書(shū)面表達(dá)丟分題詳解（2019 貴州省畢節(jié)中考）每年的 6 月 6 日是我國(guó)的“愛(ài)眼日”，可見(jiàn)保護(hù)中小學(xué)生的視力非常重要，為此，學(xué)校將在英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)期間舉行一場(chǎng)“愛(ài)眼日”英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)視力重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)和建議。內(nèi)容如下：1. 保護(hù)視力的重要性（請(qǐng)寫(xiě) 1 點(diǎn)）；2. 對(duì)保護(hù)視力的建議：（1）閱讀時(shí)注意用眼衛(wèi)生；（2）少用電子產(chǎn)品；（3）常看綠色植物；（4）做眼保健操；（5）多做戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)。要求如下：1. 結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：Sight Day 愛(ài)眼日；electronic products 電子產(chǎn)品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操Dear friends,June 6 is our countrys Sight Day. _Thank you!【參考范文】Dear friends,June 6 is our countrys Sight Day. As we all know, eyes are windows of the soul. Everyone understands the importance of the eyes. But now more and more students are getting near sighted. So how to protect eyes still remains a question. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading. You should keep the book about a foot away from you. After reading for an hour or two, youd better have a rest by working in the distance or looking at the green plants to make your eye relax. You ought to remember not to read in dim light or in the sun. Dont read in a moving bus or in bed. Besides, try to use less electric products. Whats more, doing eye-protecting exercises will help you keep good eye sight. Last but not least, we can also try to do more exercise in our spare time.Only by doing these simple things can we keep good eyesight.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān) 寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等?！緦?xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：As we all know據(jù)我們所知；more and more,越來(lái)越多的；look at看看；ought to應(yīng)該。用了here be和祈使句句型，如： Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.和Dont read in a moving bus or in bed.用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，如：You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading.增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。查漏補(bǔ)缺1. 動(dòng)筆之前，認(rèn)真審題中考考試說(shuō)明指出，書(shū)面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫(huà)面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫(huà)、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。2. 圍繞中心，擬定提綱書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則有四條：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；（2）運(yùn)用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量；（3）運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；（4）上下文的連貫性。由此可見(jiàn)，要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱。寫(xiě)作時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題。書(shū)面表達(dá)，內(nèi)容廣泛，題材多樣，要弄清考題的要求是寫(xiě)人、敘事、介紹、評(píng)論、圖表、書(shū)信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫(xiě)縮寫(xiě)。如果是日記，要寫(xiě)清年、月、日和天氣情況；如果是書(shū)信，則要注意書(shū)信的格式，注意短文詞數(shù)不要低于或超過(guò)規(guī)定的詞數(shù)太多。3. 語(yǔ)言通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確（1）避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。（2）多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫(xiě)人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問(wèn)句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。（3）注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。主謂語(yǔ)要一致，謂語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和主語(yǔ)一致。注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫(xiě)成a。注意拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)要特別注意漢英的不同，例如：漢語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)句號(hào)。.省略號(hào).頓號(hào)、無(wú)（5）描寫(xiě)人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具體，例如：外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking .服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black .內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested .感情描寫(xiě)：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout .動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch .（6）上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫(xiě)好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡詞的用法：表示并列關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：and, as well as, or .表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：but, yet, however .表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that .表示空間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside .表示比較關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as .表示對(duì)照關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though .表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again .表示因果關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result .表示解釋說(shuō)明的過(guò)渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually .表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過(guò)渡詞：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important .表示目的的過(guò)渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, .表示列舉的過(guò)渡詞：for example, such as .表示總結(jié)性的過(guò)渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking .4. 不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話：錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)?？傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。迂回而行當(dāng)漢語(yǔ)詞義不會(huì)用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)時(shí)，可以想一個(gè)與這個(gè)漢語(yǔ)詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴(kuò)展思路，然后從英語(yǔ)中找出一個(gè)與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。小詞大用漢語(yǔ)中有些語(yǔ)意看來(lái)很復(fù)雜很文雅，但在英語(yǔ)中可用一些常用詞表達(dá)。下面這些詞可能在你的書(shū)面表達(dá)中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。