2019-2020年高考英語一輪 短文改錯、書面表達訓(xùn)練（2）短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上劃一個勾（）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。A foreign university exhibition fair held at Zhijiang 1._ Hotel on March 18.Over 50 universities from 10 countries2._ open their doors to students who eager to go abroad to 3._ continuing their further study. More and more middle school 4._ students have joined in the tide of going abroad. The 5._ lower-aged group have bee the new highlight of this tide. 6._ And whether early entry into international education means 7._ better education nor it pushes the young to leave their family 8._ too early to discipline himself is discussed a lot by both 9._ parents and educators. How do you think of this tide of 10._ going abroad?參考答案1. exhibition是held的承受者,應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài),因此須在之前加was。2. 本題是正確的。3. be eager to do sth.為固定搭配,意為“渴望做某事”故在eager之前加are。4. to continue their further study是動詞不定式做目的狀語，之后應(yīng)用動詞原型，故將continuing改成continue。5. join in 通常用來表示加入正在進行的某一項活動， 而join意指加入到某一行列中來，故去掉in。6. group為單數(shù)名詞，故把have改成has。7. 根據(jù)上下文的邏輯意義判斷，此處是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而非并列關(guān)系，故把and改成but。8. whetheror為固定搭配，故把nor改成or。9. 前文the young是指“年輕人們”，是復(fù)數(shù)，故把himself改成themselves。10. 問你覺得什么怎么樣應(yīng)用what do you think of，而不用 how故把how改成what。*結(jié)束良好的人際關(guān)系是構(gòu)建和諧社會的關(guān)鍵。假設(shè)你是李華，最近你校組織學(xué)生圍繞“中學(xué)生如何交友？”這一話題展開討論。請根據(jù)下表的提示，為某英語報的“Voice Your Opinions”欄目寫一篇稿件，反映你們討論的情況，并談?wù)勀銓θ绾谓挥训目捶?。為何交友建立良好的人際關(guān)系，構(gòu)建和諧社會交友對象學(xué)習(xí)上互相學(xué)習(xí)，共同進步生活上互相幫助，擺脫煩惱情感上互相交流，同甘共苦如何交友（提出你的建議）注意：1對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；2詞數(shù)120左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3參考詞匯：和諧的harmoniousRecently we students had a heated discussion on how to make friends._3. 參考范文：Recently_we_students_had_a_heated_discussion_on_how_to_make_friends.As well all know，good relationship plays an important role in building a harmonious society.Many of us think we should make friends with those who can help us with our studies so that we can learn from each other and make greater progress.Others believe they should have friends who can help them deal with some problems in life.Still others hold that they should have friends who are willing to listen to them and share their joys and sorrows.In my opinion，to make friends，we should be friendly and helpful to others.Besides，we should learn to care about others and listen to them patiently.In brief，true friends are like sunshine that brightens our life.*結(jié)束.（四川卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個溝（）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正；此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞。并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66. Morning and was always late with work. His boss wanted to 67. fire him if he didnt start ing on time,but he went to 68. the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69. medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70. The man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before 71. the alam had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72. breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he 73. said ,”that medicine really works!”Im pleasing to hear 74. it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?” 【答案】66、改troubles為trouble 67、改with 為for 68、改but 為so 69、去a 70、改them 為it 71、改wake為waking 72、改properly為proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing為pleased 75、*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達講義：議論文寫作5誠實有益(It Pays to Be Honest)1當前社會上存在許多不誠實的現(xiàn)象。2誠實利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實。這是一篇論說文，從題目看，應(yīng)從正面論證誠實的益處。第一段，舉例說明在社會上存在的諸多不誠實現(xiàn)象，給社會和個人都造成了極大的傷害。第二段，從正面說明誠實既利人又利己，通過舉例說明做人應(yīng)該誠實。參考范文：As society and economy develop, dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us. Manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make more profit. Doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients benefit. Students may cheat on exams for better scores. As a matter of fact, dishonesty has bee so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty.However, it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself and to others. By being honest, manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers, which in the long run generates more profit. By telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions, doctors and nurses enhance their own credibility and honor their profession. By giving honest answers to questions, not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses, but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well. Therefore, it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be honest.*結(jié)束作文（*）下圖是你在從部隊回家探親路上發(fā)生的一個故事，時間為3月20日，星期三，天氣陰。請用英語以日記的形式敘述一下此故事。字數(shù)：100120之間。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 參考范文March 20, Wednesday Cloudy I joined the Army two years ago. This was the first time l went home to see my parents. I was very glad. When I walked by the side of a river, I heard someone shouting Help. Help!" I saw three children struggling in the river. I jumped into the ice water without hesitation. I tried my best to pull two of them onto the bank. but the third was washed away. So I had to swim hack to save him. In the end I pulled the last one onto the hank. They were thankful to me and called me hero.But I think I just did what I should do.*結(jié)束 根據(jù)下面的圖用英語寫一個題為"Such a Help"的小故事。故事須包含所有圖畫內(nèi)容?？梢赃m當增加細節(jié)，使故事連貫。 詞數(shù)：100120個。提示：圖中的小孩名叫Tom，老人叫MrSmith 參考范文Such a HelpOne day Tom was kicking a ball under some trees. He once kicked it so hard that it got stuck between two branches of a tree. He was too short to reach the ball. Just as he was won- dering how he could get it down, a man was passing by with an umbrella in his hand. Tom went up and asked for help. Theman threw his umbrella at the ball and it was knocked down. But unfortunately, the umbrella was caught on the tree. Tom was happy to have his ball back and went away with it. He did not even say a word to the man. How could the poor man get his umbrella back? No one knows.*.(典型題)*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達講義：教育校園話題作文例3：假如你是李華，是華文中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席，為了豐富同學(xué)們的業(yè)余生活，提高同學(xué)們的英語水平，學(xué)生會組織了一個English club，請你寫封邀請信，邀請同學(xué)們參加，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. English club設(shè)立的目的2. English club 要開展的活動3. 邀請大家參加 English club注意：開頭、結(jié)尾已給出;字數(shù)80-120; auditorium 禮堂Boys and girls,Im the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you. To enrich our life on campus and improve our English, we, Student Union, set up an English club. Obviously, besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us. It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding. There goes the plan.It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening. Apart from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening; yet, the specific topics havent been settled. If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.Ill highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club. You will never regret joining us. So, just do it.Student Union*結(jié)束 (201*河北部分重點聯(lián)考)Dear Anish，Here are the information about Manchester University.1._It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3._or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4._Im sure you will find one you like it. I know you5._are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6._see that there is anything on their website(網(wǎng)址).7._Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8._when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9._has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10._forward to seeing you again.See you soon.Peter答案與解析：1areisinformation是不可數(shù)名詞，謂語動詞應(yīng)使用單數(shù)形式。2去掉farfar通常不與表示具體距離的數(shù)詞連用。34coursecourses根據(jù)句中的all sorts of可知，這里要表示的是各種各樣的課程，因此應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。5去掉it“(that) you like”是定語從句，修飾先行詞one。在從句中，關(guān)系代詞that作like的賓語，所以it多余。6particularparticularlyinterested是形容詞，應(yīng)使用副詞修飾。7thatif/whether根據(jù)上一句中的內(nèi)容可知這里的意思是看網(wǎng)絡(luò)上“是否”有相關(guān)信息。8meet前加to此處是不定式表示目的。9arrivedarrive如果主句是一般將來時，時間狀語從句通常用一般現(xiàn)在時。10orand此處是“both.and.”結(jié)構(gòu)，表示“兩者都”。*結(jié)束