2019-2020年高考英語一輪 短文改錯、書面表達訓(xùn)練（13）Passage *Fred and I havent many in mon. I sometimes 1. _wonder why we were friends at all. Fred is 2. _always busy make things. Everything he makes is3. _so perfect that I sometime feel envy at his skill.4. _My trouble is that Im one of those lazy people. 5. _Outside my work at the office, the only thing which 6. _interests me is listening to the music. I have a 7. _big collection of records but all day long the 8. _only thing I can think is when Im going to9. _get home listen to a new piece.10. _【參考答案】Key 12 1) many-much 2) were-are 3) make - making 4) sometime-sometimes 5) right6) which that 7)去掉 the 8) but - and 9) think 后加about10) listen 前加to *結(jié)束*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達講義：表格作文(2)(25 min.)假定你在參加一場英語辯論賽。你是正方辯手，試用英語簡要地表明自己的觀點。詞數(shù)：不少于120。主題Shall a senior student take a parttime job in holidays？觀點 1. 高中生重視功課，而對社會知道甚少。2. 假期做兼職是很好的社會實踐。3. 通過書本學(xué)到的東西不如通過實踐學(xué)到的東西有效。4. 通過社會實踐，我們可以在知識和能力兩個方面取得進步。5. 假期做兼職的報酬或多或少對家里有些幫助。結(jié)論高中生_【參考范文】One possible version：Dear friends, Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though its not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a parttime job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books cant have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a parttime job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a parttime job in holidays, if possible, of course.*結(jié)束短文改錯 (xx*保定調(diào)研)Last Sunday I went to the Birds Nest Stadium. At gate1._I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2._to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3._I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4._but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They were5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._After e out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9._we could write to each other later. They thanked us again and again.10._I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.答案與解析：1gate前加the此處表示特指，指的是鳥巢體育館的大門。2AmericaAmerican應(yīng)該用形容詞來修飾名詞。3去掉第一個togreet是及物動詞，可直接加賓語，不必加to。45butand來北京和喜歡中國文化為并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折，應(yīng)用and表示并列。6seemseemed根據(jù)事情發(fā)生的時間last Sunday和全文的時態(tài)可知，此處也應(yīng)用一般過去時。7去掉beentake place無被動語態(tài)。8eing介詞after后要用動名詞形式。9addressaddresses交換的是雙方的郵箱地址，故此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。10usme是“我”幫助了他們，因此用me。*結(jié)束假設(shè)你將要參加學(xué)校舉辦的英語作文比賽，請你根據(jù)右圖，寫一篇120詞左右的英語作文。內(nèi)容包括：1描述圖畫的主要內(nèi)容；2分析出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因；3談?wù)勎覀儜?yīng)該如何保護地球，拯救野生動物。參考詞匯：北極熊polar bear；企鵝penguin_參考范文：From the picture we can see a polar bear sitting on a small piece of ice with a penguin on its head.It shows that our environment is worsening day by day and some wild animals are in great danger.In recent years，with the development of science and technology，the Earth is faced with a variety of environmental problems，including global warming.As a result，many animals have lost their natural habitat.I think it is time that we took effective measures to protect the environment.We should avoid using fossil fuel to reduce green house gas，and we can plant more trees to take in carbon dioxide.*結(jié)束【2】Its easy to see how the sawfish got its nameThese frightful creatures can grow to be more than 6 meters longTheir bodies are flat and winged，like underwater airplanesAnd their noses are shaped like chainsawsSawfish are food hunters of the seaWhen a sawfish is hungry，it waves its sharptoothed snout (口鼻部) through a group of fishThen，it lifts its nose and uses its mouth to draw the injured victimsHardy (適應(yīng)力強的)population of sawfish thrived in warm waters along coastlines around the world for thousands of yearsOver the past 200 years，however，human actions have severely endangered sawfishThreats include fishing nets that trap the huge animals，often by mistakeSome people collect sawfishs snouts as prizes：One snout recently sold for nearly $ 1,600 onlineIn some Asian cultures，the toothy snouts are used in ceremonies to drive evil and disease awayAnd sawfish are also deliciousA growing demand in Asia for the fishs fins for a pricey soup has contributed to the fishs lovespared with other fish，sawfish give birth late in life and at slow rates，which makes it hard for them to recover from overfishingNew efforts now aim to restore sawfish populationBeginning next month，an international agreement will provide protection for all seven of the worlds sawfish speciesScientists are hoping that its not too late to save the sawfishUntil 1998，“this fish had never been formally studied in the United States，”says Tonya Wiley of the Mote Marine Laboratory in Sarasota，F(xiàn)la“We didnt know such basic things as where they live，what habitat they use，how often they breed，how many young they haveeven what age sawfish are when they begin breeding”Through historical studies and field research，scientists have bee aware of how much the fishs numbers have decreasedToday，there may be 90 percent fewer sawfish than there used to beWiley estimates that only 3,000 to 6,000 sawfish remain in US watersSawfish1 Size2 3 Body：Flat and wingedNose：Like a chainsawWays to hunt for foodAttacking fish with 4 Drawing the injured victims with its mouth5. sawfishs disappearance6 Sawfishs snouts relates businessAsians interest in eating fishIts 7 and slowly which makes it hard to recover from overfishing8 Only 10% sawfish left3,000 to 6,000 remain in US watersEfforts9 MeasureTo restore sawfish population10 to all seven of the worlds sawfish species【參考范文】1Descriptions/Features/Characteristics2Shape/Appearance3Over 6meter long4its sharptoothed snout5Factors/Reasons for/Causes of6Peoples fishcatching activities7giving birth/breeding late 8Present/Todays situation9Aim/Goal/Purpose10Offering protection*結(jié)束 下列圖描述的是Mrand Mrs white購物后，到停車場取車時發(fā)生了一場誤會。請用英語將下列圖示敘述清楚。短文必須包括圖畫的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細節(jié)，使其連貫完整。 詞數(shù)80100。 參考范文After shopping, Mr. and Mrs. White went back to the car park. Mr. White carried a lot of packets in his arms. And just as his hands were full, Mrs. White asked him where he put his key to the car. He told her that it was in his pocket. But she was unable to find the key in his right pocket. Mr. White told her it was in his left pocket and she got it. But when she was unlocking the door, the key just didnt fit in it. Mr. White was wondering what had gone wrong, when the owner of the car came up, asking angrily, "What are you doing to my car?" It was then that they realized it was a wrong car that was exactly like theirs. Mr. White answered, "We are very sorry, weve made a mistake."*.(典型題)*結(jié)束（201*重慶卷） 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1份，滿分10分）以下標(biāo)有題號的每一行均有一個錯誤，請找出，并按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：請在答題卡上作答。Today is Sunday .Ive been in Canada for two months .This is the first time that Ive been away my family for such a 76. long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive 77. soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia,like 78. many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81. usually talk a lot about our own family. Were both surprised 82. that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84. will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85. to China several times.I just cant wait.【答案】第一節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）Today is Sunday .Ive been in Canada for two months .This is the first time that Ive been away my family for such a 76. from long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive 77. mine soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia,like 78. living many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. is friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. met is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81. hard usually talk a lot about our own family. Were both surprised 82. families that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. and we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84. the will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85. whom *結(jié)束