2019版七年級(jí)英語上冊(cè) 滿分沖刺 第18講 寫作改錯(cuò)講義 （新版）牛津版假如你是李華, 學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行“優(yōu)秀教師”的選舉活動(dòng)，你想選舉你的英語老師Daniel為本學(xué)期“優(yōu)秀教師”, 請(qǐng)你給組委會(huì)寫一封推薦信講明你選他的理由。要求：1. 詞數(shù)50左右；2. 敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名；4. 文章開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推薦) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. SampleDear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推薦) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. Im very like Daniel. He look very young. Hes about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is very good at it. He is funny, he also vey strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her. Yours sincerely Li Hua 題一：語法填空Im very like Daniel. He look very young. Hes about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is very good at it. He is funny, he also very strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her.內(nèi)容提升話題范疇：描寫人目的：推薦當(dāng)選 the Best Teacher of the year要點(diǎn)：談理由選材：詳寫性格特征，教學(xué)特點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，有始有終拓展詞匯helpful, kind, caring, patient, smartbe strict with sb. in sth. encourage sb. to dohelp sb. with/(to) doget along well with sb. treat sb. asWe can get/enjoy/improve改進(jìn)之后Dear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推薦) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. I like Daniel very much. He looks young and handsome. He is good at playing basketball. He is very kind and he treats us as friends. But he is also strict with us in study. He often encourages us to speak English aloud and helps us to speak English well. We can really enjoy ourselves and improve our listening and speaking skills in his class. All my classmates feel lucky to be his students. So I hope Daniel can be the Best Teacher of the year. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 第18講 寫作改錯(cuò)題一：Im very like Daniel. He look very I like Daniel very much. looks young. Hes about thirty years old. He His favourite color is black. Because he is , becausealways wear black T-shirt. He can wears a T-shirtsplays basketball very good. He is very good at play wellit. He is funny, he also very strict. and/but isHe wants we study hard. We all like her. us to him