題目要求題目要求(2011陜西高考陜西高考)假定你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫假定你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)生家長博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根的學(xué)生家長博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)據(jù) 、 和和 ，給這位家長回復(fù)。，給這位家長回復(fù)。 Im the mother of a fourteenyearold. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong? 博客內(nèi)容博客內(nèi)容寫作要點(diǎn)寫作要點(diǎn)要求要求寫作要點(diǎn)：寫作要點(diǎn)：1表明自己的看法；表明自己的看法；2陳述自己的理由陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明可舉例說明)；3提出至少兩條建議。提出至少兩條建議。要求：要求：1短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。2短文詞數(shù)不少于短文詞數(shù)不少于100(不含已寫好的部分不含已寫好的部分)。3內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。4書寫需清晰、工整。書寫需清晰、工整。Hi, TigerMom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is _技法指導(dǎo)技法指導(dǎo) 議論文是用來論述某個(gè)道理、闡明某種觀點(diǎn)的一種文議論文是用來論述某個(gè)道理、闡明某種觀點(diǎn)的一種文體。它通過擺事實(shí)、講道理、辨是非來表達(dá)作者的見解和主體。它通過擺事實(shí)、講道理、辨是非來表達(dá)作者的見解和主張。議論文可分為許多種類，但中學(xué)英語書面表達(dá)所要求的張。議論文可分為許多種類，但中學(xué)英語書面表達(dá)所要求的議論文是一種限定的寫作，其論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證都比較明確。議論文是一種限定的寫作，其論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證都比較明確。有的文章提出問題，如：有的文章提出問題，如：為什么？為什么？怎么辦？怎么辦？該該采取什么措施？考生可以結(jié)合采取什么措施？考生可以結(jié)合問題要求，闡述相關(guān)的觀點(diǎn)，問題要求，闡述相關(guān)的觀點(diǎn)，切忌隨意發(fā)揮。近幾年的高考書面表達(dá)中，其主要命題形式切忌隨意發(fā)揮。近幾年的高考書面表達(dá)中，其主要命題形式是以表格式和提綱式來呈現(xiàn)寫作材料的。是以表格式和提綱式來呈現(xiàn)寫作材料的。基本要求：基本要求：1文章直接闡述事物的道理，明確表露作者的思想觀點(diǎn)。文章直接闡述事物的道理，明確表露作者的思想觀點(diǎn)。2表達(dá)方式以議論為主，輔之以說明、敘述等方式。議論表達(dá)方式以議論為主，輔之以說明、敘述等方式。議論文中的記敘和描寫是為論點(diǎn)提供根據(jù)的。因此，記敘應(yīng)文中的記敘和描寫是為論點(diǎn)提供根據(jù)的。因此，記敘應(yīng)該是概括的，描寫應(yīng)該是簡要的。該是概括的，描寫應(yīng)該是簡要的。3內(nèi)容重在說理，堅(jiān)持?jǐn)[事實(shí)、講道理。內(nèi)容重在說理，堅(jiān)持?jǐn)[事實(shí)、講道理。4議論文主要包括三個(gè)要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證方法。論議論文主要包括三個(gè)要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證方法。論點(diǎn)是指需要證實(shí)的問題；論證是指闡述道理以理服人；點(diǎn)是指需要證實(shí)的問題；論證是指闡述道理以理服人；論據(jù)就是用于論證的具有說服力的事實(shí)和證據(jù)。論點(diǎn)解論據(jù)就是用于論證的具有說服力的事實(shí)和證據(jù)。論點(diǎn)解決決“證明什么證明什么”，論據(jù)解決，論據(jù)解決“用什么來證明用什么來證明”，論證解，論證解決決“怎樣證明怎樣證明”。5觀點(diǎn)正確，論據(jù)充分，語言精練，論證合理，有嚴(yán)密的觀點(diǎn)正確，論據(jù)充分，語言精練，論證合理，有嚴(yán)密的邏輯性。邏輯性。6語言應(yīng)該簡練、準(zhǔn)確；盡可能避免使用口語，多用書語言應(yīng)該簡練、準(zhǔn)確；盡可能避免使用口語，多用書面語。面語。第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文謀篇布局謀篇布局黃金模板黃金模板Hi, TigerMom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that _(表明自己表明自己的觀點(diǎn)的觀點(diǎn)). Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. _ (舉例陳舉例陳述自己的理由述自己的理由). So I suggest that _ (提出自己的具體建議提出自己的具體建議). 第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章1而且，懲罰絕不是幫助他們身心發(fā)展的明智選擇。而且，懲罰絕不是幫助他們身心發(fā)展的明智選擇。 Whats more, punishment isnt a wise choice of helping them grow up mentally and physically at all. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.2因此，我建議你采取你朋友們的建議。因此，我建議你采取你朋友們的建議。 Therefore, I advise you to take your friends advice. So I suggest that you take your friends advice. 第三步串句成文，保證流暢第三步串句成文，保證流暢Hi, TigerMom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. ， So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do. 作為一名中學(xué)生，平時(shí)你是否愿意和自己的老師交流？作為一名中學(xué)生，平時(shí)你是否愿意和自己的老師交流？你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是什么樣的？如何才能建立這你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是什么樣的？如何才能建立這種關(guān)系？請(qǐng)寫一篇種關(guān)系？請(qǐng)寫一篇120150詞的短文，就這一話題談?wù)勛栽~的短文，就這一話題談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。己的看法。注意：注意?可以使用一些具體的事例支持你的論點(diǎn)；可以使用一些具體的事例支持你的論點(diǎn)；2標(biāo)題自擬。標(biāo)題自擬。_參考范文：參考范文： Love and Concern Make an Ideal Relationship Students are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the study of the students. But I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. They show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot. In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care, understanding, and respect, so they can exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust their teachers and give voice to their feeling frankly. Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.