Module 2 Highlights of My Senior Year寫(xiě)作園地-事物簡(jiǎn)介：理想的高中 感悟范文某報(bào)社正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以我理想的高中生活為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，以便投稿。短文內(nèi)容必須包括：1你的個(gè)人信息：姓名(李萍)、年齡、所在年級(jí)和班級(jí)、你最喜歡的科目、學(xué)校類(lèi)型、你認(rèn)為假期多長(zhǎng)最為合理。2你最喜歡參加什么樣的課外活動(dòng)小組以及原因。3你理想的學(xué)校中最重要的是什么。為什么？注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2參考詞匯：intellectual智力的。范文My Ideal Senior High School LifeMy name is Li Ping. Im seventeen and Im in Class One，Grade Two of senior high school. I like maths, physics, chemistry and English best. I prefer a large school to a small one. As far as Im concerned, the vacation should be about a month.I like petitive sports, so I think my ideal high school should have such afterschool clubs as Basketball Club, Debating Club, Running Club and so on. In this way I can not only build my body but also make many friends.In my view, a school should put importance on both the development of social skills and the development of intellectual skills as every student will make a living by themselves in the future.技法討論本文為半開(kāi)放作文，要求學(xué)生針對(duì)題目要求提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。每一段圍繞一個(gè)中心，切忌一段話寫(xiě)到底。對(duì)于此類(lèi)作文，同學(xué)們要在用詞準(zhǔn)確的基礎(chǔ)上，言之有物，條理清晰，能自圓其說(shuō)。寫(xiě)此類(lèi)作文時(shí)，通常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。常用句式1. My ideal senior high school is like this.2. It should be an individual school.3. We have a lot of free time to take part in outofclass activities.4. We can borrow books from the library.5. There should be many associations.6. Teachers and students get along well with each other.黃金表達(dá)1要點(diǎn)信息與相比更喜歡 prefer.to.就而言as far as sb./sth.is concerned等等and so on在我看來(lái)in my view/opinion把重點(diǎn)放在上 put importance on.2一句多譯就我而言，假期應(yīng)該是大約一個(gè)月。I think we should have a vacation of about a month.I think there should be a vacation about a month.In my opinion, the vacation should be about a month.As far as I am concerned, the vacation should be about a month.亮點(diǎn)分析：本文亮點(diǎn)頗多，能按照半開(kāi)放性作文的要求提出觀點(diǎn)，并論證觀點(diǎn)，實(shí)為一篇佳作。正確運(yùn)用復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)prefer.to.，not only.but also.準(zhǔn)確使用了本模塊中所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)as far as Im concerned，達(dá)到了學(xué)以致用的目的。and so on, put importance on短語(yǔ)的使用體現(xiàn)了作者較高的寫(xiě)作水平和語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。類(lèi)文演練學(xué)校最近組織了一次中美學(xué)生交流活動(dòng)，你參加其中的“大學(xué)校園生活”討論。聽(tīng)完Mike的發(fā)言之后，你準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿，題目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1以約30個(gè)詞概括Mike的發(fā)言要點(diǎn)；2然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括：(1)對(duì)中學(xué)生活的感受；(2)理想的大學(xué)生活；(3)中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。聯(lián)想詞匯1. 適應(yīng)，調(diào)節(jié)_答案：adjust to2. 過(guò)著忙碌的生活 _答案：live a busy life3. 首先，最重要的是 _答案：above all4. 習(xí)慣于 _答案：get used to5. 積極參加 _答案：take an active part in連詞成句1. _ I dreamed was the exciting life in the college campus.我所夢(mèng)想的是大學(xué)校園里令人興奮的生活。答案：What2. But I must realize that the life in the high school is different from _ in the college.但是我必須要意識(shí)到高中的生活與大學(xué)的生活是不同的。答案：that3. I must get used to _things of my own.我必須習(xí)慣自己處理事情。答案：handling連句成章_One Possible Version：Preparing Myself for College LifeFrom what Mike said I know that though Mike didnt adjust to his life in the college at first, he has overe the various difficulties and got to enjoy the life in the college.In high school I lived a busy life all the day. I spent most of time studying. Then what I dreamed was the exciting life in the college campusmore good facilities, helpful instructors, and above all, more free time to do what I really like.But I must realize that the life in the high school is different from that in the college. In a new place, everything is strange to me. I must learn to study，learn to live on my own and learn to deal with the problems I meet with in the course of growing. I must get used to handling things of my own. For example, municate with my classmates and teachers, make a plan for my study, and take an active part in the campus activities.I think I can prepare myself for college life.