2019-2020年高考英語一輪 短文改錯、書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（11）Passage *My hometown is a pretty city, so people there 1._are kind and polite.With ing of spring, grass and 2. _trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors. 3 _In summer, the sea under the blue sky is even more 4 _beautiful.After autumn arrives, the city looks as 5. _an old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter, 6. _a lot of white birds e to my city for food.I can 7. _wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long 8. _time.While they find fish ing to the surface, 9. _they fly down immediate and catch them without 10. _delay.That is my city, and I love it so much.【參考答案】Key 81. so- and 2. the ing 3. grew- grow 4. right 5. as-like 6 fallenfalling 7. I-They 8. 去掉more 9. WhileWhen 10.immediate-immediately*結(jié)束*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：表格作文(1)(25 min.)(xx師大附中二模)某英語報向中學(xué)生征集關(guān)于開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)的文章，請你根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇介紹你校和你們小組研究性學(xué)習(xí)活動的短文。 全校研究性學(xué)習(xí)所涉及的主題當(dāng)?shù)仫L(fēng)俗習(xí)慣人民生活變化環(huán)境保護(hù)你們小組的研究課題家鄉(xiāng)河流的污染問題：1. 發(fā)現(xiàn)三大污染源：工廠廢水、生活污水、農(nóng)民使用的農(nóng)藥；2. 建議：感想與體會注意：1. 開頭語已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；3. 詞數(shù)：不少于120。參考詞匯： agricultural chemicalsNowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. _【參考范文】One possible version：Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs, changes of peoples living conditions，and protection of the environment. Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown. The river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smell. Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories. Waste water from peoples daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river. To deal with the problem, we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it. Through our research，not only did we gain practical experience, but also we developed various abilities. We find such research very valuable and helpful. *結(jié)束如何展開你的文章是英文寫作必不可少的一步。如果不了解展開文章的技巧和方法，你的寫作可能會是一篇糟糕透頂?shù)?、令讀者大跌胃口的、不能稱之為文章的文章。讀完下面的tips，也許你會有所感悟。 I. Writing down ideas As you begin to plan your writing, you may already have some ideas concerned with points you wish to write. Write them down on a sheet of paper or card as they e to you. As you continue to study your subject, be sure to add further ideas and information. Your finished list might look something like this: Topic: The School Library Ideas: 1. a very well designed modern building 2. a large number of useful books 3. bright and quiet reading rooms 4. patient and helpful librarians. II. Building a thesis sentence Having pleted your list of ideas, your next step is to build a thesis sentence by organizing those ideas in relation to each other, because while planning writing, you must make certain that you have a central idea in your mind. Such a central idea is called a thesis sentence. As a thesis sentence indicates the central idea that you will develop in your paper, you should use only one in the writing. You need not always express a thesis sentence in the paper itself, although you should clearly control the development of any writing that requires one. If you do use such a statement, it had better appear in the very first paragraph. Why? Because it works for the entire writing in the way a topic sentence does in a paragraph. It tells the readers of your paper what the "big idea" is-and also helps you keep on track in developing that idea. Take your writing with the topic "The School Library" for example. From our study of the school library we have got two possible thesis sentences: 1. The library is a nice place to study in. 2. The library plays an important part in both teaching and students study and life. III. Making an outline One useful way of planning a piece of writing is a formal outline. An outline is an organized list of related items of ideas. Some people object to outlining. They believe that preparing a formal outline steals valuable time from actual writing and that an outline acts as a brake on the free flow of their ideas. Both objections make some sense. But time spent on an outline will be more than repaid when one begins to write. Also, few of us always think logically. So the final step in organizing your ideas is to make an outline. Take your writing with the topic "The School Library" for example. Topic: The School Library Thesis: The school library plays an important part in both teaching and students study and life. Outline: 1. There are bright and quiet reading rooms in the library, so students can study and read in them. 2. Students borrow books from the library when they need reference books for their studies. 3. The library provides students with a large number of useful books*結(jié)束短文改錯（滿分10分）下面文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you. Luckily I was the ampletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday onevening.In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughterin the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport. When he reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. Worse even, he discovered he cant remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the airport tried to think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he caught a next plane back to England. 