Writing : A trip to_What did they do?Christines trip to Hainan IslandAbout her tripWhoWhenWhereWhatHowHow longWhy.elements要素要素Find out the elements(要素）要素）about the trip1. The weather on Hainan Island was very nice.2. They went there by plane.3. They usually made sandcastles on the beach.4. They went there at the end of the year.5. They spent three days on the Hainan Island.6. They went to the city center to do some shopping. （ 市中心）市中心）tense: the simple past tenseWho When Where What How How long.They went to the beach. They made sandcastles.They went to the beach and made sandcastles.They made sandcastles on the beach.They went to the beach to make sandcastles. 去做去做andin/on/atto do (去做）去做）They went to the restaurant. They ate delicious seafood.They went to the restaurant and ate delicious seafood.They ate delicious seafood in the restaurant.They went to the restaurant to eat delicious seafood.and in/on/at to do (去做）去做）They went to the city center. They did some shopping.They went to the city center and did some shopping.The did some shopping in the city center.They went to the city center to do some shopping.and in/on/at to do (去做）去做）and in/on/at to do (去做）去做）They went to the forest.They put up tents.(搭帳篷）搭帳篷）They went to the forest and put uptents.They put up tents in the forest.They went to the forest to put uptents.WhenWhat they didOn the first dayOn the second dayin themorningthen they had deliciousseafood in a restaurant.On the last dayin themorningin theafternoonthey did some shopping in the city center.Fill in the table according to the passages. they went to the beach and made sandcastlesthey went swimmingin the seathey played water gameshow to arrange the activitiesin _order (順序）順序） On the first day, they went to the beach and made sandcastles. On the second day, theywent to the restaurant to have delicious seafood. Then they swam in the sea. On the last day, they played water games in the morning. In the afternoon, they did some shopping in the city center.First, Next, Then,After that, Finallytimebeginning At the end of the year, Christine and her father flew to Hainan Island for their last trip. They stayed there for 3 days.ending They really had a good time on Hainan Island. What a nice trip it was! whenwhowherewhy/for whathow longbring out the theme點(diǎn)題點(diǎn)題againfeeling (感受）感受）evaluation table of a trip to_評價維度評價維度評分點(diǎn)評分點(diǎn)是否達(dá)成是否達(dá)成內(nèi)容包含語言運(yùn)用運(yùn)用_ 時時 運(yùn)用運(yùn)用_句式句式結(jié)構(gòu)書寫規(guī)范 who, when, where, how, what 一般過去一般過去 不同不同and,in/on/at,todo,突出突出_順序順序_段式，段式，點(diǎn)點(diǎn)_大小寫，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確標(biāo)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確what時間時間三三題題A trip to Changfeng ParkWhatin the childrens cornershared food with each otherhad a picnic chatted and sang songs listened to musicplayed with IPad or microphonesplayed games in the childrens cornerwent boating on the lakeFirst, things we did in Changfeng park:next , then , after that, finallyA trip to Changfeng Park Last Thursday, we _Changfeng Park the autumn outing. We _by_. First, we_. Next, we_. Then, we_.After that.Finally. We_.What_trip it_!Homework:1.share your trip after class2.finish and check your own trip according to the evaluation table evaluation table 評價表評價表評價維度評價維度評分點(diǎn)評分點(diǎn)是否達(dá)成是否達(dá)成內(nèi)容包含who, when, where,how, what語言運(yùn)用一般過去時運(yùn)用不同句式結(jié)構(gòu)突出 what時間順序三段式點(diǎn)題書寫規(guī)范大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確I went to the Korea with my parents.Luckily, I meet my friends there.We went to there by car.At eleven thirty, we arrive there.I was visited a beautiful city in Jiangsu.It name is Yangzhou. We were drive a car go there.There is very beautiful.I like go to there.I have a good holiday.When I am three yeards old, I had a trip to Beijing.I had picnic there.My friends and me were boating on it.I go to there by car, when we arrive at Hangzhou,the time is about eleven thirty.Im happy to this trip.I was swam in the sea.I can by it go space.I am play with the bird.I am very happy to.When I finish climb it, I was very tired.It took our one hour.On summer holiday, we go to the beach. 錯誤分析:1.動詞運(yùn)用錯誤:學(xué)生沒有用對時態(tài), 通篇都是一般現(xiàn)在時,學(xué)生在寫作時,沒有時態(tài)的意識.對于一般過去時的認(rèn)識不夠具體化.學(xué)生不會正確使用過去時,學(xué)生對過去時的認(rèn)識僅僅是is/am/are 變成was/were . 動詞有過去時. 但是到底該如何去運(yùn)用, 同學(xué)們還不太了解.錯誤有: was visited, was swam, were drive am play 等。在這些錯誤中教師發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生對動詞運(yùn)用的理解十分模糊，甚至混淆。有必要加以指正。：2. There 的用法錯誤:We went to there by car.There is very beautiful.需要加強(qiáng)3. 介詞的使用錯誤:arrive at HangzhouIm happy to this tripI can by it go space.On summer holiday這類常見的錯誤教師需要集體講解,并在之后的授課中不斷復(fù)現(xiàn),讓學(xué)生加深映像,并在家作中得以體現(xiàn).Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “ A trip to.”Suggested questions:1.When and where did you go?2.What did you do there?3.How is your trip?When did you go to Hainan?Who did you go to Hainan with?last summer holidaywith my parents/aunts and uncles/cousins/grandparentsWhich place did you visit in Hainan?What did you do there?What did you do in Hainan?I _ .made sandcastles/What did you do in Beijing?I can _ .visited the Great Wall/The weather in Changfen Park was very nice.2. They went there by bus.3. They brought a lot of food and shared it with each other.4. They went there last Thursday.5. They spent the whole afternoon in the park. 6. They played games on the grass.7. They went their with their classmates.8. They like to be together all the time.9. They sang songs and chatted with each other on the bus.10. The listened to the music and played video games with their friends on their tip. Last summer holiday, I went to Korea with my parents. First, we went to the hotel and put our luggage there. On the second day, we went to the center of the city and did some shopping there. At night, I had a big meal. On Wednesday,We went to the Jizhou Island. Luckily, I met my Friends there. We played together. I had a good Time.I had a good trip last summer holiday.When I was three years old, I had a trip to Beijing. First, I went to the Palace Museum. ItWas big and beautiful. I bought a boy lion there.Then, I wnet to a big park. I had a picnic there.Finally, I came to a big lake. My friends and I were Boating on it. There were lots of fishes in it. We All liked fishes. What a nice trip. Last summer, I went to Yantai. It was Shandong Proviance. The sea in front of our hotel was very Beautiful. I usually went for a walk at the beach when I was there. There were some Small fishes. They were lovely. Sometimes weSaw some shells. I collected some of them. WeHave been there for two times. How nice YantaiWas! We had a good time. Last week, I went to Hainan. I went there by plane with my parents. We lived near the sea. We went swimming in the sea on the first day. And I collected the shells. The sea was blue andGreen. I think its so beautiful. We ate mangoes.They were very sweet. We enjoyed ourselvesvery much.Last summer, I went to Nanjing. It was very Big. It was beautiful. First, I went to the park.There were many people in it. Some werePlaying football. And some were boating. IHad a good time thre. Next, I went to the Museum. I saw a lot of interesting things there.And I enjoyed myself very much.