借花獻(xiàn)佛有時(shí)書(shū)面表達(dá)中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因?yàn)閯倓傋鲞^(guò)題，記憶猶新，那么就可信手拈來(lái)，為我所用。5. 錦上添花，量力而行如果你還有時(shí)間和精力，想把書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)得更好，那么，請(qǐng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：句型多樣化，不要I（We）. 到底，使人覺(jué)得乏味。適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句。適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ)，烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下?tīng)钫Z(yǔ)在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。上下句子緊接時(shí)，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節(jié)省篇幅。6. 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，卷面整潔字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認(rèn)，要保持卷面的整潔。7. 寫(xiě)完之后，勿忘檢查中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此，改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來(lái)給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：格式是否有錯(cuò)。拼寫(xiě)有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。人稱是否用錯(cuò)。【注意】此時(shí)不宜在卷面上作較大的改動(dòng)，以免顧此失彼，影響全局?？傊?，只要平時(shí)同學(xué)們多練習(xí)寫(xiě)作并有意運(yùn)用上述方法和技巧，合理分配時(shí)間，在中考時(shí)一定能寫(xiě)出高質(zhì)量的作文，得到令人滿意的考分。中考題演練（一）（2019 廣西河池中考）“人生沒(méi)有彩排，生命沒(méi)有重來(lái)”，你平安、健康、快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬學(xué)校將舉辦一場(chǎng)以“Keep away from the danger!” 為主題的英文演講比賽。假如你是王雷同學(xué)，大家推選你參加這次比賽。請(qǐng)跟進(jìn)以下思維導(dǎo)圖提示，寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿。寫(xiě)作提示：寫(xiě)作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名；2. 所有的提示詞都須用上，包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫：3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚：4. 詞數(shù)100詞左右。(演講稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)Keep away from the danger!Hello! Everyone, Im Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustnt go swimming without our parents or teachers permission._In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!Thats all. Thank you for listening!【參考范文】Keep away from the danger!Hello! Everyone, Im Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustnt go swimming without our parents or teachers permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustnt look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustnt believe whatever they say. Besides, dont meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Dont eat food that goes bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we cant run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and dont fight with them. If someone threatens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!Thats all. Thank you for listening!【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，給我們介紹了生活中應(yīng)如何遠(yuǎn)離危險(xiǎn)，保證我們的安全。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，提示詞都使用上了。文章中從六個(gè)方面進(jìn)行了具體的介紹，每個(gè)方面前都有表示順序的詞First, Second Last but not least等，使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，敘述有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?！緦?xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】文章中使用了簡(jiǎn)單句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、祈使句等結(jié)構(gòu)，句式多變，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、清楚。文章中使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustn't look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn't believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and don't fight with them.、If someone threatens you, call for help.、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.等。（二）（2019 大慶中考）文娛、體育、戶外等豐富多彩的課外活動(dòng)為我們的生活增添了生機(jī)和活力。請(qǐng)以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”為題，為校園專欄寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件。內(nèi)容包括：1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述你參加過(guò)的一項(xiàng)課外活動(dòng)；2. 該課外活動(dòng)給你帶來(lái)的收獲及感受(交朋友;放松自我)。寫(xiě)作要求：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文章不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱與姓名。After-class Activities Make My Life ColorfulNowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important _【參考范文】After-class Activities Make My Life ColorfulNowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.In the volleyball club, I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇話題作文，讓我們寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱，注意各種時(shí)態(tài)的交替運(yùn)用。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：簡(jiǎn)要描述你參加過(guò)的一項(xiàng)課外活動(dòng)，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；你參加過(guò)的課外活動(dòng)給你帶來(lái)的收獲和感受，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主；最后總結(jié)自己的心得體會(huì)?！緦?xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】高分句型一：I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我習(xí)慣放學(xué)后打排球。be used to doing sth.習(xí)慣于做某事。高分句型二：And it is also a good way to relax myself. 這也是放松自己的好方法。動(dòng)詞不定式to relax myself用作后置定語(yǔ)。高分句型三：All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 總之，課外活動(dòng)使我的生活更加豐富多彩，更有意義。more colorful and meaningful用作my life的賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)。模擬題檢測(cè)（一）（2019河南中考模擬）因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門(mén)的高度重視。假若你是來(lái)自九年級(jí)三班的李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份不少于80詞的倡議書(shū)。建議大家積極多參加體育活動(dòng)，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。要點(diǎn)：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy.2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming.3. 請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開(kāi)展體育鍛煉看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. _Li Hua【參考范文】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we dont take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,lets take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either.or., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。