參考答案 短文改錯（滿分10分）In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughterin the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/ Kennedy Airport. When he toreached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. Worse even, he arrived stilldiscovered he cant remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the couldnt eitherairport tried to think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but trying thatwith much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he nocaught a next plane back to England. The*結(jié)束寫作綜合練(一) 【1】假如你叫李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友Jim發(fā)來一封email，向你了解我國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日端午節(jié)的情況，請你根據(jù)中文提示和圖片利用本單元學(xué)過的詞匯寫一封圖文并茂的電子文檔發(fā)給他。節(jié)日日期：中國農(nóng)歷五月初五節(jié)日由來：愛國詩人屈原投江自盡劃船找他的尸體往江中投粽子(以免魚損傷他的軀體)。節(jié)日活動：家人團(tuán)聚，觀看龍船比賽，吃粽子，紀(jì)念先人。參考詞匯：端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu Festival；農(nóng)歷Lunar calendar；自殺mit suicide；汨羅江Miluo River 【1】-【參考范文】Dear Jim，Thanks for your interest in my countrys traditional festivalsAnd Im delighted to introduce The Dragon Boat Festival to youThe Dragon Boat Festival, also known as the Duanwu Festival, is one of the most significant traditional Chinese festivalsIt falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to Chinese Lunar calendarThe festival is said to be in honour of Qu Yuan, a great poet as well as one who tried all his best to help his own country but failed and mitted suicide by drowning himself in Miluo River The folks respected and loved him so much that they threw zongzi into the river to prevent fish from eating his body Later it became a custom for people to eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races on that dayNow we can have a oneday holiday on this festival when all family members can stay together and enjoy a big meal As far as I am concerned, it is a chance for people not only to have a day to have fun, but also a day to recall the memories of our ancestors and to give thanks to the ones who have helped us Although Qu Yuan was gone, his spirit will always live with usYours，Li Hua*結(jié)束高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）3. 受某英文報的委托，你最近對高中生的英語閱讀興趣做了一次調(diào)查。請根據(jù)以下信息，用英語為該報寫一篇100詞左右的短文。短文的標(biāo)題及首句已為你寫好。調(diào)查內(nèi)容：在新聞、故事、科普、學(xué)習(xí)方法四種英文文章中，學(xué)生最喜歡哪一種調(diào)查范圍：湖北省的10所中學(xué) 調(diào)查對象：高中生調(diào)查人數(shù)：1200 調(diào)查方式：訪談 調(diào)查結(jié)果：（見下圖） Reading Interests of Senior Middle School StudentsRecently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：要點作文(1)(25 min.)(xx師大附中月考)學(xué)校學(xué)生會正在招募學(xué)生干部，你作為一名優(yōu)秀的高中生，想競選學(xué)生會主席，請你準(zhǔn)備一篇不少于120詞的競選演講稿，內(nèi)容包括： 1你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛好等)可以勝任學(xué)生會主席的工作；2如果當(dāng)選，你將為本校同學(xué)做些什么。注意：開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯： 學(xué)生會主席chairman of the Students UnionDear fellow students，Its my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Students Union. _【參考范文】One possible version：Dear fellow students，Its my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union. Who is the best candidate? The answer is: me, nobody but me.As a diligent man with pleasant personality, I have acquired working experience and munication skills which I consider as the most essential for the work. Meanwhile, as a big fan of sports，I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger. I possess strong determination to take firm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team.If I am elected, I believe I have the capability to lead the Union to advance in the right direction. I will take innovative measures to make the Union a true assistance to students study and life here as well as a bridge of munication between teachers and students. I promise that Ill bee your voice, representing every need of yours. So, my wise friends, vote for yourself and vote for me thats because I am your hope and your best choice! Thank you! *結(jié)束(201*鄭州質(zhì)檢)We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1._study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2._and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3._take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4._Theres many different kinds of sports we can do them，5._such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6._However, now we have too much homework to do in7._every day. We hope that well be giving less homework8._and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9._that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10._答案與解析：1healthyhealth這里是句子的主語，因此用名詞形式。2byon/upondepend on/upon是固定搭配。3helphelps這句話的主語是動名詞短語doing sports and games。動名詞短語作主語表示一件事時，謂語動詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。4butandfeel tired和get sick是并列關(guān)系，不表示轉(zhuǎn)折，因此將but改為and。5去掉them這是一個定語從句，從句中作動詞do的賓語的關(guān)系代詞that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。6swimswimming應(yīng)用動名詞與前面的running，walking并列，故應(yīng)用swimming。7去掉inevery day可以單獨作狀語，前面不需要加介詞。8givinggiven這里是被動語態(tài)，因此用過去分詞。9take前加to此處考查的是have time to do sth.的結(jié)構(gòu)。10*結(jié)束