2019-2020年高考英語一輪 短文改錯、書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（17）短文改錯He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up to now? Hes a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasnt lived down to public expectations and has suffering a storm of criticism(批評).Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasnt a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收視率).參考答案：He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up butto now? Hes a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her hismusic, the show hasnt lived down to public expectations and has suffering a up sufferedstorm of criticism(批評).Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only to show wasthanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasnt a failure. In a late show, laterChou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收視率). Increase*結(jié)束 （1） 請根據(jù)下面提供的情景, 寫一篇100詞左右的短文。 Your friend Lily tells you, "I am suffering from depression (沮喪, 消沉). I have trouble sleeping. Im often tired. When I think about the future I feel hopeless. I dont enjoy anything. I am never happy. I dont laugh or smile any more." You need to give her some suggestions and tell her what she should do. 參考范文第一篇：One possible version: Lily, dont be upset. I have some pieces of advice for you. First of all, whenever you feel blue, try listening to some songs, because music has been proved to have great effect on smoothing pressure. If you still feel depressed, look at yourself in a mirror and smile for no less than 30 seconds, then you will believe that nothing is serious and have a good mood. Of course, you had better try to find any good friend you can trust to talk to. I do hope these will help you. Please believe tomorrow will be better and our life will be full of sunshine!*結(jié)束短文改錯 (共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965 When I was a child, I dreamed of flyingin the sky I joined the army in June, 1983 In 1992, I was sent tothe air force base In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination I worked hardly, because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998. I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronautslaterOn Oct15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circledaround the earth about 14 circle and then returned I was honoredto have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space 參考答案短文改錯1farmer改為farmer,s2 去掉1965前面的in 3 an air force base。4 把hardly改為hard5把because改為so6在chosen后加as7 manned8 flew 9 把circle改為circles 10 在have后面加been *結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）4. 目前，全區(qū)上下都在大力開展城鄉(xiāng)清潔工程的活動。為了響應(yīng)政府的號召，3月25日，星期天，你們班參加了一次校外環(huán)境衛(wèi)生清潔活動。請根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇日記，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?（為方便排版，圖見下頁）注意： 1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫、完整； 2. 詞數(shù)：100左右。Sunday, March 25 FineToday our class went out to do some cleaning. We gathered at the school gate and started out early in the morning. Some collected the rubbish in the park, some cleared the old posters off the walls, and others swept the street. We hoped to make our city more beautiful with our own hands. At the same time some of us went to the public places, where there were a lot of people. We kept on telling people not to destroy the beauty of nature so that we can have a cleaner world. In my opinion, such activities are necessary and instructive because some people are unaware of the importance of protecting the environment at present.*結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文-應(yīng)用文類11. 如你是學(xué)生會主席，請根據(jù)下面圖表，用英語寫一則關(guān)于春游的通知。參加者高中一、二年級的學(xué)生活動內(nèi)容1.去博物館看人與自然的展覽。2.參加泉山植物園。集合地點(diǎn)學(xué)校大門前集合時間1. 4月25日上午乘校車前往；2.早上七點(diǎn)集合，七點(diǎn)二十分開車。注意事項(xiàng)1.參觀展覽時保持安靜；并認(rèn)真記筆記，準(zhǔn)備回來后討論。2.在山頂野餐，要自帶午餐和飲料。3.參加者在本周四前到學(xué)生會報名。注意：1.通知必須包括表內(nèi)所列內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整內(nèi)容的順序和增加細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整。2.詞數(shù)：100左右。 3.通知時間：4月24日4.生詞：植物園the botanical garden; 報名sign up for; 學(xué)生會the Students UnionNoticeThe students of Senior Grade One and Grade Two will go out for a visit on April 25. Well first go to the museum to see an exhibition of Man and Nature. When youre in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because were going to have a discussion after we e back. After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it. So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.Our school bus will take us there. The school bus will leave at 7:20. Please gather at our school gate at 7:00 a.m.Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Students Union before Thursday.The Students Union April 24*結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文-應(yīng)用文類12. 假設(shè)你是浙江大學(xué)的老師，你將在開學(xué)典禮上向一年級的新生致辭。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇演講稿就大學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)生活提出幾點(diǎn)要求，并適當(dāng)闡述其重要性。