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分類寫作 十 記敘描寫 Stopthief 抓小偷runaftersb 追趕某人bench板凳umbrella雨傘arrestsb 逮捕某人praisesb forsth 因某事表?yè)P(yáng)某人contactsb 聯(lián)系某人instantmessaging即時(shí)信息surftheInternet上網(wǎng)housingconditions住房條件furniture家具expressone ssincerethankstosb 向某人表達(dá)真誠(chéng)的謝意ameaningfulactivity一個(gè)有意義的活動(dòng)bedecoratedwith 用 裝飾著colorfulribbons彩帶 必備詞語(yǔ) blessing祝福inadvance預(yù)先burstintotears哭起來(lái)takeoutdoorexercise進(jìn)行戶外活動(dòng)setoutfor 出發(fā)去某地inhighspirits情緒高漲地beautifulscenery美麗的風(fēng)景fallbehind落后 掉隊(duì)bebathedinsunshine沐浴在陽(yáng)光中athoroughcleaning大清潔scatter散落wipethedust掃灰塵mopthefloor拖地satisfaction滿足 必備詞語(yǔ) 1 Howbeautifultheenvironmentis 多么美麗的環(huán)境啊 2 Ihadapleasantoutingwithsomeofmyclassmatestoday 今天我和一些同學(xué)一起進(jìn)行了一次愉快的出游 3 Withtheeconomydevelopingrapidly I mgladtoseeourcityistakingonanewlook 隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展 我非常高興地看到我們的城市呈現(xiàn)出新的面貌 4 Youcanimaginehowcharmingitusedtobe freshair cleanwater greengrass swimmingfish flyingbirds andthegoldensunshine 你可以想象一下這里曾經(jīng)是多么的迷人 新鮮的空氣 清澈的水面 嫩綠的青草 暢游的小魚 飛翔的小鳥 還有金色的陽(yáng)光 5 Wecaughtsightofastreamwithgreengrassandbeautifulflowersonbothsides 我們看到了一條河流 河的兩岸都是綠草和漂亮的花 好句朗誦 6 Iwouldliketogiveageneralpictureof 我想給 一個(gè)總體的描述 7 Overthepasttwentyyearsorso greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife 過去的二十年左右 我們的生活發(fā)生了重大的變化 8 WestudentsspeciallyorganizedameaningfulactivityonTeachers Day 在教師節(jié) 我們學(xué)生特別組織了一次有意義的活動(dòng) 9 Theclassroomwascarefullydecoratedwithballoonsandcolorfulribbons 教室被大家用氣球和彩帶仔細(xì)地裝飾起來(lái) 10 Ms Liwasdeeplymoved withtearsfillinghereyes 李老師很受感動(dòng) 眼里充滿了淚花 11 TiredasIwas Ineverfeltsohappy 盡管很累 我從沒有覺得這么開心 好句朗誦 1 Hethankedmeforhavinghelpedheoutoftrouble 1 he改為him 2 Theyshowedusaroundthefarm whichwesawmanykindsofplants 2 which改為where 單句改錯(cuò) 每句只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 3 Fortunate theinjuredpeopleweresenttohospitalwithoutdelay 3 Fortunate改為Fortunately 4 Thecauseofthefirebrokeoutintheofficebuildinglastnightisbeinginvestigated 4 fire后面加which that 或broke改為breaking 5 Theblindmanwasoutdanger buttheyoungwomangotinjured 5 out后面加of 單句改錯(cuò) 每句只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 6 Iarrivedatthetrainstationat3 00a m surroundingbypeoplewhodidnotspeakmylanguage 6 surrounding改為surrounded 7 Myfriendwasunhappysohisdaddywasverystrictwithhim 7 so改為because 8 IfyouwillcometoGuilin youwillknowhowclearthewaterisandhowgreenthehillsare 8 刪掉第一個(gè)will 單句改錯(cuò) 每句只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 9 Iwaswalkingalongthestreetthataterribletrafficaccidenthappened 9 that改為when 10 Oneday anythingunpleasanthappened 10 anything改為something 單句改錯(cuò) 每句只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 2014全國(guó)大綱卷 十年后的我 一家英語(yǔ)報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文 主題是 十年后的我 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)和你的想象完成短文 1 家庭 2 工作 3 業(yè)余生活 真題滿分佳作賞析 滿分佳作 一 Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture Iwouldliketogiveageneralpictureofmyfuturelifeintenyears Firstofall