地完成書面表達(dá)是最佳方法，這是上上策。但對于大多數(shù)英語水平尚未達(dá)到這一步的考生來說，轉(zhuǎn)換過程中進(jìn)行有效的控制是非常必要的。只有進(jìn)行這樣的控制，才能有效地控制錯誤的發(fā)生，才能少扣分，多得分。4、檢查，“書面表達(dá)”的最后一道工序。最后一道工序意味著一旦稍有疏忽，很難再有彌補(bǔ)，也就無法挽回。因此，仔細(xì)認(rèn)真地檢查對于最終的得分是十分重要的。在檢查過程中應(yīng)注意以下幾個方面： （1）信息點(diǎn)是否完整，有沒有遺漏。根據(jù)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，漏信息點(diǎn)是要扣大分的（23分）。要細(xì)致小心，一一檢查，確保無一遺漏。 （2）語法正確。語法包括兩個方面，一是詞法，二是句法。詞法方面主要檢查時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、冠詞、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)和詞語搭配等。句法方面主要檢查是否使用一些熟悉句型，特別是盡力使用簡單句這一原則貫徹得如何。總之，要做好“書面表達(dá)”是一件并非容易的事情，它需要平時的積累，需要考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中加強(qiáng)訓(xùn)練，以求水到渠成之功。當(dāng)然，考前的歸納和總結(jié)也十分重要，因?yàn)樗鹬掳牍Ρ兜男Ч?。體驗(yàn)高考1.【xx重慶卷】寫作青少年研究專家Susan Beacham在自己的英文站上開辟專欄，邀請大家分享心目中的“最好禮物”。她認(rèn)為，禮物貴在心意，應(yīng)為之付出時間和精力。假設(shè)你是李華，請用英文發(fā)帖，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：*贊同Susan的看法*你收到或送出的最好禮物是什么*該禮物的意義*期待大家回復(fù)注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80； 2. 符合語言規(guī)范； 3. 在答題卡上作答； 4. 開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 I am a high school student from China. _.【答案】I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them. The best gift Ive ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The books name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.I strongly remend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply. Yours ever, Li Hua【解析】審題：該題也具有較大的開放度。但按要求一定要寫出Susan的看法，而這個看法就在試題的寫作說明里：禮物貴在心意，應(yīng)為之付出時間和精力。而選擇什么樣的角度來寫一定要根據(jù)自己的生活和切身感受，且要量力而行。寫作技巧：一般情況下應(yīng)分三段來完成改寫任務(wù)：闡釋Susan的觀點(diǎn)并表示認(rèn)同。收到或送出的禮物的具體描寫及其意義。該部分是本寫作任務(wù)的重點(diǎn)，應(yīng)多費(fèi)筆墨完成。表期待應(yīng)另外起段完成，以便閱卷老師發(fā)現(xiàn)和評判內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。遣詞造句盡量使用自己熟悉的詞句。優(yōu)秀學(xué)生一定要在保持正確的前提下盡量使用較為復(fù)雜的句型，如狀語從句，定語從句，倒裝句和適量的非謂語動詞。特別強(qiáng)調(diào)：一定要注意卷面整潔并避免拼寫錯誤。2.【xx天津卷】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)高二(1)班的班長李津， 得知美國學(xué)生Chris 作為交換生， 下學(xué)期將到你班學(xué)習(xí)。請你根據(jù)以下提示， 給他寫封郵件：(1) 表示歡迎 (2) 介紹與本地生活相關(guān)的信息（如天氣， 飲食等）(3) 介紹本班情況 (4) 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增進(jìn)中美學(xué)生之間的了解和友誼注意：(1) 請勿提及與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息。 (2) 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)， 使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。詞數(shù)不少于100； 開頭已給出， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(1) 參考詞匯： 交換生 exchange studentDear Chris, Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.【答案】One possible version:Dear Chris，Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Wele to our class in China. Im glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group. Every student not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each other. So if you join us, Im sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too. The climate here is changeable. Now, it is very cool in autumn and cold in winter, so dont forget to bring different kinds of clothes with you. In your spare time, you can visit some famous places of interest in our city, as well as tasting all kinds of delicious traditional Chinese local foods. We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives. And I can be your tour guide if you like.As an American, there is no doubt that you are familiar with your country. So if it is convenient to you, please bring a map of America and some photos of your families，friends, and some famous buildings with you, and give us some speeches to introduce your school life and different culture of America. And well exchange our different lives and cultures together then.looking forward to your ing!YoursLi Jin【試題分析】本文要求寫一封Email。有四個要點(diǎn)1.歡迎美國的交換生Chris到你班學(xué)習(xí)；2.介紹當(dāng)?shù)氐纳?、氣候飲食等相關(guān)信息；3.介紹本班的情況；4.希望Chris做哪些事一促進(jìn)中美學(xué)生之間的了解和友誼。應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。