合理安排學(xué)習(xí)和生活 同學(xué)之間關(guān)系融洽 積極參加校園社團(tuán)活動 。參考詞匯：大學(xué)一年級新生 freshman n. 社團(tuán) society n.注意：1)演講稿必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語。2)演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。 3)詞數(shù)：100120Good morning, everybody. Wele to Zhejiang University! As a freshman, you are going to have a pletely new life. So here is something you should keep in mind.First, arrange your time properly. Youd better make a timetable so that you will know what to do and how to do it and take advantage of every minute. It will make your work more efficient. Living in the university, sometimes you will face some problems that you cant deal with all alone. Then help from others will make things easy for you. So get along well with all the people around you. Always be open-minded and warm-hearted. Dont speak ill of others at will. You should always bear in mind that we are in a big family. At last, take an active part in societies. Societies at school are your second teachers. It will not only provide you more chances to make friends and challenge yourself, but make your school life rich and colorful as well.Enjoy your university life!*結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文-應(yīng)用文類15. 假如你是王林， 李明是你的好友， 他對布朗先生的公司感興趣，打算到該公司謀職（apply for a position）。請根據(jù)下面李明的簡歷表，用英語為他寫一封推薦信。詞數(shù)110左右。姓名李明性別男國籍中國出生地重慶婚否已婚出生日期1980.8.21通訊地址重慶市人民路148號電話023-63335550職業(yè)律師學(xué)歷大學(xué)畢業(yè)外語水平擅長英語， 懂一些日語、德語其他有三年工作經(jīng)歷，辦事認(rèn)真，待人誠懇，與人和睦相處Dear Mr. Brown,Id like to introduce my friend to you, Mr. Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position in your firm. He graduated from college three years ago and has worked as a lawyerever since. He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German. He works hard and is careful in everything he does. He is honest, kind and easy to get on with. He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Chongqing, China. He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Chongqing city. His telephone number is 023-63335550. He shows great interest in your firm. If he is accepted, he will do his best. Im sure he will be fit for the position. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Wang Lin*結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文-應(yīng)用文類16. 假如你是業(yè)余氣象員，你從電臺天氣預(yù)報節(jié)目得知了今晚和明天上午你處的天氣情況，晚飯后6點(diǎn)鐘在校廣播室用英語向全體師生作天氣預(yù)報，并提出忠告。要點(diǎn)如下： 午夜至凌晨兩點(diǎn)有強(qiáng)勁北風(fēng)。氣溫將下降5-8度。明天上午有陣雨。要求同學(xué)們今晚離開教室時關(guān)好門窗。明天早上起床時多穿些衣服，以防感冒。 詞數(shù)100在右。Attention, please.It is six oclock in the afternoon. Im now giving the weather forecast as usual. From midnight to 2:00 tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing across our town and the temperature will drop by 5-8.Also there will be showers tomorrow morning. Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your classroom tonight and when you get up tomorrow morning, please put on more clothes in order to keep yourself from catching cold.Thats all. Thank you.*結(jié)束高考英語：寫作綜合訓(xùn)練集寫作【看圖寫話篇】A假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“A Volunteer Day”的英文稿件。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖所提供的情景，敘述去年12月5日（The International Volunteer Day）你班志愿者日活動的完整過程。注意： 1、短文的開頭已為你寫好。2、詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞語： patrol vt. 巡視 trim vt. 修整 【參考范文】-Possible version:Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes. At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. I was in Group 1. My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school. We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day. What a valuable experience I had in the high school! Ill remember it forever. (184)本文為一篇記敘文，其主要考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力。本題相對比較容易，因?yàn)轭}目中提供了比較具體的情景，而且是學(xué)生常見的語言情景。但要注意表達(dá)要點(diǎn)要全面并按照時間順序展開敘述?？忌趯懽鞯臅r候，要盡量避免逐條翻譯以及過于平鋪直敘。在每一幅圖畫描述的過程中，可以在緊扣文章的基礎(chǔ)上，增加適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮和議論。圖畫作文若想得到高分，一定要讓閱卷人看到文章的時候。有一種身臨其境，饒有興趣的感覺。還要注意表達(dá)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)時要使用豐富多樣的表達(dá)方式。包括詞匯多樣、句法多樣，段落結(jié)構(gòu)多樣。以上是本題獲得高分?jǐn)?shù)的關(guān)鍵。*結(jié)束短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（） 劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water very dirty that we could hardly catch any fish in it. A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. In this way most of the fish in the river was killed. Unless the rivers all over the country are polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. As we all know, environmental pollution do great harm to living things. Now more and more people have realized what serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against pollution. We expect that water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.【參考答案】very sostraightly straightpolluting pollutedwas wereUnless If be bedo does what howmeasure measures water the water*結(jié)束