Iwillhaveawarmfamilywhereallfamilymemberswillloveeachotherandcareabouteachother Asforme sincebeingateacherismydream I msurethatthisdreamwillcometruethen IwishtoteachforeignstudentstraditionalChinesecultureinacollegeatthattimeandIwillcertainlyintroduceChinatotheworld Timepermitting Iexpecttohavemoresparetimetospendwithmyfiendssothatwecanhaveabetterrelationship Suchwillbemyfuturelife theoneIhavebeendreamingof 滿分賞析 giveageneralpictureof 作出總體的描述 很好地作為本文的寫作總起句 恰當(dāng)用到了where作關(guān)系副詞的定語(yǔ)從句 考生要注意不要僅為了用從句而用從句 避免行文看起來(lái)生硬 用到being 現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)和I msurethat接賓語(yǔ)從句 使句式多樣 另外cometrue使用正確 其主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是 夢(mèng)想 切忌寫出 Icometruemydream 這樣錯(cuò)誤的句子 Timepermitting屬于獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu) 也就是 主語(yǔ) 分詞 結(jié)構(gòu) 體現(xiàn)了作者的語(yǔ)法功底 用到such開頭的倒裝句 滿分佳作 二 Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentintenyears Iwillbetwenty eightyearsoldbythen Iwillhavemyownfamily probablywithalovelychild IhopeI llworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner I llenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues I lldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo Inmyfreetime I llcontinuetotakeregularexercise suchasswimming runningandvariousballgames Onmyholidays I lltravelaroundtheworld Inaword mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful 滿分賞析 本文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰 第一句總起寫作內(nèi)容 從句whateverIdo作in的賓語(yǔ) 用Inaword進(jìn)行總結(jié) 2004遼寧卷改編 路人幫助抓小偷 作文翻譯一個(gè)星期天早上 中山公園里人很多 在一個(gè)貨攤前 一個(gè)女人正在買雪糕 這時(shí)她身后的一個(gè)年輕人搶走了她的手提包 她大喊 抓小偷 他搶了我的包 聽到這些話 一些人開始追趕他 有一位老人靜靜地坐在附近的長(zhǎng)凳上 當(dāng)搶包者跑過他身邊時(shí) 老人快速地拿起他的雨傘 把它放在搶包者的兩腿間 那個(gè)年輕人狠狠地摔倒在地上 很快 兩個(gè)警察乘警車來(lái)了 把他抓住了 女人感謝了老人 周圍的人都贊揚(yáng)老人聰明 參考詞匯 貨攤stand n 搶奪snatch v 逮捕arrest v 模仿翻譯 OneSundaymorning thereweremanypeopleinZhongshanPark Atastand awomanwasbuyinganice creamwhenayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway Sheshouted Stopthief He ssnatchedmybag Hearingthis afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim Therewasanoldmansittingquietlyonabenchnearby Asthesnatcherwasrunningpasthim theoldmanquicklypickeduphisumbrellaandputitbetweenthesnatcher slegs Theyoungmanfelldownonthegroundhard Soontwopolicemencameinapolicecarandarrestedhim Thewomanthankedtheoldman andthepeoplearoundpraisedtheoldmanforhiscleverness 2004北京春季卷改編 過去和現(xiàn)在生活的對(duì)比 作文翻譯我們生活的改變過去的二十年左右 我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大的改變 以我的家庭為例 過去 我父母主要通過寫信和別人聯(lián)系 但是現(xiàn)在我們發(fā)郵件或者使用即時(shí)通訊 以前 我父母聽收音機(jī)和看電視來(lái)獲取新聞和其他資訊 但是現(xiàn)在我們通過電腦或智能手機(jī)上網(wǎng) 另外一個(gè)巨大的改變是居住條件 當(dāng)他們結(jié)婚時(shí) 我父母住在擠滿了家具的一個(gè)小房間 但是現(xiàn)在我們搬進(jìn)了一間新的三房套間 總之 過去二十年生活的改善給我們帶來(lái)了舒適和方便 ChangesInOurLifeOverthepasttwentyyearsorso greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife Takemyfamilyforexample Myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast butnowwesendemailsoruseinstantmessaging AndoncemyparentslistenedtotheradioandwatchedTVfornewsandotherinformation butnowwesurftheInternetviacomputersorsmartphones