【亮點(diǎn)分析】本文包括了四個要點(diǎn)。1. 表示歡迎。2. 介紹班級情況，運(yùn)用了which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。not onlybut also 連接詞是句子連貫。3. 注意事項(xiàng)。4. 希望Chris做的事。用了get along well with，make friends with，as well as， instead of， it is convenient to you等短語和固定句型。3.【xx北京卷】書面表達(dá)（共兩節(jié)，35 分） (15分) 你給英國朋友Chris寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括： 1.你們原計(jì)劃7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于腳部受傷，你無法按原計(jì)劃前往；3.表達(dá)你的歉意并建議將旅行推遲到8月份。注意： 1.詞數(shù)不少于50. 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Chris,_Yours,Joe【答案】Dear Chris,How is everything going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.Im sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Joe【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章范文使用了高級從句及省略：1. I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.2.高級短語：put off look forward to hear from考點(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文寫作4.【xx江西卷】書面表達(dá) 假定你是星光中學(xué)的高中畢業(yè)生李華，母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“What to learn in senior high school?”的英語沙龍活動，特邀請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱捏w會。請根據(jù)以下提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿。 1.學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)：方法，習(xí)慣等； 2.學(xué)會做人：真誠，友善； 3.學(xué)會其他：考生自擬。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右； 2.發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不須抄在答題卡上，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school._Thank you! 【題型分析】 今年江西高考英語書面表達(dá)屬于演講稿寫作。給予提綱，半自由半開放類。與學(xué)生實(shí)際生活十分貼切。讓學(xué)生有話可說，但要得高分必須有深度的思想以及就話題語言靈活運(yùn)用能力。即要能在清晰的框架內(nèi)在語言和內(nèi)容方面寫出自己的特色。【審題要素】 寫作時需注意下列幾點(diǎn)。 1. 應(yīng)該使用第一人稱。全文以現(xiàn)在以及將來范疇的時態(tài)為主，當(dāng)然不排斥用過去時態(tài)。 2. 按提綱提示清晰分段，不能缺少要點(diǎn)（學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)：方法，習(xí)慣等；學(xué)會做人：真誠；友善；學(xué)會其他）。 3.注意語言邏輯性和思維想象力。多用些語際銜接性詞語（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）?！舅悸穼?dǎo)引】首先， 思考出要學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)，要有個符合自己的方法，要養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，要有個正確的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度等；思考出要學(xué)會做人，要與人和善，要和睦相處，要正氣真誠等；當(dāng)然還要學(xué)會鍛煉，學(xué)會娛樂，學(xué)會自我管理等。然后，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)思考可用哪些表達(dá)法：the best way of ./ an acceptable thing is ./get into a habit of ./be active in./go over./behave well/it is kind of ./be involved in.等；根據(jù)提綱，連成句子，清晰分段?？捎胒irstly./in addition./last but not the least等。最后，雖然試卷給出了演講開頭，但我們別忘了在演講稿結(jié)尾時，或總結(jié)，或展望未來，或表決心等?！緲?biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.In the ing three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here. Thank you!【亮點(diǎn)說明】重點(diǎn)詞匯語句Challenging，used to In additionbuild up Develop a good habitget actively involved in No pains no gains.get along well with .高級句型1. Developing a good habit is also of importance. （動名詞短語作主語）2. .review what had been taught after class. （名詞性從句）3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. （強(qiáng)調(diào)句）4. I am sure that with great efforts, you will. （名詞性從句）.段落框架First,.In addition,.Finally,.5.【xx四川卷】面表達(dá)（共35分）假設(shè)你是李夏I你的美國筆友Sam來信關(guān)心你參加高考的情況，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回信告知。1. 考試日期與科目； 2. 考試準(zhǔn)備情況；3. 考試吋的狀態(tài)；4. 對試題的感受； 5. 可能的考試結(jié)果。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右； 2. 開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好； 3. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié).以使行文連貫； 4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 參考詞匯：college entrance examinationDear Sam,Thank you for your concern. _ _【答案】One possible version :Dear Sam ,Thank you for your concern. I am glad to tell you something about what you asked about our college entrance examination .The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year ,and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province .Generally speaking , we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three ,which is considered a vital period .With the exam approaching , most students will feel nervous and upset .But by now when I am sitting the exam , I feel calm ,because I think the exam is neither too easy nor too difficult . I am sure I will get a good result .But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. After all , I have made every effort ,and I wont regret . Best wishes ! Yours , Li Xia【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，語言流暢，時態(tài)、人稱和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號的使用正確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。在作文中作者開門見山提出自己寫信的目的，即告訴Sam有關(guān)高考的事情，這種結(jié)構(gòu)安排符合書信類文體的結(jié)構(gòu)安排。在句式方面作者使用了定語從句which is considered a vital period，狀語從句whatever the result is, 賓語從句what you asked about our college entrance examination等，而且還用到了Generally speaking , With the exam approaching , After all ,等短語，這些短語和句式的使用有效地增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，提高了作文檔次。考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文。6.【xx陜西卷】書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）假定你是中學(xué)生李華。美國一個中學(xué)校長代表團(tuán)即將訪問你校并出席英語周的一項(xiàng)活動。請根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求寫一篇?dú)g迎詞。 寫作要點(diǎn)：1.表示對客人的歡迎；2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動（如活動目的、內(nèi)容等）；3.表達(dá)對客人的祝愿。 寫作要求： 1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.稱呼已經(jīng)給出，請寫歡迎詞正文；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。Dear American guests, _【答案】One possible version：Dear American Guest,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm wele to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are wele to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.【解析】試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的?？忌趯懽髦氨匦拚J(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，要求是對美國代表團(tuán)的歡迎詞，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時。考生成文時應(yīng)注意：1. 結(jié)構(gòu)上：采用三段成文，第一段歡迎美國朋友的到來；第二段介紹英語周的活動；第三段表達(dá)愿望：希望獲準(zhǔn)。2. 時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；3. 人稱：第一人稱；4. 注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5. 適當(dāng)使用一些高級句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled， consist of， benefit from等等；還運(yùn)用了不定式to have作狀語，to develop作表語等，動名詞listening等作賓語，hope后賓語從句等等?？键c(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文寫作。7.【xx安徽卷】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1表示理解并給予安慰；2提出建議并說明理由。注意：1詞數(shù)120左右；2信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒Hi Worried.:Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment. Yours,Jamie【答案】Hi Worried: Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours，Jamie【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：a good way of的好方法， let out 釋放，get rid of消除， carry on 繼續(xù)進(jìn)行，句式上體現(xiàn)出多變的特點(diǎn)，如：Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. 這句話用了賓語從句，The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. 這句話用了表語從句和時間狀語從句， The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. 這句話用了不定式做表語和so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句， talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 這句話用了定語從句。文章還使用了合適的連接詞First, Second, And third使文章很連貫。考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)8.【xx浙江卷】書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）學(xué)校圖書館需要購置一批新書，現(xiàn)向?qū)W生征求意見。假如你是李越，你認(rèn)為學(xué)校圖書館最需要購置科普類圖書（popular science books）和文學(xué)類圖書（literary books）。請你用英語給圖書館王老師寫一封100120詞的信，推薦這兩類書，并分別說明推薦理由。注意：信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。Dear Mr. Wang, _ Yours sincerely Li Yue【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I remend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my remendation.Yours sincerely,Li Yue【試題分析】根據(jù)提示你用英語給圖書館王老師寫一封100120詞的信，可知這里應(yīng)該是考生比較熟悉的書信格式。