單元同步作文指導(dǎo)Unit 9What does he look like?本單元以“外貌”為話題，重點(diǎn)學(xué)習(xí)了如何來詢問人物的外貌及如何回答來描述人物的外貌。具體到書面表達(dá)中，要求同學(xué)們會(huì)根據(jù)題目要求來描述一個(gè)人。所以首先要記住描述外貌的基本句型，如描述人物身高、胖瘦、身材、發(fā)型、面部特征等的句型；其次在寫作中有時(shí)也可以根據(jù)需要描寫他/她的穿著特點(diǎn)、愛好、與別人的不同之處等。教材中出現(xiàn)的常用句型：Hes (really) tall/ short.他(真的)很高/矮。Hes heavy/ thin.他很重/瘦。He is of medium height.他中等個(gè)子。He has long/ short straight/ curly black/ blonde hair.他有一頭黑色的/金黃色的長(zhǎng)/短/直/卷發(fā)。He has a big nose/ a small mouth/ a round face/ a long face/ big eyes.他有一個(gè)大鼻子/一張小嘴巴/一張圓臉/一張長(zhǎng)臉/一雙大眼睛。拓展常用句型：He wears glasses.他戴著眼鏡。He often wears white clothes.他經(jīng)常穿白色的衣服。He likes playing basketball.他喜歡打籃球。He is funny and always makes people happy.他很風(fēng)趣，總是使人們高興。經(jīng)典范文展示 假如你是Lucy，在Linda的生日聚會(huì)上，你認(rèn)識(shí)了她的表哥Simon。這個(gè)美國男孩高個(gè)子，留著黑色的短發(fā)，戴著眼鏡，說話風(fēng)趣幽默。你想給筆友Anna介紹一下Simon，請(qǐng)根據(jù)Simon的情況給Anna寫一封信。要求：不少于60詞。Dear Anna，Hows it going？Do you want to know Simon？He is my friend Lindas cousin.He is from the United States.This year he is fourteen years old.He is a tall boy.He has short black hair and he wears glasses.Simon is very funny.He always makes people happy.Oh，I like this American boy very much.Do you want to be his friend?Yours，Lucy【點(diǎn)撥】：1.這是一篇介紹人物的應(yīng)用文，寫作的時(shí)候要注意信件的格式。2.描述人物可從外貌和性格特征等方面入手，可通過使用be動(dòng)詞、實(shí)義動(dòng)詞have等用不同的句式進(jìn)行表達(dá)，豐富文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，避免句式方面的單調(diào)乏味。3.寫作中首先要確保題目中的要點(diǎn)無遺漏，此外可根據(jù)文字提示合理發(fā)揮，豐富文章內(nèi)容。4.結(jié)尾時(shí)使用一般疑問句或反意疑問句，可使人產(chǎn)生親切感，是一種不錯(cuò)的結(jié)尾方式。熱點(diǎn)作文練習(xí) 友誼是人生不可缺少的一部分，你有好朋友嗎？現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語短文(不少于60詞)來描述你的好朋友，內(nèi)容包括姓名、年齡、職業(yè)、外貌及愛好等。One possible version：My best friend is Li Ming.He is 15 years old.He is a student at PEP Middle School.He is tall and thin.He has a small nose and two small eyes.And he has short curly black hair.He often wears jeans，a Tshirt and sports shoes.He studies very hard.And his favorite subject is English.I like him because he always helps other students (to) learn English，and he is good at soccer.單元常見錯(cuò)誤診斷 病號(hào)1：He has a_curly_hair【處方】hair意為“頭發(fā)”，是不可數(shù)名詞，其前不能加“a”。故原句中冠詞a應(yīng)去掉。病號(hào)2：Is he tall or short?Yes，he_is_tall【處方】上面問句是個(gè)選擇疑問句，回答時(shí)必須選擇備選項(xiàng)之一作答，不能用Yes或No作答。故原句應(yīng)以He is tall./He is short.作答。病號(hào)3：He has curly_brown_short hair.【處方】在英語中當(dāng)一個(gè)名詞被多個(gè)形容詞修飾時(shí)，應(yīng)注意形容詞的先后位置。在描述人物頭發(fā)時(shí)，先長(zhǎng)短，再卷直，然后是顏色，故上句應(yīng)改為：He has short curly brown hair.病號(hào)4：My friend Nancy has_of_medium_height【處方】of medium height意為“中等身高”，為介詞短語，應(yīng)位于系動(dòng)詞之后作表語。故原句中has應(yīng)改為is。