（二）（2019·山東濱州質(zhì)檢題）假如你是小偉。你的室友大明昨天接到你朋友Maria的電話。她正在研究中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，需要你的幫助。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)大明所留便條的內(nèi)容，給Maria回一封電子郵件。Xiaowei,Your friend Maria made a phone call to you yesterday. She wants to know the traditional Chinese festivalthe Mid-Autumn Festival. She wants you to tell her why we like it and when it is . She also wonders how you spent your Mid-Autumn Festival this year?. Send an email to her at maria1988.Daming注意：1）電子郵件的格式和開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)（80-100詞）；2）表達(dá)完整、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔；3）提示詞：農(nóng)歷lunar 家人團(tuán)聚family reunionTo: maria1988Subject: the Mid-Autumn FestivalDear Maria,How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival -the Mid-Autumn Festival._Love,Xiaowei【參考范文】Dear Maria,How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival -the Mid-Autumn Festival. Mid Autumn Festival is on the 15th day of the eighth month of the Chinese lunar calendar. It is a Chinese traditional holiday with hundreds of years history. For Chinese, the moon is a symbol of many good things. The character, moon, is often used to name places and people. Some great poets, such as Li Bai, used the moon to express their ideas about love for family. To be the most important, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a great time for family reunion. My favorite part of the Mid-Autumn Festival is that I can enjoy mooncakes and appreciate the moon with my family. This festival, my grandparents could not stay with us because they were in the USA with my uncles family. But they wrote letters to me showing their deep love for me. It was a pity they were not here, but I was still very happy because my dear parents were with me.Love,Xiaowei【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】首先能夠知道本文要求寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，因此注意郵件的格式；給出一個(gè)便條，便條中提出Maria想了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。文中提到why we like it和when it is，要對(duì)為什么我們喜歡它以及中秋節(jié)時(shí)間進(jìn)行介紹，最后Maria想要知道大明是怎么樣過(guò)中秋節(jié)的。因此內(nèi)容上不要忘記這三個(gè)方面，條理要清晰。本例文以第一人稱書(shū)寫(xiě)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。首先對(duì)中秋節(jié)介紹日期和簡(jiǎn)介，以及為什么喜歡中秋節(jié)。然后用一般過(guò)去時(shí)講述這個(gè)中秋節(jié)我家是怎么慶祝的。上下文連詞使用得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰。【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】本文中作者運(yùn)用以下短語(yǔ)hundreds of；a symbol of；such as；還有不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)；To be the most important；stay with。句子的銜接上連詞的使用。如that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句My favorite part of the Mid-Autumn Festival is that I can enjoy mooncakes and appreciate the moon with my family. 和because引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等：This festival, my grandparents could not stay with us because they were in the USA with my uncles family.（三）（20192020山東中考質(zhì)檢題）書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述故事內(nèi)容。提示詞：plate 盤(pán)子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩筆， color 給上色， _ 【參考范文】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, "Why not turn them into paintings?" Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)和句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子連貫流暢?！緦?xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這是一篇看圖作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫(huà)敘述一個(gè)故事。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題和一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的應(yīng)用，使短文內(nèi)容表達(dá)豐富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。（四）（20192020學(xué)年度質(zhì)檢題）請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示介紹Tom過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的情況,并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶皩?duì)他的建議。過(guò)去喜歡看書(shū),功課好,花很多時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)和鍛煉。現(xiàn)在因沉溺于用手機(jī)發(fā)信息和玩電腦游戲?qū)е聦?duì)學(xué)習(xí)沒(méi)興趣,上課時(shí)不專心聽(tīng)課你的看法玩手機(jī)可以使人放松,但你的建議至少兩點(diǎn)要求:1. 80-100詞:短文必須包括表格中的信息,條理清晰,觀點(diǎn)明確,意思連貫。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校的名稱及其他相關(guān)信息。 【參考答案】Tom has changed a lot in the last few years.He used to like reading books and do well in his lessons. He also spent much time studying and doing exercises at school. But now he is so crazy about sending messages and playing computer games by using mobile phones that he has no interest in his school work and doesnt listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Perhaps playing with mobile phones can make him relaxed, but if he spends too much time on it, he will have less time to study. He should pay more attention to his school work. Why not take part in some after-school activities when he feels bored? Why not spend more free time chatting face-to-face with his friends?【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意要包括提示的四個(gè)內(nèi)容：第一部分Tom的過(guò)去；第二部分Tom的現(xiàn)在；第三部分你的看法；第四部分你對(duì)Tom的建議。例文采用兩段式；用第三人稱敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)三種時(shí)態(tài)結(jié)合。敘述完整，條例清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確，意思連貫。【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】短語(yǔ)：in the last few years；do well in；spenddoing ；be crasy about；make sb ；pay attention to；take part in；chat with。句型：used to do過(guò)去常常干某事； Why not do？提建議的句型語(yǔ)法：if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句