學(xué)校圖書館需要購置一批新書，現(xiàn)向?qū)W生征求意見。先寫這個內(nèi)容來引出你要提出的建議。在寫推薦的兩類書時，要寫出為什么要推薦這些書。【亮點(diǎn)說明】短文用了一些短語和句式增加了文章的色彩，如：would like to do；help sb do sth；not only.but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why等，還用了一些連詞使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化，如：What we need most are popular science books這里what引導(dǎo)的主語從句；That is why I remend another category of books：這里why引導(dǎo)的表語從句；Ill be glad if you can consider my remendation.這里是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。9.【xx全國新課標(biāo)II】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）一家英語報社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是“十年后的我”，請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)和你的暢想完成短文。1.家庭：2工作：3.業(yè)余生活。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：3.開頭語已為你寫好?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible version：I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty eight years old by then . I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a puter pany as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . Iwill do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇記敘文，主題是“十年后的我”。在寫作時要注意從家庭、工作和業(yè)余生活三方面要點(diǎn)著手，因?yàn)樘崾拘畔⑤^少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。比如可以聯(lián)想到的內(nèi)容有健身，度假，聚會等等。在寫作時盡量使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或者插入語以使文章層次分明，條理清晰。還要正確使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級亮點(diǎn)詞匯來提高文章的檔次，如定語從句，賓語從句和狀語從句等。此外，因?yàn)槭菚诚胛磥?，所以要用一般將來時。【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文短小精悍，要點(diǎn)全面，語言簡練，時態(tài)人稱準(zhǔn)確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對未來的暢想，然后從生活，工作，家庭三個方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短語In my free time , In a word , such as等介詞短語，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句in whatever I do、I will work in a puter pany as a program designer等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點(diǎn)?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。模擬新題精選1.【甘肅省天水市秦安縣xx年高三第一次模擬考試】面對繁重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)，很多學(xué)生出現(xiàn)了不同程度的心理和身體方面的不適。鑒于此種情況，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會放松。假入你是中學(xué)生李華，請以How to Relax Ourselves為題寫一篇文章給21世紀(jì)英語報投稿內(nèi)容包括：為什么要學(xué)會自我放松；自我放松的途徑（如看電視上網(wǎng)體育鍛煉旅游等）你更喜歡哪種自我放松方式及原因注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 文章開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to Relax OurselvesFaced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students_ 【答案】Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students often feel tired both psychologically and mentally. If the situation continues, it will have a negative influence on our life and study. In view of this, we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves. As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, taking regular exercise and traveling.As for me, I prefer surfing the Internet in my spare time. For one thing, the Internet provides me with a wide range of activities for relaxation. Sometimes I keep track of the latest news as an entertainment. I also play puter games to relax myself. For another, the Internet gives me easy access to making friends with people at home and abroad. Furthermore, the vivid pictures on the Internet can greatly refresh me when I feel tired.【解析】【亮點(diǎn)說明】Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students often feel tired both psychologically and mentally.過去分詞作狀語；If the situation continues, it will have a negative influence on our life and study.句中運(yùn)用了條件狀語從句；In view of this, we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves. 運(yùn)用了In view of和are supposed to learn兩個高級詞組；As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, t