第第7感感 寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)作 生態(tài)文明生態(tài)文明話話題題 導(dǎo)導(dǎo)語(yǔ)語(yǔ) 環(huán)保已經(jīng)成為人們的共識(shí)，尤其我國(guó)生態(tài)環(huán)境問(wèn)題日益突出、資源環(huán)境保護(hù)壓力不斷加大，江西、浙江、福建、四川等省均以生態(tài)環(huán)保為出發(fā)點(diǎn)，故以生態(tài)文明為話題，考查學(xué)生環(huán)保意識(shí)將是一個(gè)不可忽視的熱點(diǎn)。話話題題 必必備備 a good/pleasant environment良好的環(huán)境 air pollution 空氣污染 air quality standard空氣質(zhì)量標(biāo)準(zhǔn) Antarctic Circle南極圈 a snowstorm/sandstorm/windstorm 暴風(fēng)雪(沙塵暴、暴風(fēng)) be polluted被污染 be flooded被淹沒(méi) climate change 氣候變化 carbon dioxide二氧化碳 chemical changes化學(xué)變化必備詞匯必備詞匯： early warning system預(yù)警系統(tǒng) environmental quality環(huán)境質(zhì)量 global warming全球變暖 minus 20 degrees centigrade(20 )零下20 30 degrees centigrade above zero(30 )30 攝氏度 warning center警告中心 water surface水平面 water treatment水治理 water pollution control水污染控制 above/below sea level海平面以上(以下) 1Waste water is being poured continuously into the rivers.污水不斷被排入到河里。 2Furthermore，wherever we go today，we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. 另外，不論我們走到哪里，都會(huì)見(jiàn)到隨意丟棄的垃圾。 3In my opinion，the pollution should be brought under control.依我看，污染應(yīng)該受到控制。 4I think we should develop economy scientificly. 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該科學(xué)地發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)。必備句型必備句型： 5If we go on polluting the world，it wont be fit for us to live in. 如果我們繼續(xù)污染環(huán)境，地球?qū)⒉辉龠m合人類居住。 6If people dont stop polluting the seas and rivers，there will be no fish left. 如果人類不停止污染海洋河流，將不會(huì)再有魚(yú)類存在。 7If the population keeps growing so quickly，there will only be standing room left for us next century! 如果人口繼續(xù)快速增長(zhǎng)，到了下個(gè)世紀(jì)，人類將只有立足之地了。 8Thats a problem we Chinese must pay special attention to.這是我們中國(guó)人尤其要關(guān)注的問(wèn)題。 9Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. 全世界的環(huán)境問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。佳佳作作 賞賞析析 (2012福建卷)假定你是某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)的小記者，以下漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容是你的所見(jiàn)所聞，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿。 內(nèi)容要求： 1描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；2.發(fā)表個(gè)人感想。 注意： 1短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫； 3詞數(shù)120左右； 4文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。 參考詞匯：告示牌sign Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park._ _ 【滿分佳作】 Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. Whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign“No Littering” nearby. What a shame! Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. 【名師點(diǎn)撥】 本文是一篇記敘文，記敘自己的所見(jiàn)所感，故用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，其他時(shí)態(tài)為輔。文章簡(jiǎn)要描述公園的景色，重點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)湖中兩個(gè)人的所作所為與湖邊告示牌的內(nèi)容，最后發(fā)表個(gè)人感想也是文章的一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。高級(jí)句型with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with the sun shining and birds singing，現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)totally ignoring the noticeable sign.作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，倒裝句Only in this way can we live in more comfortable.，以及銜接句whats worse的使用都是本文的亮點(diǎn)。