書(shū)面表達(dá)突破(四)調(diào)查報(bào)告原題再現(xiàn)最近我校對(duì)高一學(xué)生入學(xué)一個(gè)多月來(lái)的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況做了一個(gè)調(diào)查,情況如下。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)下表的調(diào)查內(nèi)容,并提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。60%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為40%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為我的觀點(diǎn)1.高中學(xué)習(xí)很有壓力；2.科目難度大,課后作業(yè)多；3.沒(méi)有時(shí)間參加鍛煉等活動(dòng)。1.適應(yīng)并喜歡高中生活；2.課程更有趣,活動(dòng)更豐富,受益匪淺。要求：1.詞數(shù)150左右；2.文章開(kāi)頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：course課程；benefit對(duì)有益；stressful有壓力的寫(xiě)作模板學(xué)生習(xí)作Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool.Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey, opinionsaredivided.About持有第一種觀點(diǎn)的人數(shù).Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,第一種原因.Besides,第二種原因Onthecontrary, otherssay他們的觀點(diǎn).Theysaythat持有這種觀點(diǎn)的原因AsfarasImconcerned, weshould自己的想法.Onlyinthisway美好前景預(yù)測(cè)Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool. Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey, opinionsaredivided.About60%ofthestudentsholdtheopinionthatlifeinseniorhighschoolisfarfromrelaxing.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly, thesubjectstheyarelearningnowareobviouslymoredifficult.Besides, theyhavetodoendlesshomeworkafterclass, whichleavesthemlittletimeforexerciseandotheractivities.Onthecontrary, otherssaytheyhaveadaptedtothenewlifeandhavebeguntoenjoyit.Theysaythattheyfindthecoursesaremoreinterestingandtheactivitiesaremorecolorful, whichsurelybenefitthemalot.AsfarasImconcerned, weshouldbalanceourstudyandotheractivitiesanddoeverythingefficiently.Onlyinthiswaycanwelearnmoreandenjoyourlifebetter.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)本文同樣以三段論的形式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作的,文中用了簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、同位語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、倒裝句,句式豐富多樣,結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了較多高級(jí)句式,足顯作者寫(xiě)作功底深厚；段與段之間巧妙運(yùn)用了銜接語(yǔ)onthecontrary,asfarasImconcerned使過(guò)渡自然,整篇文章渾然一體；另外,文章中還運(yùn)用了一些較高級(jí)詞匯,如farfromrelaxing,balance等。所以該篇文章應(yīng)屬于一篇檔次較高的優(yōu)秀作文。仿寫(xiě)訓(xùn)練今年寒假期間你就返鄉(xiāng)農(nóng)民工問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查。調(diào)查中發(fā)現(xiàn)因受?chē)?guó)際金融危機(jī)的影響,農(nóng)民工原來(lái)打工的工廠倒閉,致使25%的農(nóng)民工失業(yè)。針對(duì)農(nóng)民工的就業(yè)問(wèn)題,政府采取了一系列的措施,如舉辦各種勞動(dòng)力招聘會(huì),鼓勵(lì)返鄉(xiāng)農(nóng)民工自己創(chuàng)業(yè),為年輕農(nóng)民工提供免費(fèi)技能培訓(xùn)等。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你的調(diào)查寫(xiě)一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。注意?.詞數(shù)150左右；2.文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：economicslowdown經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)；jobfair招聘會(huì)Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedoff­farmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedoff­farmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but_【參考范文】Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedoff­farmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedoff­farmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but25%ofthemlosttheirjobsbecausetheirfactorieshadbeencloseddownowingtotheglobaleconomicslowdown.Buttheywerenotalonestrugglingtosurvivetheeconomiccrisis.Duringmyinvestigation,Ifoundthatthelocalgovernmenthaddonewhattheycouldtohelptheoff­farmworkerstobeemployed.Allkindsofjobfairswereheldtohelpthemtofindjobsinthehometown.Somefarmerswereencouragedtoengageintheagriculturaldevelopment.Somewerehelpedtosetuptheirownbusinesswiththeloanprovidedbythestate.Youngpeoplewereofferedachancetobetrainedfreeandlearnapracticalskill.Ithinkthestatehasattachedgreatimportancetothelifeofthefarmers,butwestillfacealotofchallengesandmuchremainstobedone.However,withthegovernmentshelpandoff­farmworkershardworkingIbelievetheycansurvivetheglobaleconomicslowdownandliveabetterlife.