Anotherbigchangeisinthehousingconditions Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture butnowwehavemovedintoabignewthree roomapartment Inshort changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience 2012陜西卷改編 慶祝教師節(jié) 假定你是李華 教師節(jié)那天你們班組織了一次活動(dòng) 請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn) 為校刊 英語(yǔ)角 版寫一篇短文 寫作要點(diǎn) 1 活動(dòng)的策劃 2 教室的布置 3 活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容 4 你的感想 Ms Li ourEnglishteacher musthavefounditstrangeonTeachers Day Shedidnotreceiveasinglegreetingcardfromusstudents Shewouldhaveneverthoughtacompletesurprisewaswaitingforher 全真考場(chǎng) 2012陜西卷改編 慶祝教師節(jié) Ms Li ourEnglishteacher musthavefounditstrangeonTeachers Day Shedidnotreceiveasinglegreetingcardfromusstudents Shewouldhaveneverthoughtacompletesurprisewaswaitingforher Inordertoexpressoursincerethankstoher westudentsspeciallyorganizedameaningfulactivityonTeachers Day Theclassroomwascarefullydecoratedwithballoonsandcolorfulribbons withourblessingswrittenontheblackboard Standinginrows allofuskeptsilentbeforeMs Licamein andshereceivedwarmapplauseuponappearingatthedoor Meanwhile ourmonitorpresentedflowerswellpreparedinadvancetoher Ms Liwassosurprisedandhappythatsheburstintotearswithexcitement Ms Liwasdeeplymoved withtearsfillinghereyes Throughthisactivity notonlydoIknowtheteachers kindnessbutrealizeasimplegreetingfromusisthebestgiftforourteachers 2013江西卷改編 登山活動(dòng) 星光中學(xué) XingguangHighSchool 近期舉行了一次登山活動(dòng) 假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者 請(qǐng)寫一篇短文 報(bào)道此次活動(dòng) 內(nèi)容包括 1 時(shí)間與地點(diǎn) 4月10日 大青山 DaqingMountain 2 活動(dòng)的過程 3 你對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論 2013江西卷改編 登山活動(dòng) Inordertoencouragestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise ourschoolorganizedamountain climbingonApril10 Hundredsofustookpartinit Itwasaniceday At8 00am wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMoutainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits Allthewaywewerechatting singingandlaughing enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery Whensomefellbehind otherswouldcomeandofferhelp About2hourslater weallreachedthetop Bathedinsunshine wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy Theactivitybenefitedusalot Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxation italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus 2013陜西卷改編 做家務(wù) 假定你是李華 請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇周記 記述你周末幫助家人做家務(wù)的一次經(jīng)歷 寫作要點(diǎn) 1 做家務(wù)的理由 2 做家務(wù)的過程 3 你的感受 Iaman18 year oldmiddleschoolstudent 2013陜西卷改編 做家務(wù) I man18 yearoldmiddleschoolstudent Ihavebeenbusywithmystudyandseldomhelpedmyparentswiththehousework Feelingquitesorry Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp LastSunday whenmyparentswentoutshopping Isuddenlygotanidea whynotgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture Afterthat Isweptandmoppedthefloor Atthisverymoment myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprised MymothergavemeahugandIcouldseesatisfactioninhereyes TiredasIwas Ineverfeltsohappy ThankYou