Module 6 The Tang Poems寫作園地-詩(shī)歌評(píng)論 感悟范文閱讀下面這首小詩(shī)，然后按要求與提示寫一篇短文。A Poem of an Iraqi ChildMum is tearing.Dad, where did you go?I am scared from heart to soul.Mum and I needed you so much.But what happened? People say that I am too young to know.I heard the terrible sound and smelled the smoke.Dad, e back.But what happened? I dont know.Mum and I love you so much.Dad, where did you go?She says you will be back.Mum and I missed you so much.With good news and hope.要求與提示：1簡(jiǎn)述小詩(shī)內(nèi)容。(詩(shī)中以一個(gè)小孩的口吻表明：伊拉克處于戰(zhàn)亂之中，戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)給伊拉克人民帶來極大的痛苦)2簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀銉?nèi)心的感受。(小詩(shī)很感人，和平對(duì)于國(guó)家、人民是多么重要)3從欣賞的角度談?wù)勀銓?duì)這首詩(shī)的看法。(語言簡(jiǎn)明扼要，但內(nèi)涵豐富。體現(xiàn)出了他們心里充滿著對(duì)和平的希望)4可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象。5詞數(shù)：不少于100詞。范文This is a poem written by an Iraqi child. We are shown that Iraq is at war and the boys father has gone to the battlefield for freedom. Iraqi people are suffering a lot from the war. They are longing for peace. To a small child war seems meaningless, but father and family mean much to him. The poem touches me deeply. One obvious meaning of the poem is how much peace means to a country and its people. Although the description is simple and to the point, the meaning of the poem is rich. They have to be separated at the moment, but they still have hope in their mind. They believe victory will belong to them and they are looking forward to the day.技法討論本模塊寫作任務(wù)是寫一首詩(shī)歌評(píng)論，旨在詩(shī)評(píng)的寫作，大致可分為以下幾個(gè)步驟：1簡(jiǎn)述詩(shī)歌內(nèi)容。當(dāng)然這必須建立在很好地把握原詩(shī)主旨的基礎(chǔ)之上，而非羅列原詩(shī)的詩(shī)句。2談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋Ｒ皇缀玫脑?shī)歌，自然有動(dòng)人之處?？蓚?cè)重詩(shī)中最打動(dòng)你的某一方面抒發(fā)自己的感想。3評(píng)價(jià)詩(shī)歌的意義或作用。這一部分只是稍作點(diǎn)評(píng)即可，無需過多發(fā)揮。黃金表達(dá)1This is a poem written by ., who is famous as .2Were shown that .3What moves/touches me most is .4cant pare with .5The reason why I love it is that .亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)一：本文準(zhǔn)確把握了詩(shī)歌中所流露的盼望父親回家，渴望和平的思想情感；夾敘夾議，語言流暢，很好的完成了寫作目的。亮點(diǎn)二：文中使用了一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如，過去分詞短語作狀語，a poem written by an Iraqi child；還使用了讓步狀語從句，Although the description is simple and to the point，the meaning of the poem is rich.使文章銜接自然，句式結(jié)構(gòu)不單調(diào)，使文章富于變化。類文演練題目：請(qǐng)閱讀唐朝詩(shī)人李白的贈(zèng)汪倫，體會(huì)它的意境，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?zèng)汪倫李白李白乘舟將欲行，忽聞岸上踏歌聲。桃花潭水深千尺，不及汪倫送我情。To Wang LunIm on board; Were about to sail，When theres stamping and singing on shore；Peach Blossom Pool is a thousand feet deep，Yet not so deep, Wang Lun, as your love for me.要求：1不得照抄短詩(shī)原文；2必須結(jié)合短詩(shī)的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開；3必須突出短詩(shī)主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；4短文不能寫成詩(shī)歌形式；5詞數(shù)：120個(gè)左右。_聯(lián)想詞匯1. 由書寫_答案：be written by2. 在離別時(shí)刻 _答案：at this leaving moment3. 激動(dòng)做某事 _答案：be excited to do sth.4. 表達(dá)友誼 _答案：express ones friendship連詞成句1. 贈(zèng)汪倫是由杰出詩(shī)人李白寫的。To Wang Lun _.答案：is written by Li Bai, an outstanding poem in history2. 在離別時(shí)刻，李白見到他最好的朋友很激動(dòng)。_， Li Bai _ to see his best friend.答案：At the leaving moment; is excited3. 語言難以表達(dá)他們的友誼。No words can _.答案：express their friendship4. 我喜歡這首詩(shī)，是因?yàn)樗苁刮乙庾R(shí)到友誼是很有價(jià)值的。The reason _ is that it makes me realise _.答案：why I love it; how valuable friendship is連句成章_答案：To Wang Lun is written by Li Bai who among other poets stands out in the halls of glory.One day, Li Bai goes on board. He is about to sail when theres stamping and singing on shore.Oh! Here es Wang Lun to see him off, who is Li Bais best friend. Li Bai is very excited to see his best friend at this leaving moment. But he is sad, too. So he cant say a simple sentence. He knows that words cant express their friendship. Although the Peach Blossom Pool is one thousand feet deep, it cant match Wang Luns love for him.I love this poem, because it makes me realize that friendship is valuable and we need true friendship. I hope everyone can find true friends.