補(bǔ)償練習(xí)1閱讀理解Workersmayfeelcomfortablehandinginasicknoteforfluorphysicalillness,butnearlyhalfofworkersreportednotbeinghappytodiscloseamentalhealthconditionatwork,especiallyamongmanual(體力的)andskilledprofessions.Thesurveyof1,000workersbynationalcharitytheShawTrustfoundthat18.3%wouldnotrevealaconditioneventotheirHRdepartmentandonly17.9%woulddisclosedetailsofanillnesstoacolleague.Oftherespondents34.5%saidthereasontheywouldnotdiscloseamentalhealthconditionwasthattheyfeltworriedorashamedtheywouldbetreateddifferently.Thisfigureroseto43.3%among16to24­year­olds.Besides,oneintenworkersthoughtthatdisclosingaconditionwouldreducetheirchancesofpromotion.TimCooper,managingdirectoroftheShawTrust,said,“TheOfficeofNationalStatisticsestimatesthatoneinsixpeoplemaysufferfromamentalillhealthconditionatonetime.Despitethis,ourresearchshowspeoplearestillunwillingtodisclosesuchacondition,particularlyinthecurrenteconomicclimateinwhichworkersareconcernedaboutshowinganysignofweakness.Weknow,however,fromourworkpeoplewithmentalhealthconditionsareperfectlycapableofmanagingajobandtheirconditionswiththerightsupportfromtheiremployersandthereforefeelitisimportantthatsuchmisunderstandingis laidtorest.”Tosolvetheproblem,businessesneedtocreateanenvironmentinwhichpeoplenotonlyfeelconfidentenoughtodiscussamentalhealthconditionwithalinemanagerormembersoftheHRteambutcanalsoreceivethesupporttheyneedtocontinuemakingavaluablecontribution.Additionally,tohelpbusinessesachievethis,theShawTrusthascreatedawebsiteofferingadviceandinformation.1Whatsthemaintopicdiscussedinthepassage?AWorkerstendtokeepsilentonmentalhealthconditions.BAlargenumberofpeoplesufferfrommentalhealthproblems.CWorkerspaymoreattentiontophysicalhealththanmentalhealth.DWorkersdisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsindifferentways.答案A解析綜合概括題。這篇文章討論的問(wèn)題是員工們對(duì)自己的精神健康狀況保持沉默。2Workersarentwillingtodisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsmainlybecause_.AtheythinkitstheirentireprivacyBtheywillbedismissedifdoingsoCtheyareafraiditwillinfluencetheirworkDtheywillhavenoopportunitytogetpromoted答案C解析細(xì)節(jié)理解題。從第二段的內(nèi)容可得出他們不愿透露自己健康狀況的主要原因是C項(xiàng)。3Theunderlinedphrase“l(fā)aidtorest”inthethirdparagraphroughlymeans_.AstrengthenedBunderstoodCneglectedDremoved答案D解析詞義猜測(cè)題。根據(jù)上文misunderstanding,可知laytorest是消除誤解的意思,所以是remove(去除)。其他三個(gè)詞都不符合。4WecanlearnfromwhatTimCoopersaidthat_.ApeopledisclosingmentalhealthconditionscandoworkperfectlyBemployerssupportcontributestoworkersperformancesCthecurrenteconomyisdevelopingwellDworkersshouldaskdoctorsforprofessionaladvice答案B解析推理判斷題。從TimCooper的說(shuō)話內(nèi)容可以推斷出選B項(xiàng)。補(bǔ)償練習(xí)2書(shū)面表達(dá)(2009·南通二次調(diào)研)90后的學(xué)生,思想特殊、行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供信息以“Dotrustusagenerationborninthe90s”為主題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿,以消除人們的憂慮。90后的境遇面臨更多的升學(xué)和就業(yè)煩惱,所處環(huán)境競(jìng)爭(zhēng)更加激烈。人們的憂慮1.注重自我,輕視合作2.缺乏毅力,容易氣餒3.盲目追求,渴望成名我們的長(zhǎng)處敢于挑戰(zhàn)Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Dotrustusagenerationborninthe90s”_Thankyouforyourlistening!參考范文Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Dotrustusagenerationborninthe90s”Livinginanenvironmentfulloffiercercompetition,we,agenerationborninthe90s,arefacedwithmoreproblemsinenteringhigherschoolsandgettingemployed.Underthesecircumstances,wearedevelopingourspecialmannersandvalues,whichhasraisedpeoplesconcern.Theyworrywecaretoomuchaboutourselvesandareunwillingtocooperatewithothers,whichmakesithardforustoachievesuccessinwhateverwedo.Besides,theyconsiderusaslackingindetermination,andthisiswhatittakestodoanyjobwell.Withoutit,wemayeasilygiveupintimeofdifficulty.Theyarealsoconcernedthatwearesoeagertowininstantfamethatwefollowfashionblindly,whichwillinturnruinourvaluesandfuture.However,we,agenerationborninthe90s,haveourownadvantagesdespitesomeweaknesses.Firstly,wehavethecouragetomeetchallengesandtakerisks,whichhelpsrealizeourdreams.Inaddition,wearequick­mindedandcreative.Wecandoourworkmoreefficiently.Yet,westillneedtolearnmorefromthoseexperienced.Pleasedotrustus!Thankyouforyourlistening！內(nèi)容總結(jié)（1）書(shū)面表達(dá)突破(四)調(diào)查報(bào)告仿寫(xiě)訓(xùn)練今年寒假期間你就返鄉(xiāng)農(nóng)民工問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查