走向高考走向高考 英語英語第一部分第一部分微專題強化練微專題強化練七書面表達七書面表達第一部分第一部分3(半半)開放式作文開放式作文考考 向向 分分 析析考考 題題 引引 路路強強 化化 訓訓 練練231易易 錯錯 防防 范范4考考 向向 分分 析析年份體裁話題命題形式命題趨勢2015湖北夾敘夾議文質(zhì)疑促進學習半開放命題角度從考生日常的生活學習逐漸轉(zhuǎn)變到思想層面。要求更高，形式更靈活。2015浙江議論文與同學有不同觀點時選擇半開放考考 題題 引引 路路 Writing 1 (2014福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” Sir Winston，Churchill 內(nèi)容要求： 1你對該引語的理解； 2你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷； 3恰當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。 注意： 1短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息； 3詞數(shù)：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_ _ 立意與點撥：項目內(nèi)容“三定”體裁：議論文時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時(講述個人經(jīng)歷)人稱：第一人稱確定結(jié)構(gòu)三段論：闡釋名言事例論證得出結(jié)論確定要點名言含義：面對失敗，我們不應該泄氣，而是應該鼓足勇氣，充滿熱情地繼續(xù)堅持下去個人經(jīng)歷：學習騎自行車的例子名言啟迪：如果我們不嘗試，我們就不可能成功，最重要的是學會堅持 答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldnt be able to ride a bike. Actually，we cant succeed in everything we try.Whats important is that we should stick at it. Writing 2 (2015浙江) 在班級活動中，當你的想法與大多數(shù)同學不一致時，你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學的意見？請你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英語寫一篇100120個詞的短文。要求如下： 1從以上兩種做法中選擇一種； 2以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學校、同學姓名等真實信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認定。 When I Have a Different Opinion _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 立意與點撥：項目內(nèi)容“三定”體裁：議論文時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時(講述個人經(jīng)歷)人稱：第一人稱確定結(jié)構(gòu)三段論：作出選擇舉例證明重申選擇確定要點選擇一種作法對應個人經(jīng)歷重申選擇 答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly. Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all. An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority. The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.強強 化化 訓訓 練練易易 錯錯 防防 范范 審題急促，主次不分 根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心靈的窗口。 (2)學會如何保護眼睛。 _ 易錯分析：學生由于急于答題，所以往往審題不認真，極易把寫作重點放在眼睛的重要性上。 答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it. You should also keep in mind: “Dont read in a dim light or in the sun; dont read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight.If you fail to keep these rules, you will become shortsighted sooner or later. 解析：從題目的要求看，本篇作文要求寫成說明文。重點要放在如何保護眼睛上。例如：不要看書時間太長，眼睛與書的距離要適當，走路坐車時不要看書，要常做眼保健操等。如何保護眼睛這個問題比較好寫，因為考生有這方面的知識和體驗。開放式作文的答題思路與漢語作文非常相像。首先要明確主題，然后根據(jù)主題搭建文章的主體結(jié)構(gòu)，即寫作提綱，接著進行文章血肉的填充。在擬寫作提綱時，要